【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

<embed src="http://player.youku.com/player.php/sid/XNTA0ODkzODA=/v.swf" quality="high" width="480" height="400" align="middle" allowScriptAccess="sameDomain" type="application/x-shockwave-flash"></embed>
& n, `& }% u3 i" h7 O3 K
+ P# @0 d. p5 E+ }5 |, o; S0 b- L  z
" e% i& C* u9 K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 Q2 ]: m' ~/ _' B7 Z' ]. vMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
) h' T0 s& \. TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ i. V$ q9 J$ L3 \3 _' D7 _With the moon kissing it every night
7 q5 V+ ^( W2 ^; A. |) J: ESeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
- P$ \) S$ O0 M+ IYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 z: b# O, u' M$ w7 @$ eEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
3 m9 r) h4 C1 j: i+ B# OI love you I love you with all my heart
  z# N* K0 D3 d4 m+ x. `' nNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! F  T) \+ u' j3 \I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
2 k9 C3 h8 W6 K1 t9 M* o  V! _" |Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! r( k4 d, G6 Q5 K9 o! p$ z3 \Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

& d6 f& E9 {& ]8 l# N% o1 F
<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
. Y9 c' d% [8 e. z+ d' i<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
1 w9 W- x& a9 F1 y$ e<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; @' c) x1 r/ P4 F<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 s; b- }$ w* n<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 ^2 l; S/ e- Y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 L3 E* j# |& w: |' y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
$ c2 \  E% m8 m  }8 [, X<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' J6 Z2 p& [6 F' h1 m<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 s1 `, O! V1 W* m, _: _( ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 d9 I7 C  h* l7 |6 A<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 q* V* X. v2 Y; d8 H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( `5 ^$ t! G  `1 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
5 N8 s& @) P3 Q$ r# F<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 H3 t) n# g( m6 ?<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
. J9 ~" B9 r6 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
3 O8 b6 |5 b+ @<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" ?/ d' h# t* y6 \  K<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- u! C" y( q5 O/ ?<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
- {' N( ]! x3 a0 z<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" L  S# ?4 U3 n+ j5 z2 c9 }: F<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
2 R" U! r, I0 N/ p" W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& ~7 `4 R+ ?0 Q0 V0 v<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
: B+ n, ]* s( {8 ?% d<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 {+ m. q) ?1 R0 e% ~0 j, y- A<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
$ ^# a8 ^* q' M0 S& Q; B' n<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  F& g5 g0 b1 |+ r$ u<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
6 r/ [7 }) }, t: o  z6 ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
7 ]# t$ v2 V  ~$ ^; B1 Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  w2 o( I, ^6 U0 s<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
9 j; K1 o2 b% z2 X# W# T<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
' p  D0 O: }) B" A" w, K<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& v7 p: ~# t6 A: G2 m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
, r1 O: X! z  W, ]9 M2 _3 q
我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

<>

I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

</P>
<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>