【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
( ~# @/ f4 j6 S& x$ SWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 N: @" r) d/ z7 @! d) zThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
) q) v2 W8 j8 r9 r& P- xThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 N: ?; w8 ?" u6 r6 l# E" w( k" F# N. x" fI love you I love you with all my heart
+ b  b+ a) f. INothing can compare to my love
6 h4 _6 z5 y1 r9 u- {5 zCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
2 o% \( M2 \! i4 g) hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
4 v& l; w& z3 d! n. a; q6 n2 dI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* @% x% M  w4 j% fIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, E) ^% J4 t. y7 ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 a% K8 k( |% {! u% D, ]" @<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
: a+ B, h5 N# D. }! L- r' L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 [' X; R' Z. o- j9 c% U1 V<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 g+ O1 K: U! F/ I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! M/ q1 D6 E+ _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% r" i7 [2 {  Y) }4 {. N( L<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, x3 F: c: f& t6 c  e" |, Y! s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# {% H) w- \' f3 z9 k' p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 l0 c% p: T% A" i+ |5 _, m' ~0 f<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 a7 ~$ g1 d& J' y/ m) j<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
6 r  h8 Z  x  P/ v* B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 L8 H# z5 N+ C, Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( R7 a; g' y/ @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  t9 v1 A3 }5 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
" T  L5 v2 {) ]5 f; J* C<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
' ~. X; q* L7 G! ~# u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% L# G- B1 B' `  W. l) L" w' P  {<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 H4 E& `  J* R. M! c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ l1 H& o& n9 }$ @" f8 i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, [/ u( b; `$ u5 g4 \) s<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 G$ Y3 y! V7 s! \- N$ B. U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# R% P/ |9 r# F) i  U: R<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
; C7 L' Z6 a" L9 s! }<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 R$ `# @& \$ a1 ?) ^( E& W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  k* \4 B) t& o0 ~: s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, z/ \! w2 x0 }( F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
! t9 [6 ~" @3 ~<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 L* u1 {1 D9 f$ I7 z5 R) t<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  A1 f( u: `7 a2 T( ~8 g3 R<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
6 M0 O- R3 o: t0 z+ g+ u  p
似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>