【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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2 f3 q6 N/ t# B歌词我附在后面。
3 N2 \! Q  Z* s8 s9 \4 U, I' IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! x0 J+ R) e8 r9 L- mThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
  F/ c& ~4 {( j: oSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: l3 z; h- |- U$ LYou needn’t fear anything
% y- G# ~/ V$ @: L  }My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
$ r- {1 p+ _2 U! C. R7 a0 ^Nothing can compare to my love
+ j0 w; \# V/ k6 ZCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 J" s# t. E/ jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
6 Q9 ]% }* o- I% FYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" g) D8 [: {9 V, u$ WI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* s" \# _: u) F2 K* fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" `' q- d1 ^5 a* D; BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
) x: `! ]9 ^3 X) b* u: U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* {) o. ?; e$ b% q# P, G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
" ~8 Q$ {' c! J9 e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 o! Y# G5 f) W5 z2 q' W" ^/ H<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
& h/ `) w0 W) J. J! c<P>你无需担心</P>
8 D0 U2 T; ^) {9 b) M1 W. Z<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
' b" v9 \0 }, C, I<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
; b4 x" \  w: K<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; _$ Z5 e: Q6 V6 Z( f9 \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' ^/ `8 z: F! C2 {0 i<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) V0 u* @) v5 f( x- U" p/ s<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
" q4 Q  Q) t( H9 l; S& N* w<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, r* N. L4 ^) \0 m/ m7 e. \<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: Q' E- `  h! ^; p. b2 o<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
. X: m/ f! w; O2 U5 a" q; |& c1 ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. s/ d1 W$ q, s7 ~  k1 W<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
" q+ i! X! g3 h6 c5 t8 p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 @2 s6 F( k% h4 t' a% D<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: T! Q7 Y; r- d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 v' R" K8 I" G% x/ j8 @<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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6 W7 Y( ~* q1 h8 U* t1 ]  | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>