【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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1 o+ F' k& ], E" E( i歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
( t* x% |7 [0 {6 A" }Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ T4 v( y, a. _5 b; aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" s: N; t$ e7 U1 Y2 B1 QSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
. h7 C& U" F# T' ^* s& J+ ~+ oYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- H3 A8 g  d; nI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
3 z8 A0 R( @5 U" P% v9 D9 Z% \Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 p3 }6 ]; b! O7 N5 N5 P( r# yI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
: q' R! G! X/ ?. D! EI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ x+ R! k. i( d/ GI regret not dying
+ R* H8 ]2 V% H& p4 kI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
! q) W2 u& [( `1 V% |) C2 MRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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' H% [" e6 X; t  D2 K5 J<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
( e3 U. m7 C. R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
/ _3 k& N( }, |+ o0 b<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: H, ^' m4 C6 v0 M8 [: k, V! v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
4 g0 U2 o. @8 y<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; C# J2 q+ D/ ~0 [5 p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; P5 Z1 y, X* [. l9 n<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
# ~( H/ s2 v) @8 B1 K4 ]<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, V  a* H2 {, [" r: H% T( v8 t( e<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% c% f. g0 X- a6 I$ i! `<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) C, K" c" B$ C0 P) S; _0 w<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
' M; F7 R: `  T  R) j& X0 q8 X<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
% X  ^7 Y# j* _6 ~( A' ^<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ Z- S0 O7 m  H; z* x/ C. D<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, y1 G8 v2 @/ h$ x/ m: G4 }* }<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
$ B  ~) [$ H; `/ \0 N<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 G! x& n. _* d9 v5 s<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
+ a" b: |3 }' t<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
! B; V  u2 P, X$ \# I* p<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 U7 O5 N1 M2 u$ S  k4 @! E<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
3 l) d7 V6 H4 Z* B9 M3 S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 l+ `9 K, k' _! H! I/ K<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
7 T8 Q2 t9 h9 H+ z/ ?: K<P>I only have one tongue </P>
; U& v8 b% V' z2 w<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 D1 f3 ^* L- c3 G<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
7 x: O5 g4 F8 u9 w1 m8 C+ c<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: a( u7 p! P* c<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
3 l2 _2 u$ s2 C+ \" I<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
* Z0 q' n# J1 V2 S9 @* P/ Y$ U<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 u; i, |% l5 t' {7 k( B2 ~4 U$ F/ p5 C<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
/ A, w; h) w& k; {7 y% ]9 c& z! I<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
) u* }8 R' X9 \<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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: t% ^% X2 n- V1 s) Z1 P 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>