【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 k: ?# v3 @: ]- T歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 M8 X/ [! r* n9 x. ^/ T, o$ NThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
8 t& P4 C6 y# e3 ~5 u6 N7 ~# \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ D( m/ N+ e. e" Q# m2 wYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
& A3 A) P% L' _0 d- N- g4 ?1 ^5 k$ m9 uEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
' _' K, Z" O8 G0 ^! UI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
0 [- J7 h4 @5 }- F, b3 _3 r/ D4 DThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
& k9 n& W# E( k3 Q- A/ Q' eYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
" D) H7 q  G3 \; A  WI regret not dying
. K8 H' y7 e: B1 lI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
6 \3 E# J' A* W6 CWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ f2 ?& N& @( P( \* h8 D/ a/ o+ B/ @Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

9 A$ }) f7 g4 s# s7 _<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% ?9 s! d+ J$ R7 _3 F8 E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 k4 x4 f2 b* R8 Q# ^' ]/ P( `<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
' R$ M  e  a2 P& J2 m5 c<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 M5 m& m5 ?" ?) }/ J7 u0 Y- b<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
/ X  R4 |& y$ m% \<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
$ t' u; G, l5 \& [7 Q" e& m<P>你无需担心</P>
* k" Z' J$ s8 R+ Y9 m2 W3 s<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
' Q) V) V# L8 Q; n! v<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
6 X6 l+ E$ S4 j& ^<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
: Q  n8 X% b7 a; k! j8 a' O6 p. q<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
9 ^- B( V: a% _! h* V4 Y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 n- \3 m/ e1 ~0 ~! a; ^<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
* R) k" K; M4 m- F& L0 G( i& H5 h( b<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ O0 Y0 {0 z" q2 }/ u1 z# e0 Y/ |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& C& O; u9 W! A) u* G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
. `) l6 q, Q. ?4 I3 i0 ~$ n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
: r2 v8 Z4 W  j<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
0 l: {% i" h( V) t  W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
/ H: @3 Y/ o, T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
% m' m  }" ?. F' K% H<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
; @$ {/ j8 `* y- x0 e9 q2 N: T<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
& r) @& Q* |1 ~! }! i+ Z- J9 i2 [$ L<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 o* C3 Y5 y1 v; L: l2 e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 Y% a1 E- N+ f2 F7 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
) q3 W* {+ ?, V9 W1 I+ x<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, L" `0 F2 c# D. m6 m9 G3 W( X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
2 v, \+ [* x, h0 m. Y* u<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- R" {: s* Q" Y; C) R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% D( H: V7 C8 h<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 e3 j* N0 ?. q4 E) U$ g<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 P" u7 [) q8 E3 q<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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" t5 ?1 I8 d* N* E, ]! h$ a+ k7 a 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>