【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
& |- [, K  x! Q1 s$ W; [Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" n% K2 [' _, S: U0 ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 ~' \- E" E0 \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
2 W- t2 {9 H8 x9 K/ M1 uMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 h8 w! e* P; }Every other word you utter is love
9 ~! R4 W+ @" [4 M$ A+ o" `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
* z" {' N) k+ t" d; L2 pNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
# Y. T' ^" W8 |6 W3 `2 xI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& |& d; {! k5 m  Z6 \With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
) o! b* D- @# ?1 q- C5 w3 C& _- vRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 y5 l$ h$ D2 @8 I  j/ r<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
% P1 ]+ n+ h! J. C( q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ n- k/ N; ?1 H/ J9 X<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. N& d+ ]8 L  K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! y- N% j0 G) Q6 l# F2 f8 M5 w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) q5 m' k7 T* I6 X% u3 Q% G& \" R<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% }5 \# D; m2 }' ]" r<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 N" s- a0 N5 ?# s# o, u# c<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 X' q0 A  E( @<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
# e/ A3 K2 v; S# S# R5 F- W% c/ |  M# a<P>你无需担心</P>
* R1 e! W3 L& q. X( B2 Q' K5 W<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
2 |+ L8 D5 ]% ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 r* X5 `- s2 E7 G- \+ D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
; S5 `8 \& I1 H  D7 S' L4 W# w, ]<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 v+ d* O4 E0 S+ P9 A7 ^& l/ I6 Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 x2 T6 Q% t; t/ K7 O<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 ^- B$ u! x( S1 N<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
- ?' t' Z9 a$ x<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
! k: k; {# C" \, ~4 @<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# J, q# J- c: K5 L1 i* b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 B$ c* e' y  e6 L6 M9 J1 O<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ p& A4 u6 E/ t" o6 \# u<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- I. m' z7 w, v) Z  X6 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ e' q( ^" ~8 y, i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 h2 A6 r% h8 Z) b% B8 M/ E6 ~% W<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
) z5 f: G0 v3 o, ~% k+ t$ U<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  |3 T/ T; Y- M6 A+ A9 ~<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* m' W# B7 Y) r' T* y% D$ i$ V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
$ m5 ^& r$ W6 _9 \5 W4 Q<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, @9 T- I( e. K9 L6 i<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
! S5 S3 v' ~! F0 V- A6 W) D) T
我请你剖开它

6 l1 S3 z% J; e: a7 Y4 b8 j 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>