【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) L, f0 r4 u/ H5 Z' BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
5 s; D0 {$ I3 X. SWith the moon kissing it every night
5 }. E4 |4 a( `4 @; k5 D  E* hSeeing the sky content with its love
* q8 m0 L4 B+ a5 }0 {6 bIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
5 A5 }7 P9 \: H3 V; YYou needn’t fear anything
# N4 n1 T; m6 v! JMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 S9 ~* v$ p! _  k/ m' o* PI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  R/ p5 X% Z: t" d( }+ rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
# _% m: {: ~) l  ?3 D2 y4 rI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, V; n7 H1 r# r8 X+ iRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

1 _6 y$ A5 }  u6 f  X<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) {" G" O' W7 L. E, X<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ i; L! Y  \: E; H9 S6 m8 N2 R<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* l" }  [, |1 n$ |# a<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 X( b4 Y1 ^& h. X5 L* O5 u; _0 I  R+ W<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( F0 L$ P! W8 }$ L0 r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; [5 w. X+ e3 Y4 ]3 p<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
  {* C8 Q: s% `. s' E* {7 F: s<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
  v3 o) V- V) X7 `# q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
  ~: ~+ O2 Q  w' `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 u8 X6 x0 D+ ]$ X( \% C; S' @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
# V7 k+ q8 b$ [6 x4 ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# L0 g( J. L; c/ D0 ^+ |8 o; r  C7 u<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
, w. Q! \$ p- a( k3 T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  a- F2 s, E: J" e; x+ w<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# u- `$ [+ f. o' C8 V<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
4 I- c. _0 x: }- t3 H<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
( J( {. p+ p0 C: p% {) n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
5 X/ P% [- p/ p& M9 V6 T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. e/ o) O, l# W0 `+ j% p& w# a* N<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 W" }4 ^; c1 H" h0 W<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ F: ~2 \' @2 ~# X<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! X/ G( l; r0 j) g<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 P0 [3 A5 A8 S' N) p0 x<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! j% r; ?. k' [4 X% F( L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& `; {( o" ^7 z. ]. s<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
3 m' L% M/ e* \* L  k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>