【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
+ J9 e, y3 g2 Z+ e; Y0 p3 ~, g0 QThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
& g) e) E) Z, x( Y& rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
: k$ D. W$ x* h# ~, `But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. g2 N1 @. l7 z) K: YIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 `% D- a- \* W3 H! C2 g% ]/ OI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
. c2 R- e; K" A# MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
; _" C$ V4 K3 I1 v& ^/ i" t+ FBut I never did
' c3 m) {/ B8 l& [) Q5 jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% _8 ~+ m+ f1 ^" d! a: `& j( L+ ]+ eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 j  W! A, ]2 ~4 [$ j: l$ e/ p5 CCan I entrust it to you?
; k& \  s9 C/ c* C( Z9 C3 `Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- t0 Z( X, n" _" R/ R. ^/ ?& _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* p: ?+ Q- g5 J2 p* W0 X. KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; {* n6 j/ F, D. a% ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* j; E: P$ `/ _, G- `: YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 g  C4 b1 n$ HEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
2 F; v' H! D+ e! hEntrust my love within your heart
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+ b: ?/ U5 x9 t' u3 s7 P[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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) ]; L7 E) Z9 r, V) F<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 Y; }" B# y% A) u* z% T4 R* x7 l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 _: e0 ^, }: o6 ^  K/ w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 y- n, {# I6 F0 e# ]( O$ X' T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 a3 ?5 O  t) S5 [5 K1 f1 y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 ]( q- a. B* ?. v1 E( }% d* `* B) C<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
/ _" |9 {* {( K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
0 R, ?0 \5 K2 t<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 D2 A; J- Z' \: j" P<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  `# O) q7 @7 k3 p  d<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
3 v7 \7 i* M2 v: }3 U0 d8 {# y  ?<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) r* x$ O6 T( T( L& s4 L<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 u/ N' l7 R! P' t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ {9 g- Q4 x: W5 c<P>但我不会</P>
0 O  w! N0 F7 t8 ?9 o<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" n1 J$ T- S, v& ]7 K6 X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ z% {' d# s% G& l6 ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- X) O) P) L* X& J/ {3 h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; [$ j2 O: h/ i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ w! P% P0 A+ L- B<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 C+ _% _- ?' s. m3 l! ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
" g, Q2 i0 I7 J; z& S<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 B2 ]  x, |. R% `<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 X- N% N, |6 Z9 H) `8 t9 d7 Z+ w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 s0 v: _$ K$ ~9 c<P>但我不会 </P>
1 @2 D" o, C; L) E+ t& c( y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 D( k: [. ^7 s) }1 J' ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 u4 |" k# t/ D% \4 Y. ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, q3 T* z# Y( Z' ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 w9 R/ G6 c( r& C0 W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* X( N1 ~) d! `( s% Z0 Z% {1 S" H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ |; H; a8 C2 _& w: b* i5 n1 R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! [9 ]  Q7 t4 ~7 D& \) @- u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( J+ M# J5 H6 A* r# t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 ?/ S- m! W$ C% l- J$ f$ ]8 }2 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
. v+ M0 D; E. r1 V" q1 ~* e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 H6 Y5 t, r- |" H<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: H: h8 u% _/ Z: \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>