【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
  O, W9 b) k$ LThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
5 P5 c: L) n$ C+ c# d/ `8 T8 sThe sky is happy down to its soul
$ ?/ L7 r, ^# }5 z: wWith the moon kissing it every night
/ h$ }( G9 `0 W/ [4 k! d# \Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
) d# A' [- P; [You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
1 i7 V* I5 U/ D+ Z0 E! o. t) ]6 GI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) ~) c" w; j1 N1 D$ D: p8 @Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
  t) r) s$ ~) H) j1 sThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. b1 Y3 v- d! L+ iI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
9 T& G( |5 ^6 C) u4 ^I’m still filled with fear
. m2 D6 `3 B( l" bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
, t: @5 S  R$ C3 V) X# ]9 A3 zI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
+ u+ Q/ ^; i  q! G4 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; Q/ j6 z. B+ k' h* I: g0 s7 B$ `If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 P+ W0 S) k' p# WRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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  p" h; h. A1 f) G0 u! U: K+ J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ t2 p0 G% B& V3 o' ^! B8 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
/ W" K4 U1 L5 d: f4 q& E9 J<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
0 w9 ]( {5 L4 j$ i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 W4 Q, J) W# O& K( w& n" G6 H- c<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. ?% J7 y6 g$ {% z& e<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' ^- g% d4 |5 E; o' ?<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
' B; C+ t  c' f/ Y$ \# E; j" A9 P/ K<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
/ t. |" ~# B: p! [. B* ^<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
+ X; ~3 w. q% {* V! s# m3 S<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
! b3 L7 a, t. Y8 ]. G<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( B0 D9 O- R! q; L2 s<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
3 M3 v/ |3 a& b- O4 e% t<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
+ Z4 b. W* l4 Y* B2 H/ Y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# l8 e: w1 M% P<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 }' m1 {' F0 g) k" C+ C<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 _. N7 w% A* i: B$ b+ l<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, H1 D- I. ?" F, J2 l& t2 {' {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ k7 H& S+ G% D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& T) h8 X7 H/ v! r+ m  J<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 }/ l" V% I- n<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 I5 R5 L. G6 Q" G- x4 \. b$ t# O<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' o" q4 r0 ]9 S6 e# I<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( R2 `0 t7 g" V0 N<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( a+ b2 w6 z' j& R) [0 l: r0 u<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
! D8 Q/ O8 V8 Z  F% U5 Y<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ P. P/ F# `9 K2 t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 R2 Y1 [  G/ Y) I( N" _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ I2 S* e% _' x+ Z# E( h<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" V) C8 j  B% g6 J5 p6 h. M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& y2 K/ w" E) [' ~9 A/ H2 Q9 O$ l<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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& h# [  R/ [' T1 |- r" [* c我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>