【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 O/ I' W5 V" n) AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 \9 w4 j* z" \% b2 r/ BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
, H* P; q+ U- pMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% {( G8 E( j' M! qThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 f- b4 Q2 W- l- b: wI’m still filled with fear
' L& _# Z; [/ _, J: r* ^* E# _1 [5 XYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
0 }, v! p* j8 x0 J4 m6 a2 c& ]/ PWith such a tongue as yours,
' [1 u1 G) C* q6 C9 t0 FYour speech can’t even keep up with it
7 X% s$ L6 t( L( J/ p1 M. ?& t! D9 wIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 N7 l7 [  p1 ]- v; t( r: NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: b" m; W0 Y, w5 b& o+ y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
7 j1 C3 r+ M/ ?, q6 y6 x* S2 {* U$ [<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, [; u1 n* X9 P# V8 j" d! O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  B% D/ I# ]- h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# \7 ~' c( X( d' d% a<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 j) w6 V9 M9 _$ r+ o' a' {* Y; k<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 q8 L7 }+ H& d1 j! t4 p9 G1 l% ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 i0 M1 C7 i' T$ F<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; h. Z7 u. O0 r6 e! I<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) F& U9 h$ B) l) X8 I7 T3 W& y<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, W* V% X0 Y, E: K8 Z2 p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: `( \. f+ W! }) L: d/ H' h, y<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- M3 P/ d. [# j4 f: ^+ R, k4 V<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 X- J% x$ M7 w1 O6 a5 Z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
! j5 l9 _, @7 r8 A; E/ D" b<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- T8 O1 ~4 L% w: {1 r  i6 r: V, R4 C9 \<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 F$ M( R# ], M1 T- W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
; w: \0 C7 Z5 z4 Y# u) ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( e( g* a  k! d# e<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; f& |/ |! _( V- {<P>I regret not dying</P>
: ?9 B! U% f; B  m: D. ?4 d<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 ^& E4 R8 ~) y+ h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 K+ _- L% \" ^9 Z<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
( E% \: s5 C# \, l<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) q- m6 U0 ?7 x<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 X+ J( Q7 D. ^' q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ o  I) s6 Y  ~+ g<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>