【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
4 F! ~& L  [2 M4 D/ G- xThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ p; W! y# r# D8 G$ X# f0 m% |That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% A2 V+ d/ p: i) G& |If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) _9 [8 V0 N! k" z6 q) NI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# i" m+ B. _: {$ O: uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: h  J5 \& y; P( J. TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# [6 K- Z6 E8 ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% a7 B- I& n5 W. J% X& _8 vCan I entrust it to you?
1 t5 T- F; u: W+ tEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: ]) s2 ]/ W! e  b" A6 D2 D! C/ ^But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- w- I3 C* F7 E+ `* W( |% o5 {8 M+ DIf today isn’t too late,
: r, e# `7 ?# s" g3 e4 QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 ]1 P- D/ [' t3 P: h3 G% @8 u5 T, KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- G7 E) _, K8 z' g) ]2 w+ v% YCan I entrust it to you?
$ f) k! e. p7 n! x& wEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
. x; I& r8 k' G& P3 Q. ]8 g8 BEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' u9 l/ g0 Y4 a: _, M<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 F  |' s3 W+ L5 ?: E/ I! u2 H<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; j/ F# K2 {7 |2 T<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, J2 L$ l0 \1 D" n6 V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
" ?6 x1 X) A3 u  e<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; C+ O& M' A; I& }; ~<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" Z+ a! t* e- d/ v( w<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) V" {7 f0 J0 G<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  Q4 |- U1 ^% C1 F7 l<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 \6 }7 i1 `/ ~$ M* @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 C/ I. w6 C: K- B- u<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
' m% n- L/ `; x: T; _0 A& t, W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% o$ Q9 u0 O5 i1 M# L5 d7 d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
" y1 r1 V6 k+ U' Z# Z4 _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ C. @2 `5 B4 g4 X<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ ^+ F9 h3 o/ N  c! w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' }  E5 \1 R" A  q  j% o. |: l. E( e  _1 }<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ a# o! [: t& T& S8 M9 x4 ^<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 d0 u6 n- U# U; Q  U0 \5 X<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
9 T* A1 f2 {* R8 ^- J, [<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 f1 h! x4 \5 R  m1 f  |5 E' r' Z<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, U, a. \% S) h" V8 k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 P0 F( g$ k5 a/ t( C' S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
* H1 n% J: S3 x5 R) h( k3 ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( X. }- b$ R# A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- Z- k( w8 ^$ [, ~* ]/ e: Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 A# h. S: O6 T9 }$ r1 d" A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  t: X7 R. D1 T3 K! ^# K7 x% F<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 i4 U0 S) c* j 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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# A6 T2 M+ o3 G) F" M0 X& m9 Q这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' t4 ]# N: P+ t# e# `这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# u) V1 M; e3 K9 i6 y<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 G6 u& z0 E6 c0 W4 l0 L' d! A<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>