【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ Y2 s/ b4 c9 W/ s" vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
! E$ h# ?: t, `" O' OMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 ~. g0 t+ w1 aWith the moon kissing it every night
7 z( \7 o% x7 A1 wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
* t4 M4 _  w: Y2 {5 b9 }$ rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
; v& z  `1 }9 V1 J: z& PEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
7 S+ Y7 \( A9 m) S7 M9 gI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
/ X9 i6 T; F* {4 h( [( [3 QThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
  v4 g; o+ |$ n3 L' KI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
8 l, l. X5 z' K$ o& n7 q8 S3 I  s, uI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 g; d- Y; |2 _6 }/ KI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. }' \' S% Y5 TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, f* {0 d) ]' l( ?Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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. O7 `7 g) @8 S0 V8 q$ D7 G. [+ p<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
: M6 @1 H& t) S, _- O( r<P>月光闪亮 </P>
" d* n, ?# N6 G& C4 Q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
6 N' l+ C# A1 n8 o" K<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
& c6 c  e- q6 G+ ~8 [: A<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
0 }; g5 ?2 G. ?<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
0 h8 u# t4 C4 s: a- h& q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 d! D" W1 x+ j. h8 H" Y: ]<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ K2 p: t5 H0 T<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
  [( A5 Y0 T# K3 W2 ~* x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
# l( H7 F" q/ J1 r. y<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
1 ~3 D$ L" ]+ A9 l7 _- M<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
# X; ], r9 o/ a5 H% ?* ~2 x<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
6 L# u' V2 [0 p( K3 n6 C: r<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. ^3 j2 q, H3 q6 t<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
( u0 ]/ }0 `5 ]* W5 M3 a- y<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
# ~4 g9 x5 V7 P% P+ `& ~7 A) t) }<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
5 A) }( K& K) a/ l/ d<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
3 y2 {* a6 y1 ?2 A<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
4 K) @. ^. V2 D4 |; D1 c. l) P<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
, c  Z8 A) F" E<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
; t+ `. s' @- n, ~$ ~9 ^<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
: Y- ^' `: j0 s  ~<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" I+ V( w! v. ~2 _5 ?* w8 Q<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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) p, m; f& E' r- X" H; i 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>