【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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* U/ Y  z! g5 {  B5 hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
, M" O  y5 e5 {$ R# cI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
3 t$ ~* l5 m! KBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
4 D# l7 z% R+ @6 ~" u0 W6 t# W* l1 bLove… just the word love
! I" D6 m* T7 q* NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
9 u0 G0 g# f8 m6 G9 l3 ?5 LIf today isn’t too late,
$ \, a4 }. Y& ?) d5 [I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 h) y0 u4 d, A0 TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
8 m. H# @- |: a) P, EWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 E& ?8 Z2 F7 U; H- t; LI want to confess that I love you,
# r, {; _  k$ Y& Q) ?5 r$ C2 E$ yBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- Z3 X2 ^4 E3 M7 a' hCan I entrust it to you?
$ e& q1 l! p' u5 I. f! n4 ^Entrust my love within your heart
1 N9 G3 ?- T$ L1 wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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- ~* c/ P7 s" w% Q$ }5 _/ {! _% c- d[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; K  j; f; h$ ]2 m) A<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: {8 y7 |# x# N+ x- e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
. j9 W$ Q9 K) Q$ H- Y5 L<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' H5 I7 s4 B0 c! |<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 q6 \7 u" I0 Q0 x<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" j$ e0 Z7 _' X' u: Q1 D<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! J& c" t# I- _: |7 W<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 R+ Q; J  L2 k. K. S, x: I4 w. G7 r) L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 u9 U3 S$ m* o9 t<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ P8 E3 z; [$ H; K<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- z0 B/ E4 h# s# E3 R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 g4 E0 q) j# C; R9 E+ C7 x' r<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. s4 Q7 Q3 M. N9 s6 x0 a* F<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( a$ r* `+ [) w5 }. i* a2 u/ B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ A7 y3 q- m  U9 k9 S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 M7 p; b: o5 A" C; ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# p: ?- c; p* b7 \/ A<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
; E4 O( O+ o8 a9 G: q, Z$ |/ I<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" M: |+ O" H0 L: U% S<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
" y+ O1 S8 u4 I' m% y* a<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
, y7 h' {  H& r# [" n8 w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- c6 r$ S! V) v& M- h0 f7 w<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 |7 R8 w9 ]! N0 R# ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- v7 `# R* }' Y6 E$ _<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- B# s$ o. S4 L! A! q) X% l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& m6 b1 e0 j" R2 U# G4 x, [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; q# q! d, \/ d1 [( h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
8 G: ^& L% ~# C9 ~<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 w/ n& |( E, u<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, ]( F. l: d0 P" p 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 Q( n! v1 l7 J$ v) L! Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>