【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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; ~5 o& ?6 Y* v7 T) ^1 U6 a歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
/ J- l" Y# o( r6 ]When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 e: k7 {( E9 I8 A( }7 iThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 ?' ]1 \, a8 s% l5 E) o- SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
! q7 [1 c% g, N/ w# j! D2 MMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
9 K( e- R+ J6 z0 G0 lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ h) P. {! Q- ?3 o- t3 \I love you I love you with all my heart
1 J( G4 J6 w" V9 v; BNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
4 r2 w% B0 ~) j- k" F( S1 s' a  ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
, ~# j0 {, Y3 k+ \! NI want so much to see inside your heart
, ?' U/ v- _8 W0 |  oI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
7 u4 \# t0 H$ K4 N1 T% HI’m still filled with fear
% X7 g6 T1 C7 y. Q4 l; WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
' I0 Z$ `' D; ]I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 u/ a8 G2 m: C6 W2 S2 Q/ i% f<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 C) R8 Q. L: p9 R% Y<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* Z* r+ Q- z* g* ]# a5 c% S<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
; N2 @9 N" B/ {1 Z1 L<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% I6 B0 D# v& B! T, {: @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* d4 k% j# R: U3 s7 z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
6 f7 ]: B( C$ n<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ ]% U) C5 `' r9 I) D" x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
- C" L3 x; g6 b2 I<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) I* p4 d& i( v* j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
3 u1 k' S. _/ v. M1 @% ^3 I5 x# w$ @' N<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
+ I3 S9 x9 f3 t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
5 N; U$ f) `; B/ e. e4 z* Q<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
1 C' R# M. S- C. Q' ], a: ^7 U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
3 T. W1 \( q1 k4 H<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 D2 q8 Z; y4 R+ E4 Z% E! l<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, F9 w/ C  S( t; Q0 N8 C" E<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 p5 T3 Z8 K. R<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
; i- ^0 ?" S% M- z0 @<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
' z' \1 q- @. o; u<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
- \8 d6 R$ w4 G+ Z' c7 ?7 H<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. C# q- ?, M! c<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
  i2 B8 T. f6 _6 Y) P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
* d  D. L& i: Y5 h" B& R/ k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ R( V* f$ z0 v% e# _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
$ \0 Z1 e3 T3 r/ _1 K# U* x9 \+ A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( k  i- y: M9 d! M0 r<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& \8 h/ C* m. N3 O" C/ @) i<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. d) u$ E2 Q: k( v( i1 y1 W* P<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>