【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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* `% Z( g( F- w* K: _我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' W8 G: y5 R& a* j1 ]From the first moment we met,
6 ~# V" Z5 G, J& W/ iI already loved you with all my heart
! {7 p' [7 F2 y% Q6 [We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
* x% W3 l* `3 ^: ~If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
, ?0 F0 r' g& k: K- \8 Q0 pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& Z8 ~( D1 ^/ y' zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# p" \1 @* p; [* `. g: b. y1 ^; eIf today isn’t too late,
6 i7 F% J3 Q0 I! K0 mI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- o/ h8 m6 Z% g* [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) a+ k5 q, J1 n( y/ TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% H  }; ^. A' A# MIf today isn’t too late,
- \% G6 p3 h; l3 @9 S4 ]# FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 c4 L7 J% Z% Q7 g& E2 d) l4 ~2 h8 WEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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; B8 d& N' i" F! J; f<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 {; [. l% s$ y" d0 U6 o" y<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 n( S. ?* p" q1 D! y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 q  z) A$ b, B, i<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' Y0 P; G* E, G& F<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% O  a# {! @) f% s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& @. h- _9 m0 S, u' s<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 A3 I3 G$ ?" }# J  ?7 [: l9 D5 X<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* V, x$ p8 U3 z- |<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; ^6 h" D! W. T) D% ?- d+ B<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
& l2 [" _! }$ E; L<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: ]( I! z% T3 Y, n6 o8 A$ F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
5 l" C7 I( S# X% a7 L7 `  ]; f<P>但我不会</P>
( \& _% X9 h# x8 E% ^0 T<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
+ R; D/ Q6 p+ f+ t4 \<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 {$ B4 ?* p/ ]; p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 \  r+ k2 ~# u3 k- C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 S3 X2 ~% ]  Q; c<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 ]: U& R" |* |/ H) C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
3 X: ]0 P& t2 B6 S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  h. V, H: v& [2 s) z3 K- O<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' w  Y; Z+ |2 C4 n0 L9 e: W<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 I. f5 b% D3 x! K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 i9 ]) s4 ^0 ?) M% L1 c  z$ s" O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
6 D- z% v5 P8 U  O3 U<P>But I never did </P>
- X7 \' A, V5 K' M0 p<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- ?: K; d) j/ @: q  j9 K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  I* E3 h, Z) `: n% M8 b" d3 g<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- _. C" ?) k' T6 i% p! E; X5 ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% f& u- g4 W# ]( h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 o, B% \/ n) k; N8 c/ y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% |* l% O5 Z6 R& l2 N; r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, F* n+ `/ x9 Y. y1 Q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

% Y- o9 y% |( J* k, W$ E# k2 v这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>