【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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& M7 M  h; E- W# n* G# c5 b" [歌词我附在后面。
) K6 `* H' D* p; X6 x0 qThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- [# c8 f: r) h7 F/ K0 }6 aMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
1 j9 h0 K6 n# kThe sky is happy down to its soul
3 K  M* |& c% w- LWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; c2 l( ]& {- Y( mYou needn’t fear anything
' e2 E2 |/ _# x0 Z4 x( jMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
# V1 u7 r7 u  e  k, @  [5 rEvery other word you utter is love
6 D2 K. H' a5 a- t5 iI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 k) w# s/ M. E+ {' \* }The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) V% s9 S; L9 D1 l, X. u0 A( dI want so much to see inside your heart
! H* [# B3 _2 c. g( Z- G' V) y% Z+ QI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
* {3 N9 q/ K) T! P) aI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
5 Z. {! X2 V7 W" W$ I2 b0 T" T4 sWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  y& N5 p- M: P* Q3 {If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
& G- J3 |! U! c0 \% fRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
- j) f- T* V/ J( f/ E7 q<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
4 t+ y- D) g% u" `; L<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 K+ Z. ~, g" u, [  O6 P0 f<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
7 I1 s- W8 K7 T6 u" @1 H- g2 x1 j<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' I: q9 G4 x% A- u% k5 c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
5 e" A6 \: ?6 c2 W<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 Q) ~7 ?" Z% l1 J0 j- x<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
! \: R( f+ J) h( W0 G& R<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
/ o0 Y+ S2 B, M6 F3 F* q  Q<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
% @% V* `8 \& s: T/ W, t<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: f2 b- E% s: u( Z& o1 H<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
' f( F( t8 I6 C. Z8 @: ]<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 J" y' Z4 Z  W9 p+ {<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
- g" C5 s# q  s% C+ D# i) s1 z+ d<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( y& I/ U5 Q% M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# s, \, O4 k+ T- U<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
& K% M( t2 R/ ~<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( H- s! r2 Y0 {, I  k- G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' T5 |% z( e" j2 ]( r<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
+ Z3 B' x9 O, Q- l) v4 s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
2 _& L9 A3 O- A7 i. f<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
1 {$ W; }! k7 n: A, Y- c3 R" \2 V<P>I only have one tongue </P>
2 s7 d1 @! O1 T7 S* X5 D/ b<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ s/ J( D% B2 m+ W$ ~' V/ t) Y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
, }% B9 i) h+ X  h<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( P  W4 R/ m2 y8 O4 v<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
' @+ z# B/ y! q: `+ ?; b  h* g<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
5 A) ]  W5 d' H<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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; \- _0 J" s  I0 b7 v# Z) i我请你剖开它
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: s0 N! e' [. J) `: R* @# | 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% C' Q  A9 [; W; c& ^<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>