【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 f* p* W: B; VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" @  |4 R0 @/ xFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- s# {! C. w( V  r. T; X2 TBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 A  v- |3 r/ y% T' j; n% qI would probably know how you feel
6 V. u; }( _: qLove… just the word love
  b& p; A& [4 G. L# {# O4 o# }Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
! R4 `0 D1 q. C7 r5 L' DBut I never did
! w6 ^1 X6 r! T+ ^! g1 Y6 d: z* NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% K- ]1 j2 z) ~% @( w2 y( w2 hCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; ~6 |0 e0 m! `8 C. ?4 _Love… just the word love
* r; m" ?# Z) n7 Y! P; r$ g% |Why is it so difficult to express?
8 A8 r# W9 V4 }. K1 U3 H! T/ e) AI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' t! f. u' _$ O8 r- T* UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 Y% C; W  h3 C& p, w/ H% ^: dIf today isn’t too late,
+ o* w, }: }- y; g0 z  Z) ^0 i7 @9 yI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 ^7 t) O( p( ?2 m* tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 j5 O) v. W1 }, WCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 R& T2 t! h6 g6 sEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 C- N+ e8 t6 n) \# k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
$ |! m( P8 m6 q' N/ K  W8 @" N3 y: l3 Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' V7 {: n' Q  N$ W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 l% K* Q0 R- K9 r1 _) I2 k4 a<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' A+ {* u$ ?! Q+ E  z2 ^7 X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- B: Z9 R2 T3 K% {: X4 u<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) j) A* O% R  V+ S) J0 J/ l% X+ I<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 @+ k/ {+ y" G9 K. y& [<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 Z/ Y! |9 B8 M+ |$ _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. U( {2 g+ R* d$ R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ ]. j' P+ x, {/ [' O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# g, {! G( o  }; \- D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- I: {) m( V3 V8 o3 _! b<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% r. @& M6 }4 b0 q8 J9 u<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% v1 u0 s: \* l1 y7 ~6 T+ @<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  R1 r6 r( U9 Q+ ~8 k4 R<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
& S. A( \( o1 }' }<P>But I never did </P>
, _6 V4 i6 o$ ~( ?2 n<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  Q( c, |! d. q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 e$ {4 _8 A0 ]4 j0 F  U& C<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 s% g; C2 o" W" K<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. |, z( ^) ?0 e5 `4 U$ k. i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# M2 n9 ^( Y% P+ l) e0 o5 E<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 T/ o0 d( E8 Z3 t$ b, }0 S2 X( ~- c<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. r8 I0 I* m- N7 U8 E' \<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>