【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
) _7 l3 q  Y6 }! I5 [9 WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 ]: n0 n% C  Q6 I' A& HThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 C! n6 n0 I" |5 y) Y, K1 sFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
9 m" _+ }9 L3 jLove… just the word love
% @+ X9 X$ D: Q( R+ uWhy is it so difficult to express?
! t. d1 }7 e. l- f* cI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 X1 t& x* k* @: i; T/ Q5 OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( n6 T/ d6 m. E) i* v$ H- _, XI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ p4 m6 @9 O. N( jCan I entrust it to you?
" L* \8 X9 O8 A3 ]6 AEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 j3 q% W! C8 a1 Y8 cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 V: w* s% B0 ^7 h" [& XBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' X, e  ?5 K) YCan I entrust it to you?
- Y* }: z3 c  ^2 c( LEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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" [; \8 x4 ]- b& b. P0 b' f/ G( G<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" o9 B9 k  I0 r- i2 q6 w4 u. p8 |<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; a6 c0 |6 j. o. u/ r<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, ]. c* k4 B* m8 q/ ~* z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
5 n0 s: q* ~+ A1 Y: R<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# `+ c0 {: U: Q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
! U3 j0 M$ h$ }# ]) }$ x* c<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; v3 {" h9 i$ W- p& X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 K- h: v- z. P" `<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; E- h9 G$ z- P! r; }% l) Q! x) @<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
) o! C& X" d9 B! B. L( h0 D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 ~  G9 T/ k( o1 K+ Z<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% q/ {* ~8 Y0 {  o& l) M4 d) n<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 V1 o  f) v5 S( J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 z$ D# A1 P5 K4 l<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' M, i2 V1 `7 v; Q. x& F<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 x1 h- U" L' b: w) Z3 S  {<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 `# Z& N1 W1 u9 F+ B6 y- `  Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 {- z  u/ Z+ J( |4 u& u4 U0 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ [: q8 v; o4 y' o( U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 q) x- I# J) E# t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ t# O0 W$ K9 _% z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( [: }, ~" K+ G; C$ J; @<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: |  d6 h& g* E<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ D, P" v4 E! _7 B) t" b6 m4 b  T8 x4 a<P>But I never did </P>
: E* o, L9 W9 x9 ]( c# E<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 x, z' N. N3 B. y1 o<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 k0 ^: W. r1 y$ _$ Y+ H<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 p5 M6 k. s8 p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! k8 _5 i9 _$ @; F9 A! S. `$ d! a<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 y) z3 e9 J7 k* o/ L4 w<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  j% \( ^& H! r6 j8 @1 `1 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ z6 }$ {8 ]$ A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 A  F1 P2 ?2 H( o: C. O8 l* J+ w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
/ S$ n' _' D. V8 z  I<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
% r+ q' D  ?. S) e2 W' t# b<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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, P( p9 o' D! W, }0 w这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% ^1 S" _! n8 n$ \) h+ J7 T+ W" L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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