【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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8 J3 I/ Q% `# P! o3 s6 z歌词我附在后面。
$ Q7 W) }& q9 |  z8 cThe moonlight is shining brightly,
# r5 T6 v3 x9 u* ]$ bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
& E8 C3 {4 _' v! oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ j3 |. Y6 ?5 g# _! j+ w2 |7 bThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
, W% x5 R  q: I6 Z" `5 wThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
3 F" A( k0 u4 Y6 q* ]9 P5 tIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
+ `! F  W% \2 ~# ]5 {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ I( X' a# u& s+ I! Q$ e  n- `Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
4 Y8 M2 Y! ~5 u9 w5 X( _I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
# n& R1 w1 S8 q' [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
0 k6 Q& i/ N# {- Q1 W. qI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& W4 }5 L0 }1 F# EWith such a tongue as yours,
: T6 U) ^( H- w) ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% X/ {5 G  k& T1 M" q" H<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: E5 {! Q  l* ^2 J- m<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- r$ d$ }4 Q* P<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
% S4 r  u. E! ^2 D7 o/ a+ C4 n, ]- ^<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 |' U* d7 G8 F# H. x<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
& s9 V7 J- C. ]3 d. ?7 K& Q; ]<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
- K) b/ m2 c: K! a; d<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
( v- i1 e) ]  o<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 |; k; c% A: Q2 R# t% L8 e<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* s6 |7 r( L+ i4 u$ m) d<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
/ o+ p9 b1 a/ Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
6 k$ Q: f% V/ y0 c1 }<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
1 u7 r# W0 v0 D  m& n# S5 {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
0 q& t( E% ~% \* C<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
$ z8 @" B' o# g) P3 ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" e* J9 B8 W* N: F$ S<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
& z* r2 W& u- _6 {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
& A+ M4 d7 {2 V7 R' B; g, L9 _<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
7 [9 I5 ]" ^5 g<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
5 d, g6 S  x! ~<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
8 @8 s3 R  e  ?/ U: \* a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
8 y9 Z5 e- r) X0 e' @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
; D) _8 C$ Y0 q<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
& X- L) @9 T6 V# |+ x% X$ d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
' g7 n6 C+ |; ?" x) W! }, H: t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
8 W; `8 C1 Y! |8 g" U<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
. c; k3 o) i2 j, B; w3 D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
* B" O, N# ~" P+ ]<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; k* y* c9 Y4 U  F2 f4 e0 K1 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
) g6 ^% N! |7 L* @! s2 e<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 K) Z. K+ @/ q$ h. B+ r7 G+ q+ \<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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& X1 T4 s" b, w# G. i1 R 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 J7 e$ V* }8 w, V% T" Z<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>