【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
- p# [. V/ d! R' a, WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 G7 q1 S) O( {0 e, E$ a. u/ \That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 ~$ P8 N8 \5 S$ S; L7 l# u3 R! Z$ J: yFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
. x3 c) E& M9 ~5 D% Z: f$ DLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" g2 O  l& B  e9 x0 s9 h. j* xI want to confess that I love you,
& I6 A* s: E( _$ vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 t+ v8 i) R( v3 c9 }1 {% o! sCan I entrust it to you?
* ^& ]  B; ~, X$ O, s5 z( Y0 k. [: BEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
8 L( i% S2 i$ d+ w9 ]0 y" WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& ^# \- c- _# G0 yCan I entrust it to you?
$ S( x  z6 s- Y0 _9 oEntrust my love within your heart
; l! j1 `9 O. y9 TCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! b7 D6 S7 d( i% ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
/ g( k+ [5 L# E1 t# @0 O. h8 L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
$ X9 z9 P7 a7 z" |% |. s: K9 v4 v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 G' ^. r( X5 e# G6 Q. O<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& c% T5 X3 t) n$ x<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: O) J8 u4 t1 D/ g5 A8 p6 W<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' n, Y$ ?, x: q$ S! M+ |2 [* a. ]<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; q. N: ~- a, F! c: ?7 r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
: L! T7 a3 }; w' X: a<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( B* N$ Q4 I% Z/ _, M' |5 M<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ _% S9 G& c& M7 d* z" u<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 I( ~4 l! \1 ^5 C( E/ O' U<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' K4 m1 L: S+ I1 X8 W1 W& x<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ \1 J6 L& Q* X  G. ^. S* J<P>我想说我爱你</P>
, F! m2 S8 A3 d1 G( m  C<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 p( b# ]2 X+ ^# z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* U# Y, l, B  F; f1 S<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 ~2 h' \" P8 Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 N) E+ u- B4 h. H8 H* Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- C+ Q5 [6 k8 v) f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& |! A+ N' A9 J  L1 H& O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ e3 a9 u7 Z2 g4 R4 M0 E) O# I! S1 U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- Q8 {  n6 b' C2 Q9 o+ [* n5 B0 c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) `4 E. @! P5 d# o. I<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: Z0 B2 @6 \2 N8 k<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- E* f; X( ?8 V6 D- y; \<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
6 V/ |* n1 I3 k) Y, \# T% r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, D- F) S: |8 H/ d! B9 R7 M. c<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
+ R9 ]. }/ u" q- y' q. F. f6 N1 C<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 Z7 T$ s9 r% L2 r; c<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 ]2 E5 Q9 g' A5 p5 l/ Z<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" Q9 j. K3 B; Q4 A. z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 U/ ?2 l8 g% J6 _4 |: ]<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  l, h, d1 {& f: z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ v0 _8 y3 w- m+ J9 |<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) L- K  v" z6 e: D: M<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' U/ ~: s- d$ p( t4 r) ?<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>