【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ d5 C. w5 P9 cMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
# p+ t0 h9 |# `5 L( g3 B2 iWith the moon kissing it every night
9 ]9 c3 L$ Y+ SSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( O. W6 x' @9 U0 H% m7 h8 OMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
: N) _" B" P' lI really want to know just how much you love me
# b* w$ x3 ?- [/ G0 g/ GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
1 ^7 G# `& N' [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 ]  M; O  L; W) A0 E1 b; b- `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
4 z* w+ `# Y6 pI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
! \' s. c1 c$ J/ a. EI regret not dying
1 L+ s! \' g" AI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
8 a. i3 ~" W1 C8 \$ u; F2 ]- qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

( x* G0 K% O$ e  C<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) \: c; \' c. i6 H* z& F( z5 l<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
& {" P) |. u4 i! r% P7 ~8 ]0 q1 ~2 a<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ _1 M# H  Q  P  C3 ~' C<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
2 c. f! R. I! R4 ]( ]: E3 P<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
2 m! {. p) a4 @! a8 P3 g. g<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* {$ A  G$ A) N1 F, I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
+ n6 h" }: `% {+ j( M- R<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
: H+ h6 l- T5 ]0 _4 e0 I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 c3 Z3 q* w5 Z3 f" r# b5 Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ l/ @2 j( |( |<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; Q2 u) M7 A% Z. b: [8 X<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 _* ^  X/ O) a- a+ d. S; L<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# c5 ?6 a. @9 e2 _+ a( u0 Y, U<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  Y' X2 X* m/ p! w" r0 [: _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
2 d$ N7 a/ z; k/ y, V<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: g# u; l: b$ N- C/ ^" p3 w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: x& U  Q6 e0 c( }<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
/ K* B9 v; K2 A<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 a3 [8 \* I% Q( H# B<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" i; q! X; u" a1 M* K- `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
! s% Y0 `+ {+ M3 v& h$ e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
! T$ A2 G6 ]4 Y& X<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
9 }; c4 |$ a% e<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ ~$ @7 j" ^) |. b( E' s! i<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. y; B* ?4 M6 J<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
% |! ?4 f, {4 k; C; c7 ]' P<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 U# l1 B7 u0 x) s5 Q<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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1 Q1 u# ?& U% e- } 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>