【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ b' W3 w. w" g: }That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  `  S/ e- q0 @: {3 b" MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& N; f4 c1 u7 a  m$ s1 s% C2 iI would probably know how you feel
* @3 B% l7 a) oLove… just the word love
) u, O* \, Q! Y/ U. |' `7 N* oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! e4 J+ _9 R  w, U% U& q- uBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 H* G- k. n( y2 IIf today isn’t too late,
' P; i: K. X3 i& b8 h, K" NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: ]3 @, l, R# F; f9 ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" a( U. _- {& D5 z% _5 ?7 `# UCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 P2 ^$ D& B* S+ E; tLove… just the word love
2 u, w1 H8 U( N, g+ ^$ rWhy is it so difficult to express?
( h7 L) e0 X! O0 LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: o. M' m( a0 b2 @, _/ P( D" CIf today isn’t too late,
$ R0 s. T# N9 E9 RI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% @' [! ]) E9 @Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 X# T: r$ x6 [3 \' MEntrust my love within your heart

7 ]+ W- a& _7 Q) i[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. C; m4 @1 B2 `3 p+ c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 `" n0 k- ^7 d8 T0 r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; o' }! O9 b" F& Z6 g% H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; \# Q. Z$ f# \. A' e5 }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. `; h: O% F$ c% p<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 G9 }% e& J8 G9 Y<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
" I2 w% s9 b, T+ o0 T' G) g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 t0 {2 x* g  }1 T6 r, e6 M<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: y. r* ?1 Y8 W* M8 i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
0 I/ @& I, q; U8 Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
+ z  M$ }! R) ~, ]1 w9 V7 ~<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 g# n8 v3 H9 t* J8 u  Q; A<P>但我不会</P>
) I; g5 D) Y8 Y<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 b2 T4 |; W- V+ ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 C% I3 I% g. z: P  w8 n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ {* \- ^# T' e<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* l" o2 j0 r/ _+ T. V<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 {6 P* l+ H9 r% p3 N8 `, \0 r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 P, e, u6 _: n% u<P>But I never did </P>
" R4 R- F6 J2 o% @5 v<P>但我不会 </P>
* r0 F) R  \0 h# h, Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) C; V# {; B+ i, g% k* K8 c  T<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! B  p" Z: P; t& T; ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) c( R4 n- Y/ Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* W# @4 \( m- p5 C) V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 H4 m" c! y6 P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# ^( y% f6 l2 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 o, A6 ^" U4 s. q' E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. Q7 [( o3 g8 u- s8 t* J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 a1 P! K- }1 s这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>