【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
( L$ `7 T% T4 ^; k" F7 G( O* [$ LThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; M% s3 s+ O  G, HThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
; L# D/ u$ a2 s5 PI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
8 q0 s! L* W% V8 e( X, i, jBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 ~6 y. M& B' L8 J1 Z% Z6 UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& E8 _4 }; E! P9 [Love… just the word love
* D7 F9 }" j) \4 R1 _1 N! d) m- dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. x; |2 D% M1 NBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 B8 K6 [, u2 q, F1 }8 FCan I entrust it to you?
2 c+ [8 g0 |% y- Y) d7 iEntrust my love within your heart
8 ?  R  C* i5 }; g3 D1 n0 DLove… just the word love
4 o4 g, e# T8 ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' `" O9 K" z+ C/ kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% u3 b5 K2 w( ~$ s4 f5 A6 h1 J6 q8 ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
- R! T! D9 A: G% ?) GEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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( \1 L! h5 }; J) E* v<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 v, R% b& B% _8 F9 j% g( Z<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( ?+ H0 Z5 n* w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 h" X9 A. x; x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: _2 s) U  A( h! }% B/ I* J9 B8 y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: p2 t' c, |) i- U2 X* I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
: Y6 R" C% o( r5 E1 x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
5 q! K; C/ h. a: r<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' R5 i1 ]' |$ g0 C/ s<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: k1 E. P" k5 O  |8 O+ L3 C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
% g) B6 v3 L! ]4 v2 m( m8 w<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: z3 h# ]2 q- |2 P/ k. M' r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' V/ P) {/ d/ h; y+ C3 G6 W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 B8 h. W1 p. \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
. f/ t9 s4 \- @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" O% P' G3 K4 s9 U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
8 D; t) j  m; l- G$ f& O<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
7 u+ s8 P' J' L3 e+ O. w5 O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* L" L# f4 T, Z2 c4 ^<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; y% ]+ ^8 A- _  @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" c/ d+ `2 [& M' `8 E3 X' \$ V) J/ v<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 A$ E- S; J; O% P: T0 \* G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  W( j# W$ A! c* W" I4 n( B. ~, _% M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ p3 S1 H7 o6 x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. x9 @1 G6 F  J8 i/ N. d& ]) l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# Z( K3 s( L/ w; ~- C6 u( q$ Y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 g, I& h" o0 [) e2 s& \+ {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 o1 O+ l: T3 l; ?+ r$ ~& q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 g9 i/ ]0 M! B5 y<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# o: M1 J, U' R& C这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ T, A9 C# }+ E! k这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 k5 \4 n0 i( \<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>