【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
; m$ K" e# @1 C0 l. \We meet and talk everyday,
; e2 h$ N% v& K3 P! u- hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 b% D5 r4 L7 v1 \" OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
, n% w/ {3 \8 C8 v% C2 _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 E  D# m% O% D: bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 N3 h( m5 ^, a% N7 x, R- zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
, c. @8 D$ Z. K& p% \Entrust my love within your heart
# _8 [) D7 Z' t3 O3 \8 V- I% _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 E9 R6 j5 H9 A0 l( tI want to confess that I love you,
9 `6 `- H& F* M. U8 B' mBut I never did
$ G9 R( u$ `5 kOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: G  {3 W5 S8 A* vIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ N  s& E$ Y+ Q. s# tCan I entrust it to you?
% R8 L/ O/ U" C# u% i7 v3 YEntrust my love within your heart
' B: T& E: }; q- GCan I entrust it to you?
) n$ a/ _# q6 _: V6 y& {2 s' a: WEntrust my love within your heart

% i3 s1 R" U1 @3 c) S! s3 ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ H9 u+ _0 h: Y+ F/ e" D<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* g: Q, D& N; @. v/ w2 N( t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; M1 c$ T) j$ a( N# n" ~9 {  u<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& J* ]7 k( Z0 k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 G( x* |& y4 T& f$ ]3 }<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 X, C1 n8 x% v3 {5 ~* O* K<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
9 r  a+ N: i7 L; f4 q5 H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 r! G7 C3 I/ t. E) j' j<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 ?8 i4 O5 T( g% `<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* J3 y: v+ u5 u/ k9 U: _5 G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 S9 O4 E9 X' e' \' S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 O& l5 X. N2 R$ v0 u' q1 b5 x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% d% o+ h5 G; B) Q# o. f8 h<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 t! c2 i) O, W1 r/ n2 k8 x<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. E7 X) n3 i7 T<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 {. A' q4 Z" F# Z' r8 `' h. U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 ~, X% s% Z  \2 }' G<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ j* t- x8 X, K# a' n/ R' w- ^<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 K, v8 o  d2 m* i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 F& S/ r: w0 V* r/ \7 L# f9 S<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 G' p2 C1 t6 @4 }: G8 W+ _" a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 W) ?& v) r# |' S<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- K) x1 T( t& x: x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' X1 c- k- K' d- g3 ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. X& P2 K  q. V, }( }" [: u' @' s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  K( |+ I4 d' H* h3 M$ W4 S0 w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
; l3 u) w! Z" Q' F  X<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
& W" x( Q/ L9 q3 X& g- H3 f) f<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

( V+ K8 C' y( }6 w% y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' o. ]# W9 h- n<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>