【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& w3 J+ \+ C- K; PThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# C. R9 `% s1 `, b# Q. {From the first moment we met,
1 w  q5 {0 p$ Q* KI already loved you with all my heart
3 l' e( v+ W2 oWe meet and talk everyday,
+ }9 X" S: Q. d& A' L9 S# L* O1 m6 cBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
' h6 y2 y% ^2 f/ O" J5 G7 ?Why is it so difficult to express?
" m5 }3 e# z, E- E# H/ `* a" JI want to confess that I love you,
' n# o: m( }/ R5 r- tBut I never did
' x6 T" i! r' N" rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" _" c" \3 v/ }& G& wIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ w: V7 v1 j4 W" N9 |" m! \8 DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# N) t# X8 b9 O% I8 gI want to confess that I love you,
1 o4 U& W; C! z. SBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" }! d( ?* M. b0 ]If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) a% `, z, g+ ^  YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 W/ m% }; O6 V; WEntrust my love within your heart
0 I) G" M% R% u) h, YCan I entrust it to you?
2 a7 V+ n% o9 R. ?0 ?Entrust my love within your heart

* c- v4 g7 n: k/ a; Y0 ?& ?7 p. Q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' K) P% k  Y6 S% \7 @7 L( F<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  o/ d' ]) C! o# f6 T* z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 |. P* y; O# H5 G, k9 j<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ j  x1 k' ~% Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# h3 E) C3 @' ]5 q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' |" Q( E: H+ I$ L$ r2 e7 ?0 \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 e( t1 {6 |( P% L% t# @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 E0 {2 f9 y0 E1 U/ y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. \" u7 g/ r1 w! D' J' ]* u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 {4 @, D7 N; ?" R3 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 g5 ?& @. r/ A# ?6 l& h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 ^+ j* L$ n! E8 b: \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  m2 S$ `1 l- o7 o" U<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; @2 }' T7 ?* E8 a<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. i( j7 H) q% `3 i' A<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 a$ @1 x5 D; o' x; C& u4 A7 ~7 P<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 S1 R+ ?9 k) F<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% X: V6 {% t+ E4 [3 I<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( h' Y& o8 T8 Z3 e1 W<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& V3 Y# c6 Q8 n* Y- I! R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* f: D6 ]. H' C- x. k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 j5 x% E3 H4 a+ K8 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) v- t# B* P5 {2 \5 v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 v5 l; H, X* @) K! l+ Q# r+ }0 L( S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>