【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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3 v6 L% {: V8 v$ g# m" |  V歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
. g" m+ g1 T6 W- ^3 {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 A# y' |4 }3 V% h1 m$ ]$ CThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
/ P% n* I) |! i0 f! lThe sky is happy down to its soul
/ {* Q1 I& T. _% tWith the moon kissing it every night
4 w  R: Z) i6 B' ySeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 H4 D$ N) V$ A. ?4 P, P. \Every other word you utter is love
9 ]* [  \& j, T; c( ~% HI really want to know just how much you love me
* H. ?6 G/ Q) @/ J* [5 t- _I love you I love you with all my heart
% Y" C# E' c4 A7 N* w" @! CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, c$ ^1 G. a! D' Q7 J% b8 ?$ HYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) w2 v1 s: c6 P0 {. f& OWith such a tongue as yours,
' A* o' J# ]+ e: b$ |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
0 l1 T5 G1 ]% F0 _5 mIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- z% L# X% w' i; f5 b% s  n4 ]Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
( B7 Z4 t3 ^- T. C; U) Y- r6 p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 k8 U; q1 H' L) K<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
+ U# a' }% i, n  S/ c. v! v<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 g6 m3 u$ }* x<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
3 c. Y  w1 E3 E8 J' T<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# f: {# H, L& D- E* Z<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
2 E% P" ?* b6 K<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% `9 \- \% `/ }9 N; R<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 h/ @* L; ?2 W) {+ \% |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ Y, l& G1 T6 j2 i1 r<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
& q5 Q: K4 H- D4 T) }" g# D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
) B* S. P3 U7 G; ^1 K6 g: b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 U+ Y% V0 s4 E* ~<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* J: V1 ~& w; N- _$ i<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 Z% \3 w- M9 w. g3 ~, j<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 x/ f  U2 Z7 V- a5 r/ f3 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
( [2 K1 v% s1 r4 V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
' P- `+ ]4 D8 P4 r/ p1 C<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
$ l, f, f9 G( Z: A8 F0 A<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
3 G  q( I1 o! h# p$ Y6 y- \<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 f( L7 q; O' F- _" ]+ w<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" G4 }7 N/ M* B: H/ [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 K; ]. p1 S/ c5 U+ @% H+ w<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 U. q3 n  ^4 C* k2 n: n' T: c/ ]* h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 _% L1 J# a4 \( F<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: h, W5 s/ m  w4 l/ b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 [" O: H) s8 ~$ j% a5 _<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

, `$ I, r. V7 Z8 W, X  J我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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& k; A& c5 {% W7 Q% F2 _) m<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>