【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
# b; l. F/ A1 ^  f6 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ Y+ W: h" G7 F8 X! @0 zWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
4 \  N, n0 F- B6 \0 UThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
0 F; w' E) f8 F; r% p, mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 g: D4 _* }& Q& wYou needn’t fear anything
  G/ \" }' X3 Z/ oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! ]: d. C2 W" X; y- o8 _, @  UEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
  _4 Q& c/ d4 E! E, j+ hI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
+ j! O, Q1 M+ F! ?3 P6 S" aCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
) }. R8 O! C0 e! MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
0 Z$ C- x( ?( r, Q7 EI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
9 B" q3 U0 ]+ |  u. U6 kI regret not dying
, X5 p: T: i" v# b" ~I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
- E- Y. [6 J( O5 M8 CWith such a tongue as yours,
; l6 f! X2 @4 a  K9 s8 c- UYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

) z; g- E1 S. K<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
" n2 ^, J. u3 c5 J# [<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% ?7 A5 v: M6 T& T<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
2 o; U3 f1 V& ]6 N  h$ ]<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
& i$ E% V2 K, t- c8 u<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 g1 U8 v0 W  O- k* X: a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
# }& `9 I' Y+ h5 w9 E/ F) s0 M) L<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; T: A4 S* S$ @+ A, g9 K3 Z% Z  k( g<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
2 w; D, r/ @8 _1 V: h) I' R. g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
* V' L' ?8 I+ P: D9 S$ ?. f! F. f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: S4 x) y3 P% _2 {+ P  x% [<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" |: x5 Q/ m* ]; N4 v<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) l* n5 Q& i& L6 i/ R<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
- Y1 a) ^% Z6 z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
" }* h: Z9 z  s<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
( K! q, V$ M5 v" t<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# |! Q' i, ^0 d<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
1 m) H% T' K2 Z# o' l" P<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
' m- H0 g) c, i<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
( k8 t: i( A1 P1 z9 s6 P<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* {. o* [" e0 A) V& T9 q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- r( j$ c1 L' S<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
* O) v" K7 Y. W; U% a<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 L2 a1 H7 _  q* C0 [( F" A<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 `1 H% i, ]+ Y  x' F8 h<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
& P+ \0 ^3 Z: b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

* E# l* _: I# i# H$ ]3 V7 W. P+ k 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>