【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 M' y/ z7 q  r0 w% }歌词我附在后面。
: H0 U/ w" Z$ G, p- E5 u" p  OThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 U* ?& x) g0 R: C- D% H$ ?When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
% q) ~; S8 Q8 [7 z3 [: i, B5 ^1 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 f. e4 _) L1 hThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
& O* T  a! e; F0 ISeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
: V; z% _- I3 a2 r( P3 c9 M; BYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! M0 b! W1 L" bEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
4 D6 r. i$ d( c2 E6 ]Nothing can compare to my love
5 O8 N4 V% w$ W) h% X+ ^7 T% x. CCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 ?, k7 q- \6 `; B7 L  {The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: z0 y2 u! r5 T6 D& `/ l( k# lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' [8 Q- G  H& m8 ]' J) qI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
8 c$ |0 ?/ H" z  Z& a0 u$ n# uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 N4 o/ l/ y8 N+ v5 G. O
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  s. g7 ^9 |9 s8 I2 x<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
+ N+ c6 i# U5 s9 V" r<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
, Z  G8 K6 f: f. P: j7 p<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
3 G* @6 c/ y$ u) p7 u  j: z<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
6 {* r5 |/ |: l1 W. w+ x; ^<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
; G* f- i! t2 m, h/ u' w+ @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) o/ l5 D5 z6 c( |& W2 J<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
1 m& _* Z* e5 u# V4 ]3 k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
: W/ S9 I% x: T/ W6 O<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: x* }+ J: z7 S% P7 |% z4 {<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
" O, D6 |. o9 n9 x6 Q' A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
4 b$ F8 E3 T+ y( T<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) L) ^7 G5 R2 J. p% {/ j4 |' k% ]<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( v, G9 [) U5 w) y; e/ a0 c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
# Z# d5 v& Q; R" T<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. F4 {9 i& q' e4 @9 S0 ~<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
- _, M% I9 U' I. S  X# q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 O3 A9 @$ x( ]" \, L9 U& D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
' {0 {% [' ^" [5 i  U- ]- O9 {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
6 s& U6 N, p) G) {1 o5 X0 n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& D4 i4 `! |  G% D! r. x<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ I7 B/ ]- z4 }* X: \, j<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
* \& X: [" a: L2 X, H* a9 M( U<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
6 H8 p9 o+ x6 z, N0 H  x<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 j& s/ A5 U$ M3 r! h7 V' u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ [- z4 f2 I5 i$ \4 @$ \7 B0 W# v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  Y, K% J) h. d5 g# c1 r' j<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
: ?- F: |5 W; f( c7 z! ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# x4 k& a" p* b0 x2 l6 j<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
( x2 t. W& H: |% a! ]  B<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>