【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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8 A2 W' D9 F  O) m* E2 S/ R9 g我另将歌词附在此。
8 E, j( m1 O- `8 Y4 dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 e5 k) m1 i. d4 M( z3 ?- P0 yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
/ g: n( z. ]- R( B; G0 Y% Z) ], `From the first moment we met,
% t8 J% n& ?* f. V7 J+ H) cI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 w& l$ k% [% C& t; ]! l; TIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
& x2 f" n: n# l! t/ y$ H# G: rI would probably know how you feel
$ e, D! G2 B- I8 LLove… just the word love
) I2 M3 Y' o6 P* a: NWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" `2 B' b4 Q* Q+ gI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& x3 o' r1 r3 L5 yEntrust my love within your heart
$ I9 P+ z  h2 }* N/ j* tLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% _# h# _# O/ N8 z4 q7 lBut I never did
( U+ T/ d! _9 K3 fOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
: u* R5 A) N! S' ?( ^, o3 c# fI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
$ F$ G0 _+ x( r, f, m" o- t7 yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
* y, {8 h8 B9 z- i% TEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 w/ |3 P6 k) e! UEntrust my love within your heart

; b* R; x2 u- z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

; c" ~$ E& `1 l/ z  X$ J+ t, y0 l8 ^<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* r4 l* R: [7 w' c7 `- l& |+ r/ S" A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
( ^( D1 n2 C$ \2 r<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 Z0 e0 I) F& n0 K7 f9 X2 \# X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
5 `* f; q$ l+ r6 @; ^5 e- f<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 K/ l* p4 k' y( ]' J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; C" D% D0 I- v& q( ~: m<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
& `5 U. Q" N3 p$ k<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% j6 l1 ?9 ~3 ]8 n$ T1 u<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
' U7 y' n& h' O<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( e7 L' v5 g2 i) @7 U% Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 O, e) N5 P8 W5 [& ^7 ]3 s<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 h9 h/ }6 B. @) f0 }: t! I<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 x# q# c# U2 x6 U8 [7 |, h- g' A<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" }' z- P3 J1 j) K8 ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 W4 j( y. z5 H+ t1 S8 `<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
4 M! x5 O8 r  y2 z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ j" V5 Y+ f) ?0 C) ~<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 b' r$ o, F. x3 u<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
+ y% I2 O. u6 S2 ]9 c<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 v( f$ `" E  i4 q$ u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
; T. f$ C, g' F" x7 ?4 y" l<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ n% y) P% ^% ~: C+ E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ ]" _' H3 C  W% M; q* j3 Z<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, ^+ Z' k+ K/ i. F6 B6 ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- Z$ o& o8 h* @: |! S3 z- n/ {8 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; a3 g5 ^% l: R, U" R/ Z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! i1 h% T9 E7 D* Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; R1 J2 u# t, f" v5 z6 j+ U& O8 ]<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, h. }# N1 q1 G<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) }. K$ w  P+ e. e& R 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 P# }3 {, G- {4 z: E. g" \这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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$ h0 g  T8 U* v7 I5 j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- R2 t$ J+ p, L! @2 E<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>