【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
: j: Z9 L2 y+ ~! @) I  jThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 N8 S0 @4 d1 Y; jFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
& t6 o. d( s" e/ wWe meet and talk everyday,
: j% d* w  T# T8 M) ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
( K$ X+ q! d$ W9 E4 E4 Z0 U7 n( CWhy is it so difficult to express?
  e  z+ o( \3 Y1 u6 J/ LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ J; i9 V$ l( j3 a+ \If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( F9 V0 e! E1 v9 O# z+ G1 ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  q* b* X" b6 ]* BLove… just the word love
5 N; a; ?; F& Q. f; V' K* s9 n& WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ H: r7 n; W0 ]One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 O6 `7 q4 F0 u+ GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 O9 t% ]% m3 |) A4 P$ z6 QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; J3 C5 C+ N0 G/ ]# XEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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( P) _" @# s7 I; ]) M[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% O( ^" P6 D! @3 R9 h$ P' k, e<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
& Z/ c. i0 C  a. J- A<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- I, K/ s1 R/ @3 Q<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  m$ D$ ]7 ?& ~2 s7 B& f- b<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
- c  E1 A/ ?' _- j3 A3 B5 f<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 g0 p& [" l. N' P) g: U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 i! [5 v7 g* W' P9 r+ h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 p5 y1 N: s6 \; p<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; k  R0 W. z7 z- Y' Q<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" K: `9 C% G3 ?) d5 ]6 O6 i! S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( s2 B+ L6 H7 q/ p3 `- y<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 w. ?0 l, V6 a5 W: t6 e1 l/ M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
0 r8 D, M! b/ U/ G) [( C' h<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 Y5 K$ b  d. U8 M" z0 H& N' ~' m# B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; ?0 f) D, g3 Z1 F<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 d& l9 g+ v2 f# _) y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, d( m* `6 z+ ?% g! `<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ Z9 @6 F& @1 ]( M( g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 e& v. H4 `* A# W7 w! ~) ^- m$ m<P>但我不会 </P>
6 N* M! M( j! @" N+ V<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% ?7 E5 }. F4 O# a9 y$ k<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
" o) I3 o8 _/ x6 Z  ~$ J/ e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( C  W- q0 {: P" p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
0 {$ ~: `5 Z  p# |! H/ N% \% e4 B<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ N% x, f! s4 D+ g/ g6 h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' A, a3 R1 C4 F( ]) d9 \! Y5 R& k# X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
' t. t7 D8 @- F' z( D  R0 r& S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 p2 h2 r  N! {4 M4 @<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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; q( d* y; P  n3 ]' M这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. }$ [! H8 a7 M5 O3 Y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- e! h  n: o5 `+ M4 Q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>