【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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* L0 L; d$ T( T2 ^! {, ~7 R我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
# Y' s1 H& t! Y' z/ A+ CI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ S4 R- q* B, L, j+ V; E$ yBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
0 ^+ E6 \: D1 r; a$ JLove… just the word love
+ D: B" S5 y2 a7 b# @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
0 O0 I" o+ G9 KBut I never did
3 ^% p& _- k' x4 y& _' t5 hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 `; l" ~( G! @5 h$ r  M" xIf today isn’t too late,
8 e) Z- O1 F% [0 U) }I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; i: Q. P0 L! @  gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; A: ~( h: Q( J6 I/ \" ]- _( mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 ]; ?0 ~  W+ D5 d* dI want to confess that I love you,
6 f/ V# A. \& M3 I! KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
; v) V+ ]" e) p+ |! c1 [I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 M" F8 ^" \* R4 H4 |Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
1 }+ z. D; l0 j; ?0 P5 u. y. @& GEntrust my love within your heart

3 G, k! U8 u) q2 ^[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" m8 V- R8 g" L0 A5 j9 U<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% G8 q/ W% W) v# i3 T5 V6 b- k<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* P3 p6 h+ F3 X# t4 _<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 g% E  E5 R0 e- q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
2 |/ A  B) w4 T6 [# ~<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 A$ o4 M" H- z& o4 L  L" p! f<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. }% }0 R* K# X: w* a0 c7 U* l$ E<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 O- G; [4 J8 e) s+ N( _4 W9 p' D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 ~( U; d) q! [" y3 x<P>但我不会</P>
( i4 B. V5 z* q5 j0 g9 R4 w<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ G. a8 V, y# _9 q+ e# K" Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 Z+ S" D5 c1 ?# C* O5 u<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  {8 a7 d7 @) O, [) X: z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. f( c$ b7 D  Z- N4 D<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' d, a2 k: y; S/ m; @( v* o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( f) k# L! a8 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. q3 w/ @* O6 C0 U1 s* B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 P% n; S. \" g9 A) y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
# k0 _; S/ m1 [9 X( [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! z$ j1 @5 n- s7 f; |<P>But I never did </P>
/ a) A" `: }! Q<P>但我不会 </P>
; f  d$ ]9 h, E/ T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" ]3 Y3 e5 Q- p8 f4 o. w4 u<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% K4 z/ \: m% @- h3 h* @7 `( w1 R. q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% \' c+ D1 w! ^+ X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 Q: |' ]. w: X3 w& U8 {6 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) T8 ]4 J" ^# d! p0 E# X7 m$ z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 d3 Z* J7 L' r: r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, K0 e+ b# R& S3 {+ k# j; Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 N2 r2 d7 r& H* w" l<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>