【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# ]) L3 I0 k( ?$ ]The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- o+ \8 }0 O8 U, l! T2 vThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' O0 I- G- A& W. v! ?I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
! r; ~& D/ Z( ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
# r& M0 A% e, z# |The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
7 }6 C( }- G3 E+ l- \6 A! l5 ?+ ?I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& K$ E! k* L7 A" M( |I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 m# u1 |5 E( i" f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
! V" u" B/ K) |3 a<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
7 ]: G4 S) K# `7 ?" n; l+ i+ ~3 B& D<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
* T0 w9 R' U  v( N3 K& k& z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ p- c: Q" Z' F% _<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; _& m6 V2 m# E' z# Q<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. `2 N& B) H2 i' n* e6 h7 ]( U<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
+ p- z3 J3 U, `5 y. E, k<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( ]" T$ r7 E1 M2 _2 N<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 t. T  v2 y2 A) x4 i/ o<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( _4 D, X6 X( m4 U, k<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
, q: ^8 L3 ?# d4 _<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ C' ?9 I& p; ^: k6 l& g<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
" ?) D6 B7 Y1 i9 u<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
$ o- I% G2 k: D0 o' I! X<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 f/ `5 q' B) _, T& k<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 R8 w, P$ _+ h# D3 i9 L<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' k3 H4 K9 j! F7 u7 f<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( L3 j" `4 V# {. P1 v+ r<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
# ~* N1 X9 I# p2 ^$ D4 j- K7 \<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( \4 Y& O- k2 A& t: y/ p' f<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 T% S# o( z& Z9 t9 R<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" u/ \: A4 y4 _, `4 t<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 `+ m: o  N- ~  S+ o& z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
. ^7 ]7 G. E7 t! G# @1 @<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  D; f7 z! A1 q9 L9 u: M<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- h$ V" T6 U3 |% z! P- E<P>I only have one tongue </P>
5 f- w- p  i2 Z/ Q5 y. u( e<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, O& m& h2 [- l6 o1 i, h  k0 N8 \<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" i" Q$ M9 k) }3 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' U4 }5 V- E) h. v4 [. i<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 v: `0 H3 f) [  y; B<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; A9 ^' C0 z- D$ y9 u8 ^  \' l我请你剖开它

& @" z9 B3 y* }, h+ C  k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>