【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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( p* v$ o9 D/ I9 N我另将歌词附在此。
  R6 v4 S: b$ R- rThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 j8 [6 Y5 B0 ]3 z! l+ aThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
7 c2 O  j& o7 Q, hBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
% A( R* H) K# R( dLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# {- p  T6 C- c' eI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 ]  N6 {7 T, q4 Q) MOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! j4 _5 A  P7 u! m, e0 WI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
: M7 O- k4 L+ E# u, q" wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
( H# }9 K5 u2 D  `6 v$ GLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: D7 S2 H2 R7 a  B# p9 }I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 n3 x7 o. ~4 R) I$ yOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
. h2 c4 f7 E& K( d6 T  RCan I entrust it to you?
, B. B, E2 y# [/ D2 j- LEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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  P1 l# u, R. ^. s& j3 i8 X4 O. W<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; d3 L1 c; {/ _  C- W5 t9 R<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
- A4 \4 x( H4 J! h- G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. H0 j4 n4 z& j- a5 T- y1 ~<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 }, L6 U( J% m% W9 ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
3 k3 h! T" d% a# U8 b" f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: @7 T0 f& ~, M& G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
# w' K0 ^, x5 d1 p<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 v* A- W: T& O7 }( q# ~# J9 E<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
' O( o, j0 o4 Q+ Y  Y7 M% V% t& o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( |$ E% l4 u& d$ n1 l<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 B" p0 q: h# C8 ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; W3 G( L0 I2 C" V% M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% ]3 I. U2 O* y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 z: p) t. H* ]4 E! W: T( ~) I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 I! B! s! k& t- B  q2 j. A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& w) {0 W! n# {2 S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 V7 `: Y$ U/ i1 g* U  f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# [0 S  a. |7 z8 b<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
$ M- K/ G2 G2 ?+ M7 s+ U' v! `6 y" i$ C3 ~<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 Y* ?8 M+ c% U<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& B/ f7 W5 e4 z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ W  w* r0 M1 b# l/ D<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ ]* L( x* }5 P% G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! i% T/ p0 F" Q) E/ s% e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: W8 x5 U! \, S8 G6 M/ C5 @' `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 I* ^0 t# e) E% g9 ?% ]( P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: r% a. O0 H- P0 U5 B1 {# |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 m& d8 Q3 O9 A. ^<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>