【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 p  N, g) {! d, G% ~9 R9 Z- g  SFrom the first moment we met,
+ l4 N6 w2 L. ~3 N0 iI already loved you with all my heart
4 `0 }2 R% q/ `We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: S; E3 W, ~( i' e' ]" b7 l( aI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; h* D; j( V$ M! P' oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) j" P# g* ^1 ~3 NBut I never did
9 Y& p7 ~% s4 n. X- l+ EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) j% z# p1 v7 ?7 u4 Q0 D( EIf today isn’t too late,
8 e8 J+ K: n6 m% [5 U6 `( q6 {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% S5 v  T" e1 h* Z, UEntrust my love within your heart
6 ]3 n1 J* Z/ ALove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 d8 H* d, W) V" O6 eBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- j: ]4 O  D# D4 a; ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' f. W" w# A' R' ?0 v6 u+ ^3 zCan I entrust it to you?
8 i+ \+ T' T) a: {3 j2 i# v, V1 PEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' W5 ?% ~2 X- l1 M" d' y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 i; p" P1 N3 U6 c% j<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( A/ g8 H* T  Y5 K+ n<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% t7 b2 x7 {4 t/ E; N3 E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 q& F7 D1 N: P0 r9 }; |" m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 [4 L) Q  S3 _( a5 W9 ^1 E<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- Z- _$ {( k. A<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% G# N7 w9 P% h. b$ x9 a& R( Y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! \5 M' a6 D& _- Y! J! p<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
2 u% F: P" D3 C1 M& [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- i5 e6 E. Z0 i2 t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, v1 I+ k- n' Z; Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( J8 G2 J7 ?8 k) a& k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( K. \% v6 h  o- ~! i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; g) j" h, m# d: p2 T+ H( _6 g( [<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 U# J2 C9 }% R$ O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 C4 l( a1 y3 n$ N. B/ j. c6 Y( g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, y2 O: Y) T! {6 D& u9 O, \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 q+ r: x# G6 t! J! y% C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 m( s8 o/ q- W0 {5 p<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 d; l0 j  C$ u<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# l4 T" D/ A- F<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" ^' Q! }% [, g! x" z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 |# c( \7 x- _+ R<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 w5 n6 G( @' X  K5 }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
- E- f+ k# m5 |( }. M: L7 j0 r8 w<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- U7 E2 v6 h' m6 q0 R/ h' Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; j  Z- D2 ?8 q4 O% T4 N" z' t<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 T+ H/ M+ O, Q& r2 `9 A<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 |0 W9 J/ ]9 ~1 g2 j2 |8 r<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 _. x: x# `: j1 J0 x: q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' C1 X4 m1 Y& H/ b+ J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" T7 W4 {/ f4 u$ F% C# t: s- [) b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* R* V3 G' b5 x$ ]: }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 U0 F0 c7 L' v& `! T' g+ d9 ]<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; U8 `- P. V# Z6 W! i<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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; X! W& U8 L& n这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>