【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. m* x  E' M" C* Z5 A; J' C我另将歌词附在此。
8 o8 N) c+ O( `  xThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  s' v! x# X8 e/ {7 S: xThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ Q, J1 C$ |. R0 i* dI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 M/ _( }; x: Q- ?0 W$ R* ^But I never did
; L/ e) ?  L4 J3 l6 EOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& Y6 L1 d# Y& I7 f2 iIf today isn’t too late,
# Z$ Z( J* M7 b3 `4 v6 L- zI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  B1 ~- ?) ~& L+ n: aEntrust my love within your heart
' M* R$ }8 q! t+ s  l- aLove… just the word love
- B4 E# Y+ Q( P4 n5 DWhy is it so difficult to express?
. `4 H" T1 Z' k7 V( M1 AI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 W8 X9 c( R8 l0 u) L9 nOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- R1 B0 n2 Q# k0 [0 U. GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 H: ?) C; p; m& g. ~4 R; o) kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( e4 }- I0 T6 v7 I% z$ h6 V& ]Can I entrust it to you?
, k5 e" l- C6 ^+ lEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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$ v8 B+ g2 B+ S+ h+ K) _, A. R7 I[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( K4 f0 t% L6 m- u<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; Q9 \, o  x6 m- |" }<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 f: f$ |, h0 y  h) ]. ~) j<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 {0 P1 }- w1 F$ N3 l4 x<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 q& M  o: k# G, q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" ^1 D" z, C, M6 U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
) P1 |$ ]* m) w  V<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) |8 }1 G/ T8 w; }0 v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
' P# l, u$ B& q  `1 B$ z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
" q2 X  r9 h; {4 i0 f) `+ U<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
# k8 F1 J' o9 M% e$ o. r<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 g: Y0 D0 v) t  L  k' |<P>但我不会</P>
- G9 z9 R# Z2 W$ M5 f) \" x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! l2 f+ T3 Z" {' A; M* t; L<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 o; h; Z* g3 K3 I! Q<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, w+ u9 W- \( \4 o, k9 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: {- K# {( t6 X5 b" \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ E+ j' ~6 O: q5 a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: I. k& L2 l$ j' V* b<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. i9 P9 H8 W, h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ C. z0 `$ i. o) A<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 L# B; j6 T* ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 m" K" [' q/ I4 a2 M: _: H0 B/ z<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, F3 i2 K9 |% C1 |<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
' W1 S) ~& U( ?3 _<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
7 [7 n3 G2 ?$ c5 d9 y3 P  Y<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 ~0 N( {- x* `' L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 [7 R- f1 |4 a<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 Z" o- j, B. z% A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
; S' Y  y2 c/ C/ n) K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. ~% t6 l8 D8 A' M+ T) ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% R  o0 i, o- [1 e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 d  A! P3 W, j/ o1 s! y. @( M, h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. `5 P& V! {" Q9 c& \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 E5 `! {4 w: l; U2 g<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 o' M/ R, J2 [<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>