【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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$ g; |4 F) K9 h+ N我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: k- l1 E% M) z; Z( G/ ~( Y- H- m# yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) R; [1 i9 O' V2 r/ EFrom the first moment we met,
4 d5 M2 N- @% R9 D9 aI already loved you with all my heart
3 `: t1 {5 k( _3 |8 H& KWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
) G4 I; c2 w2 @; B$ j$ `: SLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
1 j/ }! u& e4 h0 ^& {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! Q% R* o+ V; P  wCan I entrust it to you?
' m. O0 P7 r& ~+ E1 S# z  QEntrust my love within your heart
/ B* x4 w$ f4 j3 Z  N3 aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' j1 l+ o- l9 d5 V7 Q; H7 Z2 J  L! KI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' Q5 K# K+ H# w; o# uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
# o( `) Y2 A; m1 j% wI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
/ f; G, b* H. n! y7 m. W" {Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
! t& X  o* K" x/ @/ {6 T& wEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 |+ A+ Y* R; ~, J2 w- ]<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( j  }+ ~. `. m, O7 D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
8 M% W1 j6 R4 F% w5 _7 H: t<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# \% C& L1 F% ^- P0 g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
# n' s3 U" ~5 J/ n$ q- a<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) c% D2 |2 C( z7 e6 ?- t<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ ]3 g2 x( Y; @+ ^* v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ M, z, p% |- Z4 o5 V% B<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" ?8 A. N  x( ~# ~7 ^<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* J& Q6 l2 a' J& j+ f+ d2 A6 @7 i6 u<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 S- H- T: @& y7 m<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ {1 D0 Y. {3 Y0 ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- a- K5 o5 G0 B1 l. N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ P4 O, R! T6 P: D  C  c+ y5 j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) l+ C; Y# K" ]% u& p4 C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 P2 N+ r) W) L2 n+ Z% m$ ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 ]  C+ ]3 o6 n) `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; ~; x. q+ j. d6 [, B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: M) w! N+ ]& g; Y* K# _( ^( f<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  O) [$ h& t* a5 C2 D6 p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 g" F& g1 `* `' W<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ r( h5 O2 i8 p( i  x- @0 A<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 e, Q) H/ B8 q* H. K; e; z( h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 `9 q4 v" Y2 N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 E( `* E0 S0 A5 z, G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 Q: M3 F$ R" t) _2 {# L* i4 J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
8 _5 g, K) B$ A
9 q" {& K3 T5 n 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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: q' l3 _9 ^4 L, Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 y1 [* ~# b; i! \" b, q/ y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>