【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 {- p' v% b  f( z$ K我另将歌词附在此。
/ M, k2 ?! q/ c0 }) A  _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% _6 O1 q2 t* k, o6 c! EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
) @# G! S. @' n% r5 YI already loved you with all my heart
! T+ A( S2 @( Q6 I# R* K' uWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ b6 w& e+ g* Q: G, Z& @% {* CLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
2 `! T8 U, d( `& b7 H' O0 HBut I never did
/ k8 ]* u5 s% f" ?% gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) K# v' A" G( i/ |9 J- C. xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, M- @, U6 M/ N* p! VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& W% s' H. u' K$ \* hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  B# q9 M, h+ T) S; w( A3 xIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 G3 ?1 H* W( @9 s2 H& @* P- ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- F; {7 `3 c- o) fEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 J0 v' A" X8 H7 N<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 e3 o  ?* T' I/ p5 I2 Q7 w<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ J, H% G9 V4 b9 O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' b2 H. x- P& c- u9 Q/ S3 T+ F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- A; w7 B3 x  {+ Y( D0 t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" D! C" Y  C2 V* ~. V<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 w( D+ x; `9 S2 b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( o. d# b2 v2 r9 R  g/ c! f) u<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 V# z; U! o4 t. ~- }2 h+ [5 ]<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 S7 _1 O& Z; ^# y+ Q7 f<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
; w9 Z$ F; M3 S% A, I6 m. [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ Y0 s# v, `7 n% G. n) a. [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" U* G9 x( b/ ~7 Y# C1 _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 O3 \6 p$ p6 e& Z! {) k<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; k2 h/ G1 F; B; w+ E<P>但我不会</P>
. x2 i( w9 k6 P  d! X+ m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# K8 \+ I/ a0 j6 s$ R! E9 `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 {* O2 |2 c) r: |. f9 h7 y# W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) ?6 \. ?* x" Y: X1 K" T" U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ ?8 O* Y7 G5 q+ Z1 k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 ]$ x" w) P. D- F! c/ r<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' s+ ^( u- B& n2 _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 _) {& Q5 M. r! ?$ k5 f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* b2 A8 O( I8 Y9 p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& _+ k" ?7 G& r5 P) g  ~( m, M3 z<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 f" w. O8 H) t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 N) J( d/ i& h  J4 Y  a  S<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& V8 ^! x8 E% o3 e) U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 X' |5 d- P* o% }4 F; g: Y<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! s( q+ H9 T& D/ Q3 l3 y$ J# e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. S# L$ S$ S* ~" L& T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 s* P" Z+ Q( Q% i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: T2 G* R2 B1 u1 u0 e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 A, m; f1 ^: Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! U, X, G, p9 x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ N+ `- b, ~0 p- j' V: n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

) m+ I6 ~" H( E. {9 J$ d$ ?* N这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 G4 o3 T& P( ~; u5 ^这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 |/ v" p6 `% o9 Z( X<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>