【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
! f6 G: A" c0 w& W8 Q4 e! F, NThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
9 i* Z) [  T+ L0 W7 ?; ZWe meet and talk everyday,
3 d0 _' j5 ^1 oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
0 @: L" q. V" R2 |+ lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 @, Q& s+ _& Y! dI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ P3 G! W# J; m* ?1 F6 @; yWhy is it so difficult to express?
% H% [  m* K# NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% O; C9 j" C. K! QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" {2 L, |5 Q3 ?& [9 A: h0 tCan I entrust it to you?
* I' q* v2 t6 D1 G& b6 e7 zEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
/ W: R. ]1 Y/ _; E# ~3 oWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 @' n! U. Y* C( H4 kIf today isn’t too late,
6 h& ^7 u+ Z: U7 TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ x7 t! X3 F' Z8 [: T7 v3 |( B/ N8 rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
& C4 X+ ^5 }5 i& j1 T' S: NCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

1 I% T. N$ W/ d8 y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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6 |1 [3 j, ~- C" p! S<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 j" g# u$ z0 O0 x& G+ y6 }<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 j5 L& l8 [- c: m5 e9 t<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; |1 `# M3 e+ v; F7 H<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
; @" o* V: E( z4 g. U0 w<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- s" y, n7 l, C& H# M! o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 K: b/ t' P' {' V3 y. ?4 L  X<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
1 s! r* V/ h9 G: E, P7 M/ ^0 o<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* T: A/ H6 S, ], \0 {! l# R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! o" q3 G2 p1 [1 P" g( T<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 b, m  s" b! V, R% V" D% `<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' P+ L* T' U$ \, {0 u- F1 a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ U9 `& I6 A+ G: s<P>我想说我爱你</P>
% Z0 ~& K6 Q, e, O<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( U& l( J+ s. d, H, F8 g* R1 B# G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 Y+ r  |% q3 b. k<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: j- k) v* |6 y3 }<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 U( N' Y( _6 t7 W( E' m; t<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 f& I/ |& k) h+ a3 |4 h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ P  a! }" b- k+ e1 b$ s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" C. P" Y6 G9 `# T* O<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  o: a0 A, x' r( p! |7 l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: J4 H$ q0 r, o; N+ h. r<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 j, R8 q! `) Q1 b<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 h) i8 O, U: I* U+ u, Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! H4 c* _8 ]: B. \' F' a<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% z0 |1 s/ D. \, M! F- D. ?) _( s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. G% Z9 U% A5 h9 C8 {. q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* C4 V8 H. J/ I( d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 k/ A- S5 }, n. F<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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" |, H8 C& r; w; I+ e+ n<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: \5 a; G9 c3 }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>