【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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9 c. m8 A( J0 h4 d歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 l% w1 x' j& v. J/ eMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 |! l: g4 n5 |* b; ^: I% uThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
7 m* S" b  y- _Seeing the sky content with its love
/ q3 t' b/ q% R# Y2 FIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
5 t2 Q+ z2 G9 ~! Z9 {6 }I really want to know just how much you love me
6 o2 F# H$ f7 u! @I love you I love you with all my heart
! O: _  G- C* N+ T" rNothing can compare to my love
; P6 B& X/ V0 r2 XCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
6 p- W" Z2 l: n8 M* D: C6 m' CThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
$ E9 H  u4 R. t' p) F2 ?! AI’m still filled with fear
5 k/ M% \- N9 l4 k% O! D# b0 @& S" ]Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& {( u6 `! \7 UI regret not dying
' L, v( u% H# o  j* v" `5 `1 Y4 LI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
  K9 F1 m# Y2 y$ w* \) T6 r0 @' PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 }: J/ B% T0 i% Q* h) K% _% I5 G<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
, {" R* m0 J2 y" Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' T9 W* C5 W) |+ [1 [9 Y<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 B. R4 s* p' Z6 _) A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 B2 ?2 p7 ^6 T# c2 v+ o<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
$ e* E$ J! Z: n# j+ y<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
3 c9 h4 o- H% v" d5 {0 E1 u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 ~; g$ ]+ G; u+ p, |% H<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 S# y' I9 h% ]8 Y& w- s+ j<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
! Q- q5 W; j; H7 {! P) ^6 p, ?<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
5 a0 j, A( b6 A<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. K) w: n1 _! B<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ E4 i; S+ d; I* C  ^) H1 M) I<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
$ j) M( Z. q% |# z<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
' Y& H% H6 L. e$ [9 ^  {4 w1 A<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
* d* n8 a  _0 v+ M0 M: u<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 b; J- C3 Z# f<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
; ~) H4 C. v3 @  s<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- I: v3 V3 \- s* A' [7 h! Z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
! c$ j9 V4 O$ J4 y9 `  H<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 u* ]( E  P3 R. Q" y/ C<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; p$ W( c1 f5 e+ Y7 b7 w<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
. K$ o1 `, R$ n& Q) ?- b<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
4 d( \, N% }; L+ }<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ W& y. P; H" X) Q# t- Z- @<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: p$ S; ?3 W1 k" D) l' k我请你剖开它

8 J" V# a1 _4 t/ q3 | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 Y/ h$ A4 X' Y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>