【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
. m0 P3 x/ ?, p5 b* r: _The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; ?2 p, ~- ^4 w. F, a" q7 MWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
. b. ?  I0 L% w1 \2 A; gThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 ~* s, ~) I0 `( B# R2 bThe sky is happy down to its soul
7 y. h. f5 a! Z' V4 A  lWith the moon kissing it every night
+ c9 p4 [1 |5 N1 x: r9 L9 v7 _Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  E2 |8 k& G/ Q- d' wYou needn’t fear anything
) A6 [, z1 N" @* [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
% h8 W$ Y: d! @9 zI love you I love you with all my heart
8 u2 H! z5 \! j1 Q3 ?Nothing can compare to my love
( [7 T7 }3 I. c, BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ \# ^* C  y) k- F  ?# U7 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
* t6 ~; x8 z2 L) A6 XI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 O: A, @. s4 {! U$ I9 y- s, aI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
# Z$ Q4 x( `2 V3 sI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 s! b3 v' }- s6 iWith such a tongue as yours,
  u) C- y8 A( h" V3 AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
$ O$ `% J6 _6 rIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

" x9 a$ b( m% z1 s<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
6 `* y& M& [( r" e' `) Y9 y( ^; w<P>月光闪亮 </P>
$ ]6 i' R2 s# W9 Z<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* r1 P" `- Q# O3 Z; }" T) }<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  a1 H4 N7 C6 g* i5 w. v, M<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. W, d8 Y# u; \" J2 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
2 s8 y3 y, N2 R' x2 Z5 r<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  {7 w: x1 \) p0 W4 v<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 @9 g0 Z( f) t+ x- U$ r% `<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; D3 C- ?2 y1 j5 t+ }9 G/ \0 m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ C6 L7 T6 E* D/ a  R<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
4 o/ [4 m7 K7 r+ i" W8 o<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
; l" g" E* X8 V1 l. L- ^" {<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
* i/ M7 M' o9 h, o+ I, }- ~- U<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
- y( _3 n) x/ t9 A: m+ J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
7 T/ k8 i. Y( g" p( x/ H! ]<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 d6 Q% w8 q( O1 o9 f; Z2 f5 \<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: }: q6 L8 K! E& V9 j1 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
, V- V# T$ ]9 q( u" }5 n$ Z<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; t2 w' U  G1 ]& Q9 |& ?) X/ Y" `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 f5 m+ Q. g* X: t/ t* {. k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ j" X& \. T: s" q1 E8 J. w7 ]5 r, c<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
1 _5 b9 n$ C+ P  T<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" z9 Y3 o. A, @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
% M" P2 K) X$ L% }3 b<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' ]7 `7 K, ?% q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
0 d; h! J' H( `4 d  R( l0 l0 `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: U0 E7 \4 Z( j7 j$ r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
, e; [4 c/ H5 T" A3 k# c$ k<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# `% ]/ z) ~) a- a' n. j7 U. m<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>