【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
" k8 F) Z  W) N4 j) jThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% q2 U0 O. {. H' a) iFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 d4 Q4 U% G# k' D" h, |0 LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; p1 s. d5 A, p& J  aIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
7 G( A4 s2 i+ XLove… just the word love
1 i0 T9 c$ r5 o, T- b! r3 nWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
8 e; a" d3 h  b8 HBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 R9 f# ~  _0 R/ M* y7 B5 jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: S- ^3 U; w/ q  p4 qEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: K4 s  J/ {; j  ]' _But I never did
6 B: R' ]3 f$ Z; I( wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 {$ @" d! R. f5 q% q+ i/ v7 wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 b9 V; @3 I6 nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 N% `! b6 L. ]Can I entrust it to you?
- I, H0 e) N5 @Entrust my love within your heart

' T' y& C* r0 e0 L) A5 v6 A& W[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

1 Q, v% O6 Z1 Y7 u1 w3 ]<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- Q: u1 \' z4 i1 H+ }& T<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ a# N: o) f4 n8 A5 b/ I<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 ^* M( l7 G! \8 l0 u# K  R) Y( d$ g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 b& y& H- W8 n) G4 \<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 \8 H! E7 E& R; b<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' F& }8 @% P4 x<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, }4 x, v4 G$ ^, f4 J<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* u! }: {  e! a5 |0 [# q<P>我想说我爱你</P>
5 E5 Z" d3 R; \<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 H  v4 P7 ?5 N3 ?2 G/ s! U+ K8 X<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, B: Z7 f5 @; b1 A; e7 M1 |<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
# i) B' n7 G; |2 j5 K4 j4 b% z+ m5 _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 w$ g- m# [" p# }* J( }5 ]. Q1 j<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- M; g- e# J2 r: L1 P7 f7 @<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 \9 v0 u  r5 C, Y4 v6 `: d+ v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( f- ^6 U+ ?1 k) v% J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
5 J% O2 d4 o3 }  F4 a; b, r<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
( b- m2 i' F/ x<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- |6 q0 A! J# `/ I9 f$ H<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; g! w$ D* w$ x% x) g<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) M' T2 _( V. R" X+ _$ A" [<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& \2 g1 S; C5 A+ X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! w9 L& U/ k* d" G6 \  W<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ ?3 g) S  r$ L1 D" N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 F: ]/ I) M( [: @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
) ?9 f! Q, {; }; K* ^; s8 I7 ^" S<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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( |6 h  x& \/ X& J& y4 C) f# r 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, F: j7 b' x7 O  M% I# `% ]* l<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 k" G8 O; q* x+ g<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>