【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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$ c2 e8 d( o6 T+ j+ v  f我另将歌词附在此。
* G% b4 a2 H, v0 S+ d- o4 R2 rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
* N/ _; y6 |" V" iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
! w: f+ X# A) |. L- ?! g% [* r7 _We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" `+ d4 Y, V( U6 ?6 P9 r: {I would probably know how you feel
1 s" y) _4 \* C( Q# p. nLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
8 b5 `9 ^# q3 K* QI want to confess that I love you,
) h3 A7 V/ t; x) x. J1 `. nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( n9 K' Z# r! aIf today isn’t too late,
1 K! J: u' y$ ?" ], NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% x+ V) d4 j2 j3 X3 |: i& r$ i: QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
0 Q" m2 b) s( c0 R4 D3 hEntrust my love within your heart
/ ?! D4 t5 m$ ~5 JLove… just the word love
. S* p  |/ P9 M( t7 t- N' b9 u% C( Z: fWhy is it so difficult to express?
# f0 p3 ^) t9 q. x/ p4 sI want to confess that I love you,
$ M# D$ e+ w4 ?+ d* MBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 S$ l% n! l# VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* J4 q& W3 j8 u4 P; sCan I entrust it to you?
$ F8 B  ^4 a. ~# nEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
9 F$ z; M+ [8 V/ AEntrust my love within your heart

  c  ^; j5 e. b[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 ]  o5 Q5 n1 i- g  Y/ J# N. o<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  J* @+ F& A" F4 d, }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: z; t9 w6 g* b; E  \+ y( n<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, q& I+ _0 N5 ?& ^<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; Q" `% C; @! T0 R" X) l: U<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" E4 C% h% J0 E9 K2 Q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 Y$ l4 j& ~+ G* l2 e<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% M$ s/ D/ Z5 E, L/ ^2 c) s$ k<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 c7 d0 I5 [3 \: z9 s<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 U9 X% [$ _( v! i# j& S* J<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 I! {, n1 }$ X# A2 E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# E- D( Z9 r4 {$ C9 x- a<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; \6 \- M8 E5 {" L" S; h<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) X2 S& O/ A! C. H* p: Z6 l<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 G' S1 h( K" B, @4 g6 ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 ~1 Y4 O$ _% E% A; s9 u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 H' Y6 ^  O# R4 W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ Q+ U5 B4 K* Q& @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( t2 o. p! ]( s9 X) u1 k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
& U0 Q8 @2 b! g, G2 A<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- T' f+ a% }0 n5 V, p9 x<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; U) p0 o. ], f/ T<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
: f* n  a5 K( t: \! `5 K/ l* w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 k7 q5 I- s7 Y, q6 F& e<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( h* P! a( P2 A$ u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# g# P- a6 ?/ C0 w<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 J& c0 F+ H  X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% @4 f+ W( J  h: R1 E7 G<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 D/ G/ E0 n+ z0 z  l# w+ m4 D# l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, _: n( U0 C$ s1 C( s- ~<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' w. [; Y; n& N# f9 P: j' d# H<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>