【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
" c2 F- m. W. v' xMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ Q7 \+ n0 S+ c1 Q1 p8 g& n( n7 t* A: TWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% D, @  F3 P( Z% {1 `The sky is happy down to its soul
* \9 W3 h( G- J5 h8 U' t2 qWith the moon kissing it every night
3 H6 O) ~6 h, V9 N# |$ y* ^7 JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
# x2 O; D6 m( `7 s4 p9 I) NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* l7 A% ?+ ?, `" b( Z8 rI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, E* a9 d1 U) j9 B. q$ MThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
* ?# n# h- N8 {8 L$ p* O  [! WI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
+ m0 F- F( i" u/ j' `8 L( s- VYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
* Q9 j, W+ o- b2 N, ]  W2 a. uIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. l6 R" M7 M# GRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

4 t. x( v1 ?% [<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
" g5 l+ H; M3 R6 L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
/ m1 w3 v6 k- |& m% H" ]0 ]/ w9 t<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
  U+ ]% F8 E( n( g/ D) a7 B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
* u% P* B( O" O7 h5 H1 Y- [* P$ C& U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% j% \' K0 g0 x6 x<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
3 Q5 N; c- T- G4 r7 t! g9 ~& \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 F/ ^  M  ~' U<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! \7 V) [( g9 I! Y* z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 S+ s' |3 z0 O. ?) _4 k<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
4 w$ S2 D6 r6 A) m- d<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
, O9 O9 P/ _; }<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
! i$ K! f7 r; a<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; |9 u  y& }$ V( b) r  k; a+ E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
1 J# N! p1 V2 M* _& Z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
8 O6 [& ^% X& i8 ~2 H; `# z" S<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: @2 a. N, C# z% M9 d<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 k/ b6 ?5 d/ t, X<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
8 F: ^) M/ ~  p- |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
- _+ S0 a. E$ o+ Y6 s<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 P; A+ i& t& t( u4 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' ?7 N9 X. q" a/ D<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% J6 {8 a1 x! m, t! O8 L<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- [/ d6 ]$ N  s; ]; X' ?4 d<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 K' M$ @6 x* }/ S8 Z8 t9 q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 |5 |/ g% U8 g& F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
+ l# F7 @+ Q" ]9 {! Y<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

: s( @! ^% M. b. w, e! N, H. y+ a5 A我请你剖开它
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+ c( O6 T9 K0 C 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>