【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ C! f& K; B8 @7 A- [I already loved you with all my heart
5 L! ]! y5 n5 x6 r1 @( C: p( \3 ?) TWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 G% o0 P/ t; R$ BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
: ]* t$ J1 }! r. {/ g* z; r2 |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
& `- `( I, M% Z/ GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 e, g) Y. x' SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" |+ [) c0 Z# f# t% O( \: D* VCan I entrust it to you?
6 N9 j5 Y1 ]+ C: U- m( vEntrust my love within your heart
1 e. `: d0 B' ?0 cLove… just the word love
) v) @* K7 v: T, U0 Z' F- V3 gWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' K) ~! E* |7 Y- wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 F' g' ]% T6 i9 fCan I entrust it to you?
/ p6 B( l1 [0 W% i  Q: q/ W' b5 rEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

# Z1 Y. W) r$ `! {' g0 [1 K, H<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 Z, h- F; l/ t, R+ Y/ G4 t<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% `1 \: S: |5 e1 ~4 t! ^: o2 F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ v9 w! B+ @: A" Q3 U. y0 }, w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 z6 S$ @: o# m% \# [<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) v, P; C7 Z; v<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
) a% i/ X, |# P! M' I% y% F# O6 @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 t% T  T3 Y% Q$ f<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 ~; M9 j; w- F- G0 I. ^<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
4 B7 c9 x8 l5 K0 ?; P$ Q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# A! K( y& a# y+ F! Y$ y6 C  m; d5 `<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! a6 R9 H- `& k7 Q: K, J- A6 [<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  F$ N2 |* S) }4 K<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- g) R3 k; a% O- P: a* p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& n0 d' w( X% F3 v" V) S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 L+ W% g3 Q/ B, ^8 {! I5 V1 d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 O+ B0 e) G4 U$ {) i1 P: O0 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ \. S. @% S/ l) Q4 U  a* ^2 Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
6 S- `( _$ O4 G. T  i. o) v<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, I7 J4 f/ o- q- f* P<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ ?6 A" t1 w: A$ K<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 N/ f9 w+ Y+ `$ Q<P>But I never did </P>
# Y* Z# ^$ b* ^& h" s0 {( c<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ N! f" ]+ E4 d- j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 a! n' C/ {9 G, L: f7 Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 G( {) S4 K# i! X; r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. n; I. \+ J" ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: g, E8 {) u) o' z" g3 z$ V<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ K# u2 {$ o) k, U* X. d: X8 g<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 y, R" U# N( _# @) D" ?9 ?<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

, D, z9 C+ ^, M1 t5 |) ?" K! U这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ |' A: @+ C$ D& X9 X: d4 s<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. e3 M9 i1 U) O' p1 d( b3 C<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>