【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# Y- `" i$ Z/ [) ^We meet and talk everyday,
+ _& T( y7 p: ]1 a: C  lBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 ?* y: B' ^3 `2 ~% UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( f1 ?# c$ i# o5 L- W# b7 g2 dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ h* Y) T' G; k: }/ s; jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 @( z4 O0 N, b: f* VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: A0 \% q' ?- |# A, A9 p5 qIf today isn’t too late,
6 \! L0 R  r: {" v7 V. T" ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 e; G9 \8 A8 B$ jCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
3 m8 Z0 K4 e6 T- oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% ~* f: o$ l8 @$ iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. c/ @) t* U6 W4 ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# r0 r. `1 Z* }' \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ k# h  U8 D4 T$ [' dEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
5 J/ N' R6 l- kEntrust my love within your heart
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: o8 s7 `$ @  J  L6 b1 ~7 |[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ z. ~9 h) u- ?6 N: Z9 E. `& P<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& [% U/ H0 z" [$ }: [; [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: g1 P7 X* U' G3 `, l. ?6 d; o<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
: q" u0 g, {# r! k$ {# y. i0 Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' p2 b+ {  b& c. T" a) b7 L<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) M+ p/ h* Z! U! O6 G<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) U% c7 n0 M$ _<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 ^+ E4 r& o3 N( R2 D<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 Q$ r7 ]7 R3 E& {7 G! i  W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  y9 z  c# `$ @8 ?2 G3 G: x1 D8 \<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  N) r. d/ o1 y% x( A+ v9 {<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" p0 a+ t" w! O; m* z) |<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 \3 [! d/ S$ }5 i+ p8 V2 z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' m" }9 t; \6 K4 D+ R0 e; p<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  ^2 W% c8 o* L1 c& Y; v9 C1 R<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 Y9 T$ e8 y0 L! a1 b; p1 h5 g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ A  Y4 W  }$ o) ~/ U<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! V* j4 p5 f' Z3 I, i0 y0 u<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 O3 G) G+ D2 j! R9 b9 P. |- r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 d1 G4 Y1 B- |& h<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
: P: Y; z* Y" P4 v8 x/ Q<P>But I never did </P>
+ L. U9 H/ a' Y+ A, C% N<P>但我不会 </P>
+ q. O1 ]. c5 }5 N. Q! V, U3 S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 ~0 s/ g+ E  V5 B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% F7 A; W7 d% h! T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
9 U' d7 T2 ?, ^5 p<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; Y7 E* @  G5 {* H6 H9 U  |& _) j. i% f<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( f" f- W( l; [' J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) H7 O5 n1 Q# @* A: g! w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 K( |3 y$ j: p. ^- P" B# b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; g5 b' u3 m# H$ z( ]+ j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. f' ~4 n! R/ m" w/ ^<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 o! m$ ?: ?6 ~$ u$ F! Y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% f1 ~" {- t7 R5 N<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>