【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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! Q8 b, F. T6 k歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% Y3 f) W) Y9 W( rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 z4 J* m+ N* R. A: @9 QThe sky is happy down to its soul
. R2 z: l# I! @' OWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 i( o# c/ y) ~9 lIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# D* v3 c3 h$ n- T" [4 PEvery other word you utter is love
6 E  f1 C" g+ ~: ~- c+ eI really want to know just how much you love me
! M9 M9 m8 n. Z: D7 PI love you I love you with all my heart
/ @/ k7 H2 f7 E3 G, j6 iNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  e" E6 O( N+ J5 EThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
$ U& b* z9 `: e1 E+ aYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
+ u, ^$ c" f5 t2 n& m5 {% K9 ]6 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& V' Y6 W, P& u3 mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) W. Z) f. k/ f# I3 b<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ d+ m. [$ R# g: O<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
3 j" D, d9 Y) Y, D8 x<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; j8 _; j2 d+ D* U. b" P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
9 q- f6 w8 R7 Y- b<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% t+ s, u( u- P" ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
0 k2 R7 Z3 G2 u- \6 u/ V2 P<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
/ ]$ @: R6 u: m9 j8 X1 f6 r1 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- v0 G4 A, ~" R8 \7 ~0 Y1 `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ n1 j6 f( d" f) r* b' D' `* f; n<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 k$ i: L1 R/ B$ n4 ~<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
6 U4 c# }3 t$ ]0 \# \* V<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 G- P5 W- V( k; y4 c7 Y1 E$ G* p<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. b: e# C6 R( T& u, g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
  k3 l% l, a& m  \' R/ ~% o1 A. x<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 s4 ?* c* G3 k; Y. t<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
8 F  B+ W3 Z) ?9 q) a) d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' y0 M8 T5 c5 q! T4 ~<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
# q4 R4 z5 O  q<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 o8 c5 B4 ^$ f0 e. H0 @- C% h8 |  l<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: W4 D  D/ V: L. O8 N<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
$ N% g  H3 o7 v! Z- l<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 q/ v7 T7 q) X* f, F/ q- J/ P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 m# S/ b9 c' ^<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. Y3 r/ R' a. c5 X( `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
/ b' }3 S6 P  v# v5 |  d7 f<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
/ v9 Y1 J$ @* O) ]. o8 Z<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; X. i% A, n* k* b- O9 K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 N+ R5 E; g. `+ V5 [9 Q<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
% \1 |  }# ^  [<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: O" ]/ F' K9 N( s, G3 z9 j<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& ~4 i% K3 m% y3 D) n2 U<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 g' @8 ?: D* _! E<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
. ^; `* {# H- b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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* q) w# ^, Y0 y( n# Y 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>