【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 W: [* u- Y! f/ h* T( J! w3 y歌词我附在后面。
# x! q5 Q6 a8 @* x# k( e5 U! QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* Q1 c* A  [! e1 K, p8 e" j3 X9 ?Making the sky glitter like gold,
4 ]* B; X9 Q8 D8 Y0 `8 s1 tWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ r# j, y$ g$ W3 U& N0 jThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 B6 h# s3 Y; F: nThe sky is happy down to its soul
- l9 i8 X, P" i. nWith the moon kissing it every night
, \' i- A( g' m2 A6 N4 {Seeing the sky content with its love
$ r( p& J& X/ Y  |! N" z; q3 BIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
  v# V1 g2 ]5 ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  E2 O5 v4 i4 X2 z9 h3 `7 N( R. AEvery other word you utter is love
1 ?; @  X, G% K5 t* `, II really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
. w$ O3 {1 ?8 Z1 tThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) T4 B  p' M7 p* w3 i% `' P4 m) z7 nI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ o+ B& H& X3 J+ G5 ~5 QYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
/ y- T; t3 p9 s- ^! F; s+ t* G# jI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
1 D: D- n  `& F! L3 e" S  Q( d8 lWith such a tongue as yours,
* H3 Y' I' }' e8 O4 P' ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: ]+ `8 g9 m6 u+ MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

3 ~/ y1 f8 q* ~5 G  S<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 @9 C9 M1 }; c; V5 E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
! s+ ^; U3 [' g5 D6 l$ g7 o7 a<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 Y; V8 X- l; }' y  p<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) Y% M( ]3 K) f7 q3 k, g( x7 K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
* s2 X- Q" B# h0 ~2 z2 k<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
. R$ R" V; l8 u  m4 X/ e5 {<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
5 @% k) \" m6 y( d<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
& ~  E2 U2 _# F0 A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
( ?0 l6 U+ j1 p+ G$ Y3 Y<P>你无需担心</P>
% b/ k# }  I/ a/ }6 r- O<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 S6 v6 N; B; N' ?) Q* E; _<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" T2 |  ]+ M( |/ Y- B. H' a3 a<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
* Z6 ]8 @  ^/ z6 f! G  z/ h<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: F2 a7 M, B. @5 C3 T<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
3 U7 I+ w/ ^, w, `; \<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
+ p3 t# J: m+ o7 _<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% E# ~1 y# t/ p+ r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- g6 T, A, W% n1 H2 N1 g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
1 @* H7 u, j+ m" i<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
0 j. G# p* R7 J$ t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 V7 F0 e: g2 n4 u. U& q) t% d<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
5 G8 a- K% D5 y+ s<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
" i& a  n2 F- {. [) I. q& ]<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
( Z( F! [. a9 E4 K( `5 ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
- c- z4 `& o/ f5 V4 n: Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
. j3 L5 @, ?) ]7 a  X% }% c9 x% q6 d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& }0 b+ I$ F$ S' s<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
/ i, S  m2 f4 j<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>