【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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: N4 G% ^( r/ q- N3 J1 F我另将歌词附在此。
) i! ^" I) R! `( sThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
$ V7 q* r$ o$ |( F- a! G  ]" ~( y& x, Y% cI already loved you with all my heart
" S# v/ N1 @6 G- z, ^We meet and talk everyday,
7 p7 ^0 C7 D' Z" _But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. P3 X) l/ t/ T' \; p- K( YI would probably know how you feel
9 |- S, R0 x* hLove… just the word love
( @. o: I  ?0 u" r+ TWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* _8 Z7 B) ~9 HBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" A: x9 z& R3 H4 AIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- D, T3 H( |( t1 x1 ]Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 h2 |- d) N# E2 M8 b- VLove… just the word love
7 y& V9 R' G& v+ R  `8 m# v% nWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& R; p+ [  U, vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, F* l* S2 I, H/ o# MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# [% B" n+ H4 Q+ j! XCan I entrust it to you?
" R  Z  b. ^# @Entrust my love within your heart

" {- O, r( `+ Y6 s[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 O) M8 x+ y9 }' L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) N( d8 C/ D+ R9 {7 M! h# m<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 n/ k: s6 m, [9 U# g3 X<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 j9 {' c& {' m1 M; P8 b<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
0 y+ _9 l( m* A9 G+ e. ]<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, L* @' S, p- p  m2 Z  c$ T! E<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 ^% F8 I4 ^1 }1 Z% ]/ B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 ~" E6 E5 h7 o3 y5 N' M<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ R( n) u) p" e/ w0 s. k8 J<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
- L/ U6 b& U- y  C! ?<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- p5 A( {; G3 ]% t& p) G4 H: H, M- y<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ ?! ?+ |, I) x' [: K& E- [; y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 \# @: @& |- X# n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" j: i2 o5 @+ o* \% G+ Z. a& t5 y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 ~9 Q. p/ s2 I8 l( m- W<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: }6 D7 y1 }$ W: x5 H& [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 Q, N0 {; `4 s' ]<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 r% }% }/ D# I: E<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
% r3 f& q& E+ _+ R4 p( W5 j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% n( G9 ^) j0 I1 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ K/ H# ?" v% }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 h7 [" y+ c% f. Q* {6 j$ R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# P7 \6 a% b  s8 I0 W& Z7 z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>