【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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8 G3 w0 F& i9 ~我另将歌词附在此。
. C# \& p% j8 Z6 s0 i- k* JThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
# T6 i" |& g$ }We meet and talk everyday,
& B+ w0 ^4 a% r; bBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
2 M9 |2 r5 Q- _) ]: sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- O) y- ~, R' u$ O0 k3 F& ZOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% O5 C, r9 N/ w/ G  u0 kIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ i8 f; L2 U9 m5 ~0 p% `( {  pWhy is it so difficult to express?
& Q2 G" S" x( e# e" U# P( y+ DI want to confess that I love you,
* ?7 c. E4 y+ ?* iBut I never did
( e& R  i/ l+ h+ {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  s. h5 g# {/ A- Y& OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) W. u4 L+ E9 E' G& D6 u5 E! T+ I2 xCan I entrust it to you?
- l: [9 U$ C( V) O5 |' }Entrust my love within your heart
# G: N3 d5 U9 ]' P& @2 A+ YCan I entrust it to you?
1 L" E3 O% u2 X2 AEntrust my love within your heart

1 g( ?) X6 o  F' _[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
4 e' X' T& {( F<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 X% U  _' R6 j; o! |. N# r2 f0 r<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, e$ f! A  ~) R! q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! X  @, v' Q0 P* x- X) Y<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
( c- O, \/ l6 d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 R/ {2 k/ u/ L5 z- ]1 z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ {4 z2 J' |, j/ R! _3 Z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  z1 {% P4 e: ]- e* z: D" P: l% i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ C- R' d3 i: R<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ \% p' Z- n$ f" J: j1 r<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. A4 R4 A( D& M/ V: {$ _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ P: r4 u8 j; i<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 p, E! u7 b4 g8 f& A+ h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ @/ q$ H8 |  N4 J# p% F) Q! {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. Y: n- ]) _- N% C<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 K) u/ f% R/ w7 r- J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, {1 w- b- W, q% ~* T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* R3 u% G9 F! C2 G. s# _% O# W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ i% j) C, p0 }7 m& s' G6 [<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
5 u0 R2 c; D& Y8 `( J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# L( h1 u; S/ D# s  \& o<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
  [* [# f4 ^. r<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 C2 |0 n' Q1 t+ R/ F. f9 a" H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
1 s, H; L/ `# D<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. E( A# H$ F: D. Q, U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  ^$ h6 V" @( o& @4 A7 s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) ~4 \' @* a. n% I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 P/ q; b: G5 Y7 z% J3 F3 C& {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

$ [" s+ L- w9 M: ]( g1 t这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% s8 k& C) |( M/ H<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>