【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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+ c( V, a1 z& W( x! H$ z, j我另将歌词附在此。
4 o  E. ?- R, U( {7 T% |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
4 T1 d) i! L8 o* Q: Y) r8 j$ lWe meet and talk everyday,
4 x# d# M7 q/ |" B' BBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% L) t" ^4 {/ MI would probably know how you feel
* J9 _: y! G8 l5 p$ k/ g$ LLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
2 \( H; h2 f! m: ~7 `3 y$ oI want to confess that I love you,
1 @- w! P) ~" _2 E+ zBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 k0 I" V8 ^" T& Z# T) |/ s  ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) K. l: q* [3 Q$ ]3 nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" c9 K7 A5 v% O6 F" {3 xLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 \" Y' C) G& NI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* L  i$ s# O8 l$ ?. dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
0 I. }1 J; Q0 w2 qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% V3 x% _7 P4 w/ p( ZI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( _- D3 b3 i. z  d, v* d% ?  tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 \9 a: g) p  S[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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3 R/ t- Z- G; Z: u5 b0 |! Z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
  L3 m4 K& ]+ `# `8 a<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' |! v. L* d+ ?$ X' {<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* v8 Z) ?' H/ F<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
( o2 j1 V% ^% ^3 v<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ {2 c# y8 L0 j( m4 @& {8 p! r<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
6 R0 c4 z. }9 u0 n3 R<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  f/ `% n8 B+ U- d" U3 u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# s# O; ^' [3 Q* C8 r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 P5 o0 w- t% M<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" }4 s. U* R: V$ I<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 z2 ]  F& H8 {: s2 K; L' P3 F<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 `' b$ }# D) p. j# G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* f! j4 F2 y0 b$ e' f, P# x7 C<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
- O3 T) v: G  [) `<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
0 F# s; u0 K& }2 @. l/ ]<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
2 i9 M  ]7 o! n" Q+ ?% j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: x" y/ M& _' [5 ^<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% T6 I" j. w- J- B0 g6 {) e. J+ _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 r& p, E+ F# ^1 X4 s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# x5 m7 {& h5 y7 U6 p% e% W& n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' ]8 o0 H5 R4 l( f/ T! p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 A) }; \! y" D* }# U  R/ |) ?( t1 j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 K! {4 S. p/ O' B/ M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. F$ ]! K- u/ t, n<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% F; P- R) Y% ^3 v, i; P<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
% a& C5 U, Y9 U% M/ l/ b<P>But I never did </P>
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<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 o2 w; \& r. m8 ~# x<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 N7 W6 y4 v: O8 r5 [, L2 \" e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
' Q8 R2 n/ R* }. s<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 a) b9 i/ d9 K3 F$ ^4 L- k  U5 Z  s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" s$ k6 o1 {( s$ t! o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 Y) U3 A0 P7 {, H2 o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' k6 i! O' w% X) \6 ]3 i  y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 `3 R2 `! P1 [; c! W6 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ P# f  Z$ C2 n& U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% c0 h0 ]' h: F* B9 t4 b<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>