【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' [8 b$ u; [+ [, V" J- G* r% KThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 V$ ^4 E1 u1 ?! j1 ZFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 i' n, R- O% ^/ zWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( D, P+ `0 [9 N# z6 E6 \Love… just the word love
& M% u5 D! o5 N4 H8 GWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 e3 K9 p2 E  [6 A' O8 ?9 o% uI want to confess that I love you,
( Y* r6 r, [2 Z6 g7 |2 ^6 I! d# ^But I never did
/ e& L2 f$ L# JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  O1 p) o8 C$ i/ a; u2 G; a$ H$ NLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 ~5 Q5 Y3 N+ ^, b% F1 E6 y* P  wI want to confess that I love you,
/ H6 h; }* {$ K& m4 FBut I never did
( Q) E  F. Z# L# y5 XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 `. k+ S6 D; i0 n3 cCan I entrust it to you?
/ G  Z' n; C  `; E4 KEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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9 ?3 ?( G& Y2 a8 m# p) O7 u[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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% k( e$ [2 Q- b& F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 O7 n. D% n6 n3 h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* ?7 ^* a* V$ |2 a& I- ]! ^" T<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 I. B# m2 \  q5 l$ @0 r: M, p<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 p" u3 j4 I8 y4 K<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ c' d0 _- X- t5 ^6 S8 i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% |' h" W& z  [<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 R8 v) l/ i: a7 X4 T' k6 s3 M1 O/ `<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 O3 f( I3 s8 Q  {2 Q+ R! H3 P<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) h  _4 }$ ?) ?! a& N' _* @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' i. \/ }; ~  @; @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; u; h* L& I: ?0 Y0 p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 ~0 }( a0 i  {+ R8 m+ ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ x, ^. z- P, l0 x! y$ e9 I/ Q, H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' V0 b9 N! ^2 @" W# t: w. S7 Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 I- T1 u, v+ b# \; D- S2 C- o3 E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ h% |" Z1 k2 T$ y9 A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: A# B" T' r! p1 t& U, f, Q- \<P>Love… just the word love </P>
* r( [  N8 B' n- f0 g) R4 X/ [# d; ?" V<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% K- g; K, k5 P. w9 e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( F* F. ^0 c! L* L0 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ _3 N# U! l* B' X$ ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ F2 p7 A9 n8 `* r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' f  C6 f) m3 ?+ R; m, }2 e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ B& {* C% n: C, C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) Y1 ^* u- ~, n<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  P; Q& M' a! B" C- n+ z 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

* Y( U- r; P4 @) n4 O: j: q" U- U这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>