【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
+ c" D1 \, O& d: m& sThe moonlight is shining brightly,
4 T4 n3 p% T! g6 h" Y" o. g; SMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" U+ T# U8 C/ C$ `( t4 C& gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; M* X! P& e: `2 P' z* lThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 \% \* s* i0 w7 b0 IWith the moon kissing it every night
9 G7 F2 R6 Y7 a% J1 ]) i7 J+ |Seeing the sky content with its love
0 n; G6 L4 X% J9 o& v: o$ C) I8 M7 ]. rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
+ Y! G# n: s% \5 O. ?4 f# k; {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
" W# @9 ?2 K$ jEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 q: d- C' Z: j7 w# A0 ?' Z4 jThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* a/ V. ^. ?/ h. |; J2 G8 ^I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
) Q6 ?* v  d! _  ~' `8 eI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
5 ]4 b' q  A1 Q" J) S6 r, D3 U+ AYour speech can’t even keep up with it
: j# j' H, O7 R1 ]If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
3 q/ q& }1 R9 i3 s<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# `! z: M4 x9 \1 w- `/ X1 u<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
$ I" |9 c( ^& T" g" j<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
2 u, D: b# W3 T5 S. w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* ]9 R* u; y! W2 C0 Q<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
* V& f& X+ s  @# c<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
1 k- J" o; E! ~; Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 F( A9 Y  ~5 u9 V<P>你无需担心</P>
. E; x6 ~! t/ H- E<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
/ T' |" v& O0 Y" t( U<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
* ]& \/ O; C& ]( n0 n, e0 w<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 `% V, G8 r; ?5 `& p. J<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& @% \6 G- s6 W4 V# w$ g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 m/ T, Y; o+ K8 P" t1 G, J<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
: N  D1 f9 U0 s% G<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
3 n% n$ v0 m, K- t+ w. M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; q: O. m' w  ^) D& F<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
0 k5 p1 r' ^6 ~6 M. p+ ]" |" a<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. h6 j: e# {4 j$ [<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 M8 R4 w$ j& j) z9 r! i6 x9 O<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
' J. M8 I, v( w" g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& n6 f1 F2 d6 P* q<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
4 i; w" o/ Z" C* G4 l' Z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, x" K$ W5 @6 B( L) J9 {& \, @  g<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 N( L! C( o$ P& \, ^<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 M0 @* X- Q% R9 B6 Z4 n<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" \+ t2 M  }6 L) I7 p# M% X, T<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 j( b( ^7 U1 y+ b1 a7 B7 l, q<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
4 A% E$ A0 e- I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
  Y5 ?$ V; q& ]! e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' x  R- A9 q4 Q5 b+ I' `7 q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% u' T" c: ~1 W我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 E% l/ t9 g. E. y<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>