【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
: o2 T& [3 R- _8 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
& y; `0 v$ h. V: ?' k+ i5 PThe sky is happy down to its soul
' J8 A8 w% a% ^With the moon kissing it every night
; B* S3 B" J" ]( N( ?: }' w, FSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ Q7 X' d  t3 ~You needn’t fear anything
# c* C1 G& L5 P3 s2 R+ o; oMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 ^2 u  M4 w5 o; sEvery other word you utter is love
- I( ]  t0 `2 ?3 H9 m1 F9 _2 `I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) D; p5 W5 J( o4 L, rNothing can compare to my love
  e" G3 z. L8 J, Q9 K# f5 WCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
" G6 B. {; G2 zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
. \! K7 [6 g1 j5 |; V5 Z; ZI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
% s/ O+ _$ _9 u; s& w  _# II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 |% D# p5 Z0 w, e<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 |  U! b: t: E<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* ~; o/ a# ~1 X/ Y<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
$ A% w2 _( R1 y7 x! Q<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
" b! D5 Q$ L4 T0 ?% K1 O<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 y4 N* ~/ O& U2 w( J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
, e) S! W: e2 n& o) Q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
  ~; y# f/ V% L' y/ i1 S5 _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- v% U& ?5 m6 P8 \<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
+ v( g% f: ?+ d7 q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
' j* F2 @5 e2 K& N5 n% s<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 V( R. }! Z# ]7 L5 {. r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
6 p1 i; @5 ~: u2 O# @- }<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% S4 w+ v% W. x0 l8 ]. ^<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
% C1 e! l7 t5 ?<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
1 Z# e0 b+ P& R* u$ Q<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: _+ [1 {% Y; v, Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
9 t6 p! U. q- K- ^: ]- e  r<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
2 b% P1 r9 a/ f; r% D% n<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
4 D- a4 ^3 r! h  @8 `1 ]<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. `- K' A( B5 H2 t7 D& l3 L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% O6 I/ S) w. B<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
. o! P. X# ?2 B1 }7 G4 ~3 ?<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
1 u3 n; T3 m/ f# ?" `<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
, O) P0 B# @7 k* T& }9 y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
3 A" j& {; L2 u% l* E# G; A<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
7 E7 x, Y" i  M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' h1 G7 ]( }- c7 |& M<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
1 ^! K+ k) Q! y7 f& K. \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, c% ?9 F; e$ a( {  W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
1 a) T* I& |9 |! j! M8 N# F3 ~<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
* S- o" i! Y8 U+ b) |4 l8 M7 W" w3 n<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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9 O+ C  H5 a; j  x# l, W 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 l. x  d- X% K! @& X<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>