【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
; a( D; G, x2 g1 b3 c; P( [3 UThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) p6 k$ m/ f0 u2 b, pFrom the first moment we met,
: F& f* Q. Y4 n  n) nI already loved you with all my heart
6 _0 D, z3 |! d) KWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 s* C/ f0 [% XIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 m7 a) q4 ^" @  r" Q( s; I( WBut I never did
& `  q; B9 Q. W9 [/ S" _/ aOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: b, F) b; C3 B5 ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 r6 T6 s& U9 r4 E: H  k6 B5 sEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
6 z1 ~/ y* d' G# r, fWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 f( [2 i9 V, F( w" h9 J( [I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' W& w( T/ v5 eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( A) z  [: \1 K$ |4 k0 kIf today isn’t too late,
2 [5 b% R! N0 y& WI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) l; j/ C0 L1 b- V2 W/ i4 G* n3 I( }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

# e5 [- t: C2 [, x6 b/ n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 q3 Y& ^# U  x4 k<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
. U  M& u1 z% Y% ^6 T0 J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  q2 ^6 S5 z$ L0 z2 I/ I: P/ j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: r! C# \* T4 N% \" Q/ j<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- R2 ]: [& R) \; B4 ?4 @: f<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
7 C7 ]) i, a9 m1 F0 K" n6 q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
3 t" H8 N; @+ O2 v: Z# {<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( {4 }- O) H/ \$ b<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  _6 [4 k. g# [0 T8 h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 H; H/ A! H9 P0 \) ]; D7 Y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" t4 e3 _# i+ @/ N' d1 j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 _) j/ D! R: E, H& x9 G<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
% U6 s6 ~8 U8 _<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. ~3 a8 x  b4 Q# V# ~0 ~1 Z# m5 @<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 ~+ G6 ^: l. s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 K- s1 X, k: P# o' A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, E# Y- E$ [/ C<P>Love… just the word love </P>
/ L' }% {% F: ?$ @, v+ c, }+ Y<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( p: a- ]1 E. y% y# ?<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 k! V3 p! S. g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) Z5 ]" Y9 y/ D5 N( M9 C* X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ t$ a# k1 p3 U  F! v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  E7 F1 z( z1 }( f4 E+ B, T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 Q, b0 F) z! o& [1 J  e, U  s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 A1 G& d5 L$ N  H: h1 B# O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
/ S4 b8 s1 o* ~# w" ^# [* h<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 X0 |4 r! P* L9 n% N3 {7 ~7 {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# j, J& z+ r) W$ I/ Y, ]<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>