【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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8 d1 x! g; w. u$ u我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: G* N9 S7 |) [1 b2 B' cThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 J2 K" k( Q  z0 sFrom the first moment we met,
( T6 T/ b/ F, L: g, O. O$ h* dI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 w! ^- W( T. VBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) D9 W8 k% F1 I' n6 ~/ OI would probably know how you feel
; I+ w/ e1 a) S0 V0 D1 dLove… just the word love
+ c: x) O, |  E3 ?/ S) z% q  n6 _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' \4 _4 H7 i2 F$ q. h- wBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- q$ h: b- }& {  Q0 b/ [$ f. MIf today isn’t too late,
9 E  h8 [8 Y; ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 L- b) Y6 E; P3 ^I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 {* u( x3 _2 rCan I entrust it to you?
7 e* d/ A1 C- l( n( IEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 G0 B- e5 Q5 s4 Z, l$ d, O% RI want to confess that I love you,
  e' _! `7 k6 l9 Y% |# o' RBut I never did
+ t8 x6 N0 x# n( GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 N) S8 Q8 }9 y* ~- N" JEntrust my love within your heart
6 E% |+ x* _9 t+ X) UCan I entrust it to you?
8 ]' ?* @6 z7 i6 ^- x- m1 X- gEntrust my love within your heart
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! y) q) L; _7 q) u% n9 U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; ?% s! d3 D* u6 q0 _) M<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. C  P) W2 J8 C1 `! k( F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
9 ^+ Y9 l$ ^8 J$ t- h9 Z<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 ]/ y9 o4 d) s' G, F<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 C4 k' k/ u7 M) z! `7 L  ^! F<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) G( q8 r$ b% q' E4 V% u% Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
& G- {$ Z# V' |7 C7 _) M/ M<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
* ]) h5 u3 U' X<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ W# o; S! {( C7 a" K5 X. ~<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, M: S* e, Q. l0 E' K) d' h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% D5 s  f0 V# l" n<P>但我不会</P>
1 @- U; U, j% K, f  A1 j; f4 m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ y& J9 ~3 c! ?4 S4 z6 y7 T# F% M2 T<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
+ @; r: R2 E. C' [<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: u; o: @( \! a, Y% B<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* h$ g0 b" q# P% H& A. R$ d, t+ x6 r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 R. Z! i' ^6 l) ]) t<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# e3 h* V) i, x& h. j4 N1 ?9 `0 q+ Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 _4 Y7 {  Q; X9 `, k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! b: ^$ I2 K0 {* N<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# C: I! m( l% U2 ~<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 B/ M- H! {& x" p7 S$ l<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* R$ q' E" y- W/ F<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ E$ ]; q: Z$ g3 y$ z& _<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
( g9 u3 e. l4 \8 K* x' q$ q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 w8 H8 L) J, d- `& w; d' h0 i) [5 J4 j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ E: ~$ Z/ P. L+ w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# Q$ K; e% r1 ^7 C; @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; j; G/ Z8 i. Q, N9 Z: P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ t$ b/ ]9 C* c; ] 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
. |3 t9 |4 g5 x, j  ^3 v* Z
+ z; e* b; @% R' z& x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. Z1 W2 a+ h4 S这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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9 y5 D# r- _9 Z5 A+ a+ D<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>