【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# }( y: T0 @  `$ AI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 ^' F( C  t& S0 y' {' a& h$ WI would probably know how you feel
9 q( |4 B' u! w. }' y2 cLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ H+ g5 G. O1 v, Y5 POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* E& L$ w9 y3 e2 W1 @: h$ NBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 J1 ^& k6 Q" I: |  B0 eIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& g$ h0 T2 c" \3 kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
0 T( G& D! h/ V9 ?* f6 K7 D! @2 y( uEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 {5 t( M1 A% U: z6 s! h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
3 D7 D' e) S# E! e* r<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
1 J, R+ w7 b9 Z5 b5 B1 L& J* U<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) i" M: T& k4 q2 E! `0 `1 |<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
$ p& Q+ S  X$ l7 X) Q- o3 L<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
$ t# H4 ]2 u- I9 U/ g0 T- h/ T. E' `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* [* L  s7 b% P/ ~<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' Z, P. B, z/ e$ _<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
6 b& [0 C2 [) }- c5 [& q3 l0 H" m<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 a) B3 _! {0 J' G7 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( f' Q4 G- N# G/ ^+ @* @<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* y' B) ?3 t: _+ c* \% D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& i: ^9 c; J/ D6 d% n  M: I9 G<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 B$ a7 x" W4 N) x# {+ b- Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& K9 W% U5 K& N7 R9 N- E! m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
$ I/ t/ j- _2 @<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# U0 i+ }& t+ I) x2 b, A- E7 V0 j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  F+ v) k# t8 f" L<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 o0 Y) [6 W; {/ l9 j0 [6 O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# W; }$ e; d0 S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ \) n& ^; M: @* o, r6 [  \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, Y5 s7 w% `) U  H3 ^; q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& C. A. ]7 Y+ O3 x7 m. D! T0 F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 q& e4 j6 f9 h6 e7 V<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; [: W+ X3 P9 c) _3 \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>