【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

9 s" x% Q! p) Q: W一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
Making the sky glitter like gold,
8 [- n$ K2 n1 |; ~" m3 s2 ?夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

5 \% g, Z5 k  ~% RWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! c( c5 D# N. w' s# Y凝视明月 我心欢畅
4 q4 X( m+ M- D2 _6 sThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
月光闪烁 在我眼中
- F, j0 i% [' L+ c( Y* LThe sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空

# d# U  p- t) i6 e, d. ^  _With the moon kissing it every night
- }- F5 i4 h. \2 m9 p5 H! A( j看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
" Z" H! O6 s2 G5 ^% \& a夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
4 r2 @: J) k0 }0 w. q$ U我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
You needn’t fear anything
* V% T9 P# l2 o/ i; t0 j* l# C( M4 i怕这怕那 又是何苦
4 n5 C+ P" B6 S+ Q' K- X4 TMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 m, s4 T2 \8 [$ l$ i我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
) B( h! T' g+ L: f% yI really want to know just how much you love me
. a2 Z$ b. Y2 l  R1 j# K# d真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
! |* q. @7 ?$ c/ ^3 P2 mI love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比
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Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 Y5 h, {$ l. v6 P能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
, Y# M( X0 P2 ^+ q7 ?2 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
, r- ]! e2 u2 x0 |我真想看透你的心
5 ?) H% d: ~- M& e1 X* KI invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
8 d: R* T2 c  e4 i$ y1 l3 xTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
) k5 b$ ?8 i) v5 \  Y1 ^/ e若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
2 x: l, f& L  jI’m still filled with fear
* t& J) t) _: ?( }  m: K# v可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
" L* I8 J) }  D2 W, m真恨不能 以死明志
0 z8 N4 K0 @0 t7 A5 DI only have one tongue
$ N& D7 K1 n. s我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
. W2 `: h8 ~( dIt’s nothing close to 100,000
! {! ~2 u2 x; z3 r4 r也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
9 a! D, N, S. F% n7 yYour speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
2 ?( F# s: f- `6 DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
1 E+ P$ x& ?) U. h9 F若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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1 F+ v: Q" E6 [9 A  U. [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' u# H4 P- J1 |9 y8 w* B5 W- `) {从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 b2 c. @  _$ G爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
4 H2 j6 i3 n8 c; m" zI already loved you with all my heart
从此别无他意
  |7 r2 H! k: y: H, A; kWe meet and talk everyday,
你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ N9 K% m9 I* C) @9 q奈何从未谈及内心
: w  k  r6 }9 k# p, T( uIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
6 s: S* N# {: u; }, GI would probably know how you feel
$ h$ N) V" g2 r5 |9 C) F  i8 C1 W或能知你心意
Love… just the word love
4 d6 S- ^' M4 M' ^9 W爱呀，爱就一个字
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 q3 G& R6 }! R! Y6 m! I3 Y) X为何如此难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
# ~+ ?+ ^* O$ fBut I never did
! O7 F; r; a0 N+ W- B- l+ l: [却始终未曾出口
# a. ~2 R9 {9 A, uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
- ~5 _# z* i' K) c) }If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' U) q5 |9 q- |/ j! y今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
9 `0 W6 s8 x( h1 @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 Q8 K3 y* e2 G5 U. g从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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( M" R! S, k1 ALove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
* s: [. w5 x8 vWhy is it so difficult to express?
9 H/ j9 N# ^) F; n8 `. X# [为何如何难言？
3 I" a% N! b. G% _- e8 @2 ?6 [I want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
8 }/ f/ V2 `9 @却始终未曾出口
) h! t, M, d* G+ |& p- BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
* v  V" P( F( Q6 MIf today isn’t too late,
- I  y, X! U+ o0 q假如还不太迟
$ B5 u* k, G7 II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
- b7 I7 {$ j; F/ B; d( ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! {" }2 x' z% R. @6 f9 p9 Y) V不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
, P+ i1 j1 \4 j可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
# Z$ G$ S1 I/ M4 I5 x) u从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

Can I entrust it to you?
9 |2 k) b. s1 t# Z7 D* T可否将它托付于你？
$ L! g! R3 t% PEntrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
5 w; T+ {; [, }$ u  T刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
7 T# l6 k) m( _9 A+ e& U! k/ w老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

, N* S5 j) m- H% E$ }4 e6 e) `$ A不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。