【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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! ^1 G0 u' ?) _$ ]( L: T& H' N我另将歌词附在此。
! _% P3 ~, J$ LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
. x2 f* L; d% X! G$ w4 H! ]We meet and talk everyday,
! F* \6 Y( g2 Q2 u3 {6 t2 @6 {8 n4 XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' O! V& h: K7 h) H# `; s! j0 p# QIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 g, f/ v5 l! O+ dI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 }. p; }* V7 a  k5 wI want to confess that I love you,
: R8 B7 ?$ K) kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
. A. _2 t6 u5 D6 WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 x) n; ^- _2 [4 g0 `, c( GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 Q5 z3 ~7 S4 p/ @0 f# aI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ t& T' }5 k6 nEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
# ~" z$ p8 K5 U5 d/ U1 S/ gEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
: e6 ~& v1 ]' _! \6 W4 o<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! N) {0 F6 I/ f& W% u<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 f0 a) q1 x* [5 n" n2 Q, J% ~<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( S0 T2 O; Q$ j6 m: r3 Y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( @" ^$ n* \' ~8 }' A<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
* p4 ^' D8 U; a0 o- |0 G# k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ E! b) V* ]/ `; X<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  F: ~2 Q, X( n+ `4 ~7 |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 D. T* h  |: e<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! b+ S; A! K; c" B<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: p8 E: R4 @7 F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 `" k# ^( }* G<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& b, z4 R! @/ A$ K4 h<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
6 }3 d0 s( b' J5 |' r7 ^% E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% ]0 \5 f) P( Y1 [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& m  D6 s* ~* t; E* P& W: F; _0 s<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* z- V6 v- `; ~& ?$ ~. K0 X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  X# U9 N& L+ H7 y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- t% T0 H! L+ y2 y$ u<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' q! ?( n' C/ K) }1 e/ m4 U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. {# {. {% Y1 V6 y8 ~0 L$ r) }' ]<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ [6 F& u. u2 }6 d: a8 H) E0 F% A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
# |: M) G2 }, |+ q9 D<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
1 u/ W+ u" s: e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% n1 I: M+ j% x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 ^7 U& _( q" s8 c  N: a6 P# j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( N" ^# {- j$ K/ T' J( \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 @& @5 y% Q" @8 t* {/ t: R' {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
# V3 ?5 i) v  l8 J9 \2 Y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, W8 J( X: y  @0 N% H4 M# w这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% K% u# {9 B' c/ k" O) B这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! S6 O( E! C& t/ ?9 A<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>