【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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) W2 ]/ x' j. O& d: D我另将歌词附在此。
* O+ c, T" r) q% z. PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 M7 d5 }% _1 n$ p% C# s6 RThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
& q& p1 x! X& V* v- y3 OFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
2 H( ?; @& F1 y  H* ?0 O+ f$ _If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 A" u* b: x9 Y+ c7 O+ II would probably know how you feel
5 I  R5 ]$ ?+ B/ S  e: p( _Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" t; t3 ?1 F% U5 G. Z! f  [I want to confess that I love you,
5 [( `. M! Z& DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- [* t( ~; F4 T+ E" w5 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% j* W7 ~- ?3 i5 fI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ _4 T, G6 i9 aEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# q. J5 y4 D# ?! V" s" t  eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' z! L7 B! d* GEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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$ i. a1 p8 d# r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* @3 v- V% I2 \' R$ P, e+ Y) \6 P<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
  I: [, n, J/ p6 b' C<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ c  s) v0 E* V  Y5 }4 d<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ Y( F$ u: `8 s5 H! s6 ?/ W<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% ]% T+ E( `; G& Z. q. e% J<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: \+ a% o! c7 U5 G9 ?5 s<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" Z8 `6 o9 k! K; Z) ?3 \<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
7 w0 s% D4 A9 I+ q) S; k  H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 P0 P' ~8 i; N( J/ R% O. }% J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- O5 j* n* x/ o- k! `. A! y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, o0 ~. @: c6 ^+ b9 n) N( W$ C<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% O) q' ?9 A' F1 |7 X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 S7 c- e2 a! o, m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& [4 }. |1 R' a% [0 v/ e7 r6 M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; p* h- T* ~3 m# p% X" U<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. ~) f8 @- F. k% O- u<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
: i3 g( q2 g! t' L: {- ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ B# b6 d' z* W7 I. r1 U& C2 k. k6 X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 u+ x4 h+ G+ c6 T1 S, n<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 b- K' O6 z6 R% d( ~<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' V+ H+ n. X# J2 M& y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- J! s7 |8 x# @8 Z3 V<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# m% h: n- y8 G8 J* P8 |  y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
; Q. N6 I! b; v- H3 r2 h<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 Z7 \) L9 B; v+ N- w$ }* b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 y9 e  n9 {) I$ H% M<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 W% Y' y& G! P$ Q  @/ w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- f; p# N: j1 \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 C4 j8 t# B3 |! @$ \0 \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. ~6 ^- Y* T, P这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>