【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% E' d; N' N0 P: d# P5 L歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
/ c+ I  E( E1 yMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 P+ l  ~+ h" W: y5 S4 N0 IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
6 O5 k% L- }4 v1 Q4 r+ N6 ]The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
5 j. i$ G& h5 U! B$ X; YSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
* p7 U; G* o% w$ OI love you I love you with all my heart
0 s" h4 k+ {( L' O9 ?2 sNothing can compare to my love
$ C4 @3 S5 U$ K% TCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
! R4 Y  e/ H$ r  p- `I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
, F; s+ u; z+ ~, B  oYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 ^: l# g/ A$ ?' x0 lI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
: _  L; d/ a/ M$ C, _With such a tongue as yours,
1 S' d5 ?. G( z3 w+ A( b4 rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
9 ~" {4 u! _) a) S8 Z+ QIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: {" q; m) N( v, l7 ?4 |- K/ ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

7 ~9 X6 G1 Y6 [0 Q! B4 N<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
% M( b; x; {- M2 L( S<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 F8 n/ p( i7 k% u<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
5 f: U& G! y6 f# t  z<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 H: Z$ ]0 V: x7 ~- l' X<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
% |" h+ k6 g, p5 l<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 ]& _2 `8 f4 m<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
6 f: [9 `3 N: Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; [/ m# q* i9 V- C" y8 b$ ^<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
$ V5 g9 ?& N/ \9 w% g" E; @<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: O  S( p& x! e; g% _' x1 r<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 o. G/ \+ m2 y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* j7 g3 R9 q: r* N! f7 s2 a<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 z- j" k( b* a% r% G3 u% |, u<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
6 ]4 v7 i; O, V<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
) b! s. z' x7 ^# Q- \" w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
# S9 h( h( [+ t5 [. U" k1 M<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
4 @# g  [" G/ K5 O# v<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
9 i- b. @0 \1 R. P* z9 ~1 d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
- {. d+ \( u% K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
( S+ h& b+ W% _/ I<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& w' R0 C) v$ F) ^  u! t<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
' l: B0 f. w6 f, a5 z<P>I only have one tongue </P>
' s. [3 o0 r/ A3 r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ U2 O4 S0 k& K4 q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
; E$ a/ v. n! w<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
4 N6 A! b! o, _+ ^<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
$ v4 S9 }" o+ b5 Y* U. `
5 s+ Q$ V& n5 w& B+ @我请你剖开它
/ h, w4 J! w: _! B6 H4 H. L/ b4 I
. P: l8 z5 H0 d& p! T* L 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>