【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) h' M3 M9 }0 M+ p3 W+ C歌词我附在后面。
' a0 T/ F# _6 T- YThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 K# g( }  d, u' a+ ?$ sMaking the sky glitter like gold,
$ q- `+ d% `* P8 b  OWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 T" c% ?. `( }The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& y5 d* q1 u9 @3 i0 uEvery other word you utter is love
; Z7 F% t/ O+ B; O$ uI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
- \9 G0 B5 S/ W) t, dNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" S3 b3 {. v0 `0 HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
' V' g. U2 D% E) d) v2 ~) lI want so much to see inside your heart
! |0 h6 e: D0 @4 S# bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
1 Q" G/ O! f0 v3 E) ^0 iI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 J2 w5 c8 x0 G5 vIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ x3 w, L4 T# X1 aRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 l$ l. k! q& X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" p- U' U& K8 n- Z4 ?<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 a  s9 N7 {2 e6 w. Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 I2 x; o2 g, o<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  u4 d( q' W9 P5 {2 s<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 @' f4 P! k" g. f<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) k* q- E/ J' u3 M, P<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
+ z0 P3 L, z% N1 D/ {) g7 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* v, T$ v7 M* t4 ?- C<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 v' X, R( @% f, ^<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
$ a$ W4 b# i6 |8 Y" K' K* v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! _" D: ]6 Y* F<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% y) Y; l3 H* g7 s! `) G5 k3 R" ]<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
, X" B& o3 K( W) _0 s) r* }$ f<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
! d9 [! h9 t9 D! j; r% r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
1 U2 O  }4 {- M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( h8 b" N) x3 D& t<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; b; U5 ]0 ^) m& I<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 U$ i: p- H! e<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ B! R% k: p7 z2 K<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' Y5 H2 G# ?0 u: x2 V( ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
, x8 m/ K: l8 h6 |5 _; |: l: y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
2 K& {% `5 b# l9 E, B' g+ d<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
5 x' e! d) l" u1 H) y7 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
2 }4 b# H5 X8 D/ M1 {<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 T! k: k& j* h1 a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
) ^  V2 a, t( O( p0 K, J<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
! @$ o$ P3 o* ?1 S9 r' a<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  V; W( }; r5 z; E1 t6 t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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( A6 I. {& i1 v5 f5 m我请你剖开它

$ G3 K; W; R! `  p' x 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>