【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
- `3 f3 a8 i* WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# x) J% r7 V, ZThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 [8 P: A+ u3 _1 t$ AI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ E/ u& Z/ J" `2 u1 X0 XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 e* S& ^& e$ u6 O; |4 l/ L8 B$ C6 CIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" |( H1 t, `/ S( _* x3 N- ^Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 F8 ^: t0 |; A$ Q. L. S' DI want to confess that I love you,
3 P# a9 j- K% Z1 n4 }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) J; x4 H+ W% x( U" V6 d3 F- U4 mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) i0 Z" L- J( Q' t( E8 g0 tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 P& m: x& A4 N' qEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& M2 R! |+ s) I0 D, B, UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- M. A- X3 ~1 Q2 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
6 @" I, c. n+ G) A/ ~, q) A/ \Can I entrust it to you?
5 ]; t$ ]# j) j, T2 k( @+ KEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
# S( J+ K/ J, e. H<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 Z% a' Y5 z/ D<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  J' L, M: O% r& x3 ?<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ l6 {+ H" L; H+ A1 Q1 u0 |. j<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 T  Q- R2 i! c  A' I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 [) S2 O& U/ |! j! d0 d<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, j6 D2 c7 K% n! ?2 d# B6 s1 x* r<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ l# U5 _8 E( r( t+ y* P0 R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
& |1 t- m6 d! e. f% G( W+ F<P>但我不会</P>
$ j; z8 b  U- G4 F& O, |% \) t<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; x" A7 L* }. e" S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  g( k  Z" }9 z- C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 e; X! n# c' `2 q: k8 w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 m' h2 L. B/ M: g. r+ C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 w  U/ I! I, T' b7 G" a* L<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- u- B  K6 v) \, g' B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* _8 ^) |6 m, d; d! z3 t2 r( G& t& ]<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
1 G2 x1 Q5 P' v. |5 r% R<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 D- J7 x5 t5 l0 B2 r8 A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# A- b, e/ C+ f" E8 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 K( h/ U) Q* \. o8 b3 D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 l7 O! o" k7 B2 T6 f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) h/ _) s3 q+ Q1 D, F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 n9 K* }* Y; R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  D3 {* J$ `, F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* k; H% J$ q! |$ [; w  ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 `* d, U. f4 x5 z# f+ Z, ?! \<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>