【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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$ W: G. c* v8 M- |1 G( _我另将歌词附在此。
% S/ @  p, \$ _( P; B' A: S2 z0 O! j# fThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
" E' [6 u( f% o8 m: WThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ k) F/ x: Q8 O, L% K  kFrom the first moment we met,
! H  V0 c* v- [I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' v5 }/ z1 B; d: g6 {7 [! r$ TIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' `% ?/ r+ Z/ [% T5 U) yLove… just the word love
0 Q8 x) R  F% w4 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 w8 B2 V9 @7 }9 X9 p/ B7 II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% n0 A9 X+ G. w( P$ Y3 ?! w( eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 J: A+ _. \* E: Y2 ^3 |Can I entrust it to you?
; W. J. r) M5 T/ n, iEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 p6 j2 ~) U) f+ JOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 O0 ~: [5 I/ J3 ?2 _  Y( yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. \- O9 M! c/ T# rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ r& z( T# u; a) S. S' Y: _" VCan I entrust it to you?
0 J1 I0 b0 L5 Z3 K  p& H+ L6 oEntrust my love within your heart
9 Y9 |# c& a% s+ ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 ?1 r7 K3 Z. x+ }' v<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 x  H9 B/ y1 q8 I, M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 Z" B" P+ Q. s6 s<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
, \) g: Z8 b5 V( H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
! @4 Z! {) f7 z6 R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 D& e& n: s1 e/ U# [# y4 v* S<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
# @' X- V" U" O3 J& G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 |* a9 @- h9 B& g9 i1 G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 S, I# ~  O# h<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 {7 Y8 O9 L, A$ C: [<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 L6 A1 w$ k) O2 M; v6 f5 M, |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 R) @% R8 N8 K8 a+ |7 C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' q$ A' L, v* s<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- `, {1 f) Y1 s8 r<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) a) A3 O3 u1 z3 H+ s! p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 I" z$ b$ }- b<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ H: M" g( m- t8 P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, G  t; `! G% d9 O. c( q- [! Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( b! ~1 |$ E* ~9 R<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
$ |- }' T/ ^$ z1 o; g<P>但我不会 </P>
( Y/ N$ ?% `& T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 t1 B2 W3 a) ]& q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 d) k. d: y$ |9 f5 l1 r<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) Y6 l% U. W6 j* a: Q  n8 U2 m, {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% t4 A! b% b8 P6 f5 p" J. U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, }7 w4 c, D! l2 A& P; A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

2 m9 k; d, R4 q/ |' f) `7 O) j这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>