【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
$ W. v; p: r) ^, w1 Y+ ?. ]The moonlight is shining brightly,
  I, S, D' f+ K: ?" ~9 NMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
2 K6 U( s/ F7 ?! t" {* j7 BThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 b7 F. J5 ^  l! }; ^. MWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
& N3 s. B- x) sIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 k) K1 z' d8 e0 Y* MYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
! ^8 P  g# j3 x9 B1 D$ s$ [6 WEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# Y+ ^! e% j4 X( BI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
+ m6 M6 P: |0 A' ]$ w: G* dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( H! o, U/ N' }! I8 b: eI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
, u0 {$ }$ z+ ZYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
1 |! j$ A! G. \! n: u/ |<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 r- {5 m/ M( l$ f) T1 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
; @# u! [2 m' e( v+ K<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 O8 j% m! F3 ~  |<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
0 t6 C* `9 E/ M/ S- Z9 Q2 M<P>你无需担心</P>
2 N  y( u1 E4 I+ G! Y6 W6 a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
. `$ I1 Q& V! M' I# [( v' s$ W% B<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
8 h, O& U1 C. w. g. n<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
, T( {& A; T% c" }' N( A6 W- f9 T+ m<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( {& n$ {- I! s7 Z<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
; \7 G7 T. B, H2 o; P6 ?<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
% R% C8 J  Y2 M<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, V# k/ ^1 v4 y3 Q' {. j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
, n' ~7 U$ t& j/ {/ Q- w4 i! o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 x! v; W7 J( j' ~( z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( J0 ~) S7 y, z5 M; L& D( Y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
) N4 T7 y3 E/ _' }' h- A<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
* t# j' d# }; {6 R* x$ r1 \+ B<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 C" b8 J* B4 G, z& K2 e<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
6 S3 r- L- j3 W3 W' |<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' ~4 F- u- C- p1 i# l<P>I only have one tongue </P>
" x# b" _# S4 \/ T<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: L! l6 x" X1 H6 B* V2 g8 W* @<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
7 g: ?6 [9 w* X; Q<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" i( K" N8 t+ q3 w5 ]5 ]" D$ O<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) x! M% ]' G. k, M3 C2 a+ c! c<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
% V/ P5 }5 |. E* @8 W  V<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
2 v( }5 {% A$ ?% j/ F' X, e<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

0 r$ F) S/ A9 W! j: O8 ?+ X我请你剖开它

, N# @! X0 C& B% A& U 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% D$ o& \) l8 W! L<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>