【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
% E6 \; s% r% e: ?  V3 gWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
& J; w$ j: q/ wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
; @* u; e8 E) F6 GThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
; ]  P5 q7 D% L1 fSeeing the sky content with its love
# `: O2 I; U+ N1 wIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
( h8 b. }, }( U- s0 P; y% sMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  {7 A% g& W* X  }' REvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) [6 U% |' C5 Y  B: _0 WNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( j) f# S+ y+ k: I, tI want so much to see inside your heart
- q6 c# X$ c# |; bI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
4 W; K- z0 a( M0 e$ ~6 o% V- M$ sI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  S1 S" f8 @  J! ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
) X2 f  }, m- q<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
; Z4 \7 E" m$ E  S$ J/ C* t8 G<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. p# Q% m/ ^/ V; e$ Z: X<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
6 V7 {; L: O, X( Y* z6 x<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- J5 C; j  w0 U- `2 z$ K4 \- i) B<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
! ~, R2 |/ w' C0 I. D2 ^<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" Z0 b- g  `& Q/ O<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' d% @4 P/ L1 i3 j2 ]9 i# }<P>你无需担心</P>
) n& R# M7 K' H0 |4 y1 @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 j  q9 g6 K% O* w8 u1 @3 r' g* W; g6 k<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
  g4 F. N6 ]# B6 b: A& {8 V<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; b: v/ P0 k, [" V5 W/ {3 f<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
) Y" c; K( {; L( L/ L<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% ?, H$ }1 X# y' X, [<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
- Q* Z7 m# K( @$ {5 [% e<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
6 q6 `: A) E& H& g<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
# K  S* b" x; v# Y# {( ~0 D; c0 V/ I<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) ^; o) U/ {6 h9 H) M( X5 v  J<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
* r( ?; Q) O( q. q  ?<P>I regret not dying</P>
, X% s7 c/ S; f& _<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
/ J9 o1 m, s: p! t<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
# B, P( \7 Z/ N, h: m<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
# s. B1 G" O. o- s6 q<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 T& V' P- D8 A<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
, `$ w/ `3 V& Z; [  X" P& K<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 H5 y1 H% G4 B! u  T! n5 f8 k- x) S<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>