【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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. ?% F; j  l' s歌词我附在后面。
- e/ M# \5 E: q- b  z5 @& SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
+ V- F# _# ~5 K. U2 P" |$ f/ YThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
2 `, I0 r7 ?. M1 Q* [With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 ]4 f1 q0 k1 s) ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
- \, \2 v# M3 c# \: h$ HI really want to know just how much you love me
4 A; j! |1 A9 ~0 s/ uI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
0 j  a% c* J: q: D' x( }0 AI want so much to see inside your heart
6 K0 B  f- |, D& c) fI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
! Z: T% K) v) r* lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
% q4 B2 Q4 e& D# H, o+ |If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& D/ O1 n* o+ ~8 v$ h% @4 ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

2 q6 \0 }2 |7 P; S5 M<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
# N  W0 C+ ?- B  F- H6 R<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  p7 l9 X; J& c0 D% r<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
! R; l  s* O  S% v5 A5 T<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
4 d! M3 n* G/ y<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
7 }6 ~! ~3 A4 B' j4 g<P>你无需担心</P>
2 _; T! i8 q  @/ u$ C: M6 O7 |<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
& n7 j3 S0 X1 |<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( O2 K; t) x- ?7 S1 \% q$ y<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 |2 y* ^1 x, W- ~0 v- L. Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
9 g- p- f  h5 y3 T- e<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: V! O; X* y# W6 H<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
% X8 Z: W7 R) ~# P2 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
6 g; ]" T3 G% n8 ], l. `<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
- I4 @, o5 f% j$ \$ R, @/ W<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
( y9 a6 e; R6 g; S, k" @3 G% x6 x<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 d, ^0 k) @* \' O4 w$ o3 S<P>I regret not dying</P>
) }5 Y2 _# x! J' ?<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- D$ L6 u7 b0 b$ [5 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 e' e1 Q& }, a- C3 V' Q' ~<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
! _  u/ m8 `& |) G<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
& d7 [5 V5 ^' f3 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
' v; E3 O! Z1 u5 `3 R) v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 M, {! ?  z, [% W+ o) J9 }) ?) B7 Z<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

1 _' F- ~  q, ^7 n* }" t我请你剖开它
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2 D' W! u1 M3 P' ]' z 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: r* B' V' [! ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>