【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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& }% V& y6 \0 y: @1 E我另将歌词附在此。
' B( k- s+ s+ g4 }5 T$ [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) @+ A: E& I! N* D, z7 {5 _That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 K$ u  W) D! N- C& Y& }+ zI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& K3 j( w; N0 i1 j7 m' j8 ]If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
# x2 [3 ]1 @0 B9 `3 l& hWhy is it so difficult to express?
, U2 Y. T; \% e: `* S7 r" _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 |3 f2 H! j6 W: iIf today isn’t too late,
* z' z1 l2 u! x2 x; RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, l6 x* k; b5 F. n2 d: `1 PEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
8 w3 M" O  k* [1 q; E" e! TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) ]' [& D7 r. C$ K' h1 w+ i9 GBut I never did
' x" ^3 V* M, NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- D! {, T  Z0 x9 Z' |! h& J' v$ sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ ]7 M7 l2 c3 ~; Y; p) ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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1 N9 W" l1 \$ h) m' w8 q/ y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

+ f, U0 ]% x& f( a; l0 @5 Z8 T5 {<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ e0 d$ |0 @( u" W& U+ Q: t. j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* Z% x  P5 v8 E- t' _6 t<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
! a; g( H  G5 e: ]1 j) e2 e. @<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 X7 l. g7 q: }  O6 \, X+ Q6 l9 A2 K<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( R2 B& Y* S# v' ^5 D7 i# V4 q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" }& m) k4 D. }6 O<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) C& z" C$ I: K8 ~1 `<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" Q/ Z, M$ ^4 H: H; j# m7 S% }<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% Y' ]6 h- G' a0 v2 ]' i4 L& A4 B% F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 X3 u8 ?* R6 u6 p& r<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 F2 ~1 `$ s: G+ v! h4 t, h: g3 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* t! k" o9 B9 s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' a) A4 t- L5 E; N<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ u8 e% D( `* U! O1 ?) D0 t/ a<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! g2 d0 U9 h( H  y6 ~<P>But I never did </P>
; K8 T, t6 [# C  t# _1 g<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 u) e" ^0 p  J# ~5 g* q' F2 k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ \% ?+ q1 c# o! J/ D' b1 R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- D# X) `/ h" z- p+ S6 `<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
, ]3 `% U9 q; I7 s& @* }# M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
# q6 G( h/ S; e0 O2 L" X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ g) M; R0 X5 z5 L/ K5 y- w8 F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& J! J, X( E% h$ p: t8 [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  o" I2 C  y$ p$ d6 I) K8 O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( \% w2 D2 ]5 e 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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1 z1 J$ v. N1 X2 C% C这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 H4 B5 b8 X! _) P0 x# W# d$ k+ b. o这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 N( ~0 h; u; Q<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 w4 A/ ?# W7 E7 h; S/ ~6 ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>