【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
' O8 B. o! ^1 t0 KMaking the sky glitter like gold,
. d# R' y' a( |; \5 d! `- Y* \When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! ?& c- B" L# @# K7 I3 B( |, b' ~The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
7 G9 p( Z0 ~8 Q3 O# ^With the moon kissing it every night
( n$ t1 ]7 u2 h, XSeeing the sky content with its love
( p" `1 P+ }  e; D# D- O8 J1 iIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
* x4 u3 ]; _' ~/ cEvery other word you utter is love
# E% g9 U' u. Z3 zI really want to know just how much you love me
3 Y8 @- w' L5 @6 kI love you I love you with all my heart
% M! L1 D0 Y0 y0 [9 X& \/ D) A% TNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
; P& j' t5 L* s+ q6 w1 `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
+ n9 b) H& h# u' K+ a; C  ~1 ZI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 r& g" a0 }, j; t- O4 MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
; F# ]* U% f1 jYour speech can’t even keep up with it
; N; m& R1 ~- ?. \If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 K: V3 I1 {" ?. `* ~Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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% X4 J+ H! z3 ~8 c. R& ]( _8 n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
* z8 o+ }' f6 a3 g" Y  c" P. P<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
6 G6 Y! ~9 ?, F/ C  C9 l<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
/ E) R8 ^" r* ]' d& n. Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
0 l( L9 p& I# g6 ^3 [* P' {5 p  M* T<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
! W) b3 u  ^: D1 r$ R5 c<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
* x: `2 P; D& K' Z5 \  Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
* p4 o; d6 O' w- ~1 t<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
. [# J  w. K- k' s9 n; A<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
) Z0 ?1 B4 O- n8 v) c<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
" |" w. h% D# T& }( N<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
, N3 i' Y8 D6 N0 t' ?& ^$ c<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
) D  P, O, `$ F% g8 t<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
) G% N  H- \9 R( B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- m  G; p4 y. h0 i5 H2 s: f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
: E" W: N5 N- ~: \<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: H- X# P3 q) o<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) y* A8 D$ z' f. c3 n; \) z: m<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 N# f" j" C9 k+ H; w) @<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 g' M6 W5 p& a  E2 R4 [+ f<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
! @. X# K5 f. H  V9 T<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
) h2 [' a* x9 L<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 s  n1 ]: G! w1 o7 I/ r$ z! T<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 z! S3 V; \4 L0 p. s" D# \<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
1 z  Z5 j- p* m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 @' e1 h( ^, j; i6 m<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' r4 N. ^4 d2 Q) E: q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* x$ V. g) a# a5 \& f<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
- S0 t3 Q& v' L- A. |' L2 `<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 a- `9 P$ W& s/ m: j<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
# x* {$ l  u: e# X( s* t7 l<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ \' E& C5 j; Y7 v我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>