【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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7 \+ F3 G3 y0 E; l6 W) \$ B我另将歌词附在此。
1 ^, s4 N4 g8 E( G' AThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, k8 R& t4 a" g, B0 a7 }% ]  yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
+ x" `7 [; ?% y/ [( h% @I would probably know how you feel
  m: N6 T: I# g- cLove… just the word love
4 g) D# r) e# w1 W- J3 n( rWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  ?) A/ A5 o1 D9 j$ Z+ Y+ T# a9 SBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* _; e9 F1 ?6 H& O: }If today isn’t too late,
( O  V2 o# i1 c& FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! {3 X+ i# n5 z. RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 t3 M7 q" |# H2 S9 V6 Y: ACan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" q0 I, ]8 Y; H- B$ O% V& A& o- tLove… just the word love
* L% v' [( r  U5 U6 |3 wWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
# j+ z2 I/ u1 x! }But I never did
4 |, P. L% F  V1 R  L% ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 Z7 P; `/ e% Y) ^3 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 @8 z: |+ I/ ]9 G/ p4 KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ p! F9 _/ f/ sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 a0 _! W: d8 B$ C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' u* Q1 k! V: m<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' A- Y  k. \& q/ L5 `, t% p<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
: n4 P0 w+ M1 G1 I" P8 H$ Z<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. k+ V. G/ [) [3 [3 u: E9 M- R+ G* ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
$ h& e+ [5 |- E+ Z, L! ^; i: R<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) {8 \& B) M" ]! Y0 ~5 K9 S5 F+ S1 @<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 k& s  V8 ~- b. d+ P5 c<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ s6 L+ r  ~8 F+ L8 X<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 t( v* }. U: ~<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. ?6 J) ?9 p! c; k1 P<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* W6 ~# b" r/ ~% i<P>但我不会</P>
" N) _! F7 L( X# M- Y7 a<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
- A. R. @9 \+ c) T6 i<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% R# i8 b  w9 r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: Z7 d2 b! r0 d1 {$ D' R5 @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- Q% m  G' B0 L# A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ Y& @& O  V! h" H' r, r$ O  Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. {4 g$ v) w) W2 h  m2 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 n) O; m' U3 p& I" J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" ~& x% |& f0 i, v( ^<P>Love… just the word love </P>
4 P0 q) _( H8 V% z9 Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 U- G+ M* S& Q, Y  S  Q8 c4 b" g<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
% l( f. B/ T: G8 ?% M0 N8 L( D7 r<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! E  Y0 R" i% q* X& d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" g0 _' \+ ^, R& L; l5 C+ ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; ^9 t  [" i" g8 b3 u9 _: k$ Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 O# U' I+ t) p9 W1 Y# {5 {! h3 q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 w" T" z6 U" s# O& y" |' W0 A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 @+ k% b$ t! H 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

; k6 x3 f& m; T4 q/ U8 V这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% N' J3 t3 ^4 P# E: `. t* T0 d$ D: z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" Y* g. j. j) J; f/ }# S<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>