【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
1 d) \. U* R. }2 P- QThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
/ x  S- \( o5 W# `! j, N. e! C5 lWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
+ X' [& q3 l3 D* K  u/ O) _+ nEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% q+ y9 [+ X3 Q: bI love you I love you with all my heart
# x! \7 w: T4 t: V6 x/ t, @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  k, x8 }, t- P) p: l+ d+ i3 bI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
8 v! p$ s# k! ]" F3 e6 YYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# z  P/ z, c3 c' D6 Y5 DI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 _* j9 G( D$ L$ MWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 W( W& x) [! k8 D% UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' E- I; g( I0 }- A/ N3 }% y<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
4 ~9 A# i$ X$ V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' U  `* k# j6 n2 t' t7 ]) n4 T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% W3 z+ k2 Z3 d<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! \* X' u7 K  U) n. |/ h. p) a<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 g3 Z; e: S, V# b& j<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
9 P& j6 G8 M: S/ O. i" m<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
4 f5 K  C! Q" H7 T, M7 _<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
8 t9 S) t" `, ?- g# d9 j  t<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 n0 F/ w) R7 p! r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
. l3 r- l- E2 p9 d/ s# I- [<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
8 _0 w9 N) |. N<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
( w% T2 ?! a5 z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
4 h$ [; o5 U/ z, y0 C% F' D* c<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ v& w- X# C  P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ [4 \7 M& p2 R8 S<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
3 \$ Z+ u9 X. I, V% @0 I0 J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! `4 q% r) n  A) d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 w8 H! |/ O8 P1 }5 c<P>I regret not dying</P>
! r- V  P6 I, s5 y( K- }0 |<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  h8 A. U4 a, x5 O<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- |% m$ g9 k4 `1 x8 r$ v<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
0 F. ]& i, e5 h$ k<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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6 B; H) W" o! X& R( `, i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>