【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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' X7 u2 g9 o3 z& u我另将歌词附在此。
5 _2 B+ l9 X9 {9 K% NThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) g. K( }+ t. w& D7 EThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 {( ]" H! g) H1 Y: k! E3 ]; bFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  D* S: I! J5 Z* _2 zIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
! }. e$ p1 ^' J$ y' }( s6 P: m) HLove… just the word love
  F7 z3 A- ], \" D% `$ m. r& lWhy is it so difficult to express?
% P7 S' z; @; |* n9 a% D) M$ }2 ]I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
& i$ E7 T  s2 [) b% VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
" w7 ~* L# ]# E. e- {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, E2 P0 u- j, U( o, S: z5 JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 ]# T  G+ r# r% hI want to confess that I love you,
9 D2 g/ z$ S2 R! c( O, A, p6 m. CBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! A9 [2 [% k/ l  r6 DCan I entrust it to you?
/ Q) R7 o2 r% R& y0 h3 p; M, gEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

' }7 C3 R) F4 h7 r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

8 ~: s. L# S" {$ E, l<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
) [) ?% F: i- H- y# A# }4 H<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
9 H; Q' b9 @" ^" K6 U. C  A& `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
: G+ ?) `( {- C, V" _<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# L) u3 C% W8 r6 y<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( r4 P' w% g, R" ?- T& Z<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' i8 G2 k+ m  D' P! d- S+ C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 b/ I( u' r  s* }; K+ y. |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ H& n4 ]/ ~" y; ^+ P* m0 v! J<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. I- ?$ h# U  T( h, `1 T- S  e<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
0 t, J; N$ b' I<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 h) t, R5 B& ]2 C( e<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
+ U, p# K: V3 k2 V<P>但我不会</P>
) v3 ~9 J0 ]+ `0 B- j( s<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 s# B4 v( D5 O/ q( l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' O3 F2 C  s' J# O. v! C# O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
5 v0 ^8 `9 x- P, h<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% r4 C$ W- s  ]! W8 f6 v% j8 e. L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ \. R/ S* B! A) ?5 b( r. \. n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# H8 M& a/ B. j+ ~4 f2 s9 ~3 r: N9 g1 O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) `- L3 h# I* o4 Y! H- l+ n4 P9 x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  G" R7 i. b+ P& n' V- I<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ D: m! Q+ s) \8 V, j: C<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: y3 h( U/ {4 @7 v7 w+ C" D" \8 @<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; ]& H2 m( a' T* I8 G  h<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 j  A4 c" n  O; l" n- g<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 C2 E; g7 a: u! h/ h: Y% V<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 o/ d' I# Q7 s% o, |8 `. f$ L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 ^5 H6 j6 X& T7 u4 a' U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* T7 h. k0 j: N; N  O/ ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' c: c7 t6 Z! L! l: J4 Z% U4 a; ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 M# ]) Q0 j2 z0 t: c; H. N<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 a* m* P' c3 N, h( y% T) z; o
5 l" k0 Y$ Y' ]5 Z8 ]8 o3 K 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
0 f; n3 b; M9 z2 y
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# I: |; D0 `4 ]" H8 q& ~+ h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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# C6 y0 m- X6 \" d7 `' _; b0 O0 S<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 }, l. w  q6 J+ e6 g5 l' m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>