【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
2 C; j. e$ Q' ~7 KThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- m# t0 z- Q( F9 b1 _$ I; WThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# S* A0 S) O0 l: ^I already loved you with all my heart
; b, q0 V' D: R1 A) lWe meet and talk everyday,
5 K1 P% r  t1 {6 A" l: q2 DBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( v6 N$ q1 Q5 k& O& r/ ~4 Z% @I would probably know how you feel
7 c$ @0 L, l8 V  u* P- RLove… just the word love
# h! j- m& d3 sWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ `/ V' d5 p8 M, H, Z- eBut I never did
/ Q, C  Q/ l* z& d5 O" GOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; E7 ~' H, W$ r9 CLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- H6 a% M) J2 s( jBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. S3 H4 k+ y9 t, |) fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 D0 j1 ]" K- o( H+ O0 TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) O" O: F; H# e3 w" l3 K% yCan I entrust it to you?
3 ]  u: H9 F# `1 ^- C- ~1 u  DEntrust my love within your heart
$ d( r) y' J8 MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 {2 l5 }  L0 ]# x/ k5 R[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ c6 A9 ~/ R5 `6 ?0 C. ?<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) j' E3 O' o. \1 }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; ~" O4 |6 B3 ~+ V* u$ @7 n; @% j, x<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! N4 E; A! H( J2 a8 u% I<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
' Q3 ~( E# e0 f! |2 P+ X% T<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ w& @" i- |) b. y  }! S" {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; {% B9 h" g  j& c/ Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 E3 G5 S: u# |, J& t  Q<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 `4 C: ~8 s# D' i6 ]! R<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! s& ?. \2 |6 \* i7 \& b$ q<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ o, W% ]8 O6 n; K1 Y6 L, M<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 P( j3 D, A6 I: `# W! m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 g0 I  w' m# S. C' f5 b- c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! i8 w& _# S; S$ v$ I' J; d2 {<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
' V5 y3 {6 {$ u<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ {5 t( B+ g/ Q! V; }3 o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, z$ \( y5 _. a: R5 {2 f, x<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 c2 m& B* |2 P  G- x7 i; K' C3 p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 S6 D3 X4 r( S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
7 i5 {& K* u9 O! W! \; f<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: g( i2 y( y/ n' t/ i( M<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
! h" p" h) H; i<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 |# [$ l) ~2 t3 d. ~' _<P>But I never did </P>
0 \+ b" \/ L- X  c3 [! l; @* W<P>但我不会 </P>
- ~. S( {; s: |5 t. S<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 a9 H' G' C7 _6 |# R$ Q3 J1 _% Y4 c! Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 A! w# K8 C6 X- j- s% g% Q( j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! u0 E- u" p' D$ H; G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! A- E/ M  T4 |. z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 C/ Y( ?( Z  T, \  [<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! z6 `% F. W: n; H<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! @" T0 L$ t/ e! U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 a# b9 ]) [& k# X. U' i5 @. ?<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>