【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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; S# k' g1 P  j: Q  i& i我另将歌词附在此。
' r9 m; A/ A$ gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
. I  |' s% \  j7 P  LThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
7 y$ I8 ?% x; ]; nFrom the first moment we met,
& v7 v4 Y+ Z# u* t9 ~I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
5 G5 C' Q: M( }1 ]8 }; {7 E- EBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 P- L% l  B2 a# Y; ^; B+ }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
1 E, _: H3 J2 Z. vWhy is it so difficult to express?
1 j4 I3 p# k- H2 O% YI want to confess that I love you,
  d1 P  }( Q) G: ]' @But I never did
, K7 O6 x0 @1 _* ?, x8 @  `2 iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. o% N- Z% z/ `7 l5 x4 K: M. hIf today isn’t too late,
( p% [1 I( V0 f" v- {; |- j7 PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 Q( |; c5 I" y+ Z, i( `8 iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
5 F5 V/ L0 i. s; u; @( GLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# \# U8 [* O& S5 Z+ e% A  O% L- HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
! f) W" f) m3 _" y# e5 mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) {0 @+ O% i# v$ `I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( g9 _4 ?3 ^. S1 I4 v1 `Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 D* t% r- T8 v<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
' b' T+ @) }; `, A<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ s: C$ v. o: p<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  N/ e; g; X" C; f  ~3 W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. F6 f  C3 `" W7 T- L4 l<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ s3 t, s+ N' M" g<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ \' q6 E) I; S, _# W, C* O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) Y+ Z, D. p. `* p$ r: I5 j<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
( i3 y% [" z* {  S' X<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! O8 }( J* T4 A% O<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( y3 Q* V# U' ~<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ m& l& Z2 ?! E* U* J& W; W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ B0 ]; Q) N; h<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, h3 M4 b5 R# k6 l8 s" {/ ~4 P, ?* `<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 e- i/ d0 A; N" j0 P<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
4 _, v3 b, Z( I* i4 v0 y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& g6 f8 b0 D$ u$ _9 s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) A, y% u) d0 m5 _4 p! m7 {<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ m- l9 t5 p# M% ?$ `! Y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 C$ B2 Y$ K0 H0 V* x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: h1 l3 C1 h* C* w<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 a/ [" Z7 z/ N<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
; y, e. [$ S8 g% f; v6 w/ [9 {( z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 d2 w2 Z" Y3 z5 m5 e<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ J1 W6 g* ^3 [) u; R0 _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: B- X2 C4 g- o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# u0 K- x/ e, T6 Y& @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 {& E3 D0 ~: N- I2 y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, ^. S) s7 k& M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: }/ i% o8 X# f! }9 O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>