【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 n0 Z; T4 Z8 M0 gThe moonlight is shining brightly,
, G! b9 Z# Y* _& N, x5 b, zMaking the sky glitter like gold,
% j/ c) `5 V& e6 |1 d9 g, CWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
  q) v; {  r6 K5 |The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
  M+ Q! Z: l5 A' L2 ?- a- gThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
" g: @9 ]4 U' k3 ]6 \4 CSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
$ I* M+ f( i- L' rYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
) G$ q. S' K) ~. |. ?9 p+ I+ h& SI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
' N6 s3 O0 X! x) K& M9 {" j  [Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
% S$ f4 V  k' P) K$ |. s' n+ wI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ Q2 M; G. Q; J' ]Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

6 B* V& _. w, x( c$ w& f! a<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
8 d9 A' i# A6 ^! Z' q9 }0 T<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
+ Q6 G1 `% K! W" e. r3 I0 \<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ {2 F( v5 N; N, s0 U, h<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
) R# n/ M/ h- I+ L. d2 R+ u<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
1 A7 n  Q9 T& s1 x<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! i+ ^! F& `% L# Z. M7 G5 P! v1 l<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
; Z- N8 ^2 a5 D) f1 j& ^/ B<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
4 x* [  S: U6 g2 |" B) B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
# Q9 Z  ?* v9 l% H0 s# H<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
5 f6 n9 i! v8 }  ?- F0 I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
* J, T" m5 u3 U+ S% }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
0 d2 p: S! n. |<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% ~. Y; z$ D8 J( Z2 h# A<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
; a9 {$ q. {6 h+ S<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
( k* R$ P3 v( b, h; x; L<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
" R1 z, S1 n" N2 h' [<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 K8 `: X) `+ t) R& g& X<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
5 [& _# `, I% C# l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ ]9 B; E9 Y' _( Z7 r<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
. M  n# d" w9 T$ w# y<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 Y0 }7 E9 U8 _) u<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
. e! e# w% D) J<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) Q6 I' F/ Q7 u5 {5 ]<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
  a" q9 M, w- a8 ]<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
2 f. S: y. a$ T! t2 W9 Y# X<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
7 C% T- I7 [2 P* M  _" r) W<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! I; O( x1 b/ o<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>