【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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) @3 O6 f5 {4 E6 ^歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
3 E. X& A% Q4 Q& D: i4 j$ wMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
) Q) B- w. e4 L* W3 c# o7 iWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
- w0 B3 U( G) U3 X1 U1 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 y5 J3 i! E7 K% [You needn’t fear anything
% y  p: A8 j% k& g( \; M1 NMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
0 B8 r3 e. ?) ^2 gEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- p) q# C; r7 HI love you I love you with all my heart
3 s1 q6 E/ o( e' D, `0 I' GNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
+ [8 R, r3 q9 d. s! x" Z0 a; zThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
" w6 K! ]# a; T! l! e1 J. \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
2 v" {/ ?6 j/ y! ?% S% L9 T8 |( MI’m still filled with fear
  a4 Y1 s% W( i3 X/ e+ L: @. bYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' r4 l& U) V( Q' ]( N2 c# uI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 T3 n7 _" ?8 h' b+ zWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 u, a1 {, c: e2 D$ O2 rRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) Q3 C6 c! ]! @6 I! F<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  M, t* _* q: N& q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 V' E0 {+ n: z+ K<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
# H$ Q6 O' w. ?( J) x: x8 _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. v* U* E5 e4 ]; _/ g2 D5 p1 c# q+ V<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
- Q1 B0 |/ A9 X# _) G( w<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  a6 Q: Y0 u, b) R+ l6 ^- {9 S1 |6 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 O* Z! i& y' ?: G0 D0 q<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
( O' J% ~, I$ q' s& I<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
' |+ @$ @( Y8 ~" A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
3 w, n- k/ y" a( v<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
& Q( Q. Z" O) c' j2 }; R<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) w  U, W0 N1 B" W<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
* j$ P; ], X1 S; _; I* _3 D<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& y/ k2 s2 k; L6 z+ G0 k+ B- K+ Z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 z* o/ B: m9 I, T2 J<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 w" Z4 ^9 M0 ^+ d$ e1 p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ C1 H: n1 u9 u, O<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
  v0 R- M/ ]- p1 h* m$ D& N/ i<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
8 A0 Y, v; i2 j7 _4 B<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ |" C, g3 k; b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
, v& U9 ]' w. a* u<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
6 e5 P- H( B6 T<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 a( r1 Y2 r! F1 k$ R; N' \<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" I4 Q/ H& p0 K; V# y( s/ h" h+ j<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
; g, n9 i" G# A<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 G: K" ]7 n* J: }$ u- e& }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
8 n" D' U( _$ R! j' I<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! _) T! {: M. k' T8 d) c3 `<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
" I" G$ [0 W0 y& _; r9 W<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( ^6 u: X$ A4 v! `% h' M% ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
1 _, V* \& R& Z5 [& |) `<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
0 K& E3 i& Y$ O7 e<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>