【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
) l! m0 O: I( b# SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
# z' L+ w* X# v3 TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
8 N4 w. y1 m- H; S! _' q" \The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
: _' ?9 b4 G9 Q. L2 p" aEvery other word you utter is love
8 c8 J6 I1 R1 l% I- uI really want to know just how much you love me
" j- ^- |$ F1 E$ ^9 e' FI love you I love you with all my heart
/ n" o# F; }: i7 A2 C, GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, s$ x# \& U( ], A6 dThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: u& P1 Y4 t; G* z: H7 YI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
# L1 `% I" P6 W  M( gI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
" S  N! ^2 S$ Q/ Z+ U* d+ q0 PI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
7 M) O; W  d( W+ u, p5 b3 aIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
7 u) S4 ]' }; {. N. cRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" F: w- ]) ^& \! j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
$ Q+ Y; K( a0 ?4 M4 f& G+ h<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" i# ]% q! t" P  D! R+ v<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 P- @* [" }0 _' v# A2 V<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
3 q& W3 ^/ r6 I- K9 U. B. E8 ]<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
9 w; k  ]! a8 S; M- C3 k5 [<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 E" U* K. `" g& ^* |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
/ R  U2 t- {6 X0 r" b3 S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
3 I: g- q6 G; B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
  l: q: t6 L, p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; w- M  O* w2 x& A: q8 y<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& C) g/ s# F- p% i5 P8 b<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ I- u) h% j1 t6 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
. p: n' ^8 j" [9 K( a<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 i# Y  I% |( i<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! f2 m# O# R9 c, E<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 L8 ]4 C' `- {+ e. z7 k& |' q<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. X5 ]5 b, a. X$ P. t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" I% L5 O7 }/ W<P>I regret not dying</P>
! N. U) R1 k* ?* X( W2 {. W<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, i9 }1 Y5 D$ Q9 x+ q5 a<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& q  d, V8 d4 B! Y( U6 L<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
5 \; G0 g9 U* A3 B) i/ \2 A+ s<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
/ l0 D7 D4 J2 n! [" w3 B6 v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ t& }" R% a$ S$ V" ]4 R! S, Q6 d) b<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>