【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( h% E; M+ l# u+ [5 lMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
" C3 x0 R% p7 b7 E( p- `! yThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 s" B' `' U4 O- y. `The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) J# k1 T0 h5 f* k& |. }/ \9 {You needn’t fear anything
2 G  w+ S6 p% a3 n2 V2 J3 m! tMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; p8 f6 M% Q& w( r* O" C7 u6 q1 z1 iEvery other word you utter is love
6 ?9 P/ r& m5 \/ b" e" `! a8 A# sI really want to know just how much you love me
8 ~- G% B0 p( TI love you I love you with all my heart
" S! g# s8 A6 @8 w# ]Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% J8 A6 b% |- N1 ~# \The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) c$ R$ m1 F3 |  d* O2 II want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 @& v4 a* n. n* V0 V<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- m6 u, _* ]1 z; Q! `. _<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# j+ M5 D2 ?& n  u" P6 p9 q<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 ~4 x  h! P' X<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 N  P+ v/ s5 k' u# {" z<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  B. n# [  F+ N* M$ v" j! @<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. \. ^( H3 o. |* p% F3 d' z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
! Q$ f$ s% b" D/ [. J<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
- f* i- [6 O( m4 S* j0 D<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 n' H- L) D/ ^5 w3 t: M4 }7 O<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
5 ~- `) f, x0 ]' ^<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
. V. R, Z# f- B9 f. R<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ Y& S* w# _5 P; @  V<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
0 |) @; f  g" q2 R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
5 V0 }3 [! L% i1 V& l<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) _$ f% ]$ n4 O+ l6 ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
# Q1 ~; ?8 d4 I* Q<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' I; _6 U1 M' w/ f/ q! _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( _( {7 _0 g4 l: T, O9 B1 x- c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* t1 p3 h0 U9 L2 Z, \2 a8 f. ^<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 ?9 z" i; U# O9 a3 S2 x; {: a0 U<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& T- z( Y$ m3 K9 M5 D+ C& `<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
  b8 p' `/ X8 ^: Y8 p4 r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 n' @6 `: N# T7 q$ F7 K# K& R1 L<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
! i, C1 S6 P- j9 m8 g& q! V<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
8 R# t. C4 c, w0 S0 {1 q( Y3 k<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) V7 S% \3 h8 h# f4 U/ r) ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ ^6 A3 }5 y$ X7 I6 j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>