【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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% Y8 S/ C2 k6 z' Z* L我另将歌词附在此。
  k1 R: W+ P$ j7 u6 i0 j- dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 T8 |  o- E4 g, Y& \That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ ^( V  k! I0 }1 f& V( ]# Q: gFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
5 m7 G2 p" V0 r' H# ?* Y# r7 k- J5 PWe meet and talk everyday,
8 C9 @( g- I* P4 [9 O6 wBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" {! u# a2 K' u0 z) ~# ZIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ r* j4 z* Z* b1 TBut I never did
6 ]2 [' u0 E' C. N5 M* jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, c) v1 m9 _- o5 ^1 X* \# OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
$ w/ M/ s: \/ b2 Q+ xLove… just the word love
0 n, t( F' t, ~% ~3 y0 tWhy is it so difficult to express?
, s& I& n% o) Z, M2 W/ HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ H1 j# R$ d0 wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 c9 M0 x1 p/ {* ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
) t2 f* H$ V% @; p6 g( dEntrust my love within your heart
  C% ]1 u, ^0 Q6 |Can I entrust it to you?
8 q( g; L  W2 V! K) tEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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& a" V1 X7 V3 C* W! c<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 @- K: g7 j5 @1 f& S6 c<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 E. V7 I' p  e4 Q% T<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! N0 w4 o# p* Z9 P: X0 S5 S<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  y- W3 ~# k7 i<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& H3 l- j/ [$ B<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  `, q, g; _" l8 f6 s0 F% b<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( `( Q) j: H- A2 B' @$ p  \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% i( m5 b' z9 W  v$ v/ {( F<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 ?' x- ~- H8 w! }$ X5 L<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 x" l! ~4 [8 r) r! a' n<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) T$ Q' I5 x" Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 P* C# z0 i+ H( C4 m. X% y: Y! m<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' @& k5 E8 z3 @2 V8 h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
9 ^) x8 w/ l! E, d7 g<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
1 K/ N! P2 ?2 d) `! ]3 J4 ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, a$ W4 `+ U9 r5 L3 h<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ c9 z6 q$ j. G3 X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 @7 h+ O  F) _( S5 v# Z$ [3 ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
. y/ N: L9 E8 @$ D<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: R: D$ i6 Z8 m4 f0 j* a3 j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 l4 K- v: }" f: a<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- L  A; h; U! _. s: L) `! c% @<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. o# }5 c- h8 [; W4 ?# F<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& Z1 E5 H; V6 j( ^2 m<P>But I never did </P>
7 j4 k( T( r; T, t<P>但我不会 </P>
! h) ^, V9 j7 p6 V0 x* Z<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
( E5 O2 Q" H6 S  R<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ L' H1 ?# i' [! o8 ]" j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 O1 i. U3 a( Y& S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% `4 T/ @; g! M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 e* p. }9 _' C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# h+ [( ^+ \; H- t" n7 }0 L<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 u7 A6 S) `7 O! Y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ w- x0 h4 B9 \: ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, C3 G, @# |2 w<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>