【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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2 x5 r3 v8 e- E% G( T/ k4 M我另将歌词附在此。
* Z5 g1 C' {5 [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, X" i1 g# D, U. p9 I# ]We meet and talk everyday,
; f1 h! e4 k3 B, P" T2 sBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 Y; g4 o3 Q9 O" a8 y; q$ AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% [4 K6 ~6 c; O. e1 {+ d. BIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 ]0 M$ Q$ \% `+ E- K* CLove… just the word love
/ E. m3 @& m; j& }$ iWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! ]2 M) L, t' d1 D; T7 ZIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% }, |! k) C6 c8 H! X9 k+ X6 ^' wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: h1 L" c! L. w- ]6 O/ kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 g/ J* N7 w8 `" B/ l<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 s4 ^% H; s5 F; Q. \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; u0 p) t- O- o/ s( v% H& a<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: V( t; B0 Q2 F! z4 e1 ~<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: L  Z  B. e, ?) ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
* C' B$ S8 B9 w) _<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% M* f2 ~; d9 o% ?* K<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, y5 e3 x: L9 ]9 X$ S7 J<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( S/ D( d, d! e$ q" Q  ]<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
' F# G! \1 o5 s  v! v+ z9 |7 {( [<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& B  `4 q$ z5 _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
7 Y9 M$ @7 D0 m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, W) t8 O. r' ]/ V<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, q- [) {2 \7 r( ~0 q/ Z9 ^0 i  D<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. Z' t; `' `0 [+ X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; c# f* @( S6 p9 m) G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; |, F& `6 C' s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# \" x/ b( `! d/ n<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- C) j# g/ }7 l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* ?5 [: e! E+ N7 i* B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: a8 f* u/ E/ U2 D" F7 C<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* m$ w: N# F4 Y5 p<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
) |1 k9 S" {5 [/ N& \, _( f3 x<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' I) \8 f2 E! C7 r1 r2 H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* p+ n8 F! D3 e4 o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  E1 O8 {- A4 }) m4 j" E! u<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! ]6 t2 p; w" C! W3 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; a4 Y9 E+ V0 F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
. v! o4 P4 ~7 x7 |' B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 g" i  ]/ T9 h; B0 m5 Y, B8 }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& z" R6 B4 P9 D, a; @' y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ ^8 c5 f& U$ b  O! X, {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! t, J. d# l% W3 [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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, z% f; W  n* M3 j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>