【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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  S) }$ e8 d& e: P- d. a7 S: E我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 `4 u/ L# I# E/ B! WFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 L* a& x; y3 t5 n' lIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* e9 S6 ^5 q- V  H, kI would probably know how you feel
; m7 n$ i+ C/ F& y- P5 w/ \0 u0 jLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ Q4 d9 H. N2 P3 p& ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 \$ y& h! q/ I( M9 q& BIf today isn’t too late,
1 b, b8 v/ k, s  lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ Z5 u6 G1 q3 HCan I entrust it to you?
6 _: e, s* {2 JEntrust my love within your heart
5 n+ K" }3 F9 I8 VLove… just the word love
5 Y: c7 B$ e/ b2 L, R8 ]  yWhy is it so difficult to express?
% A, A: m3 \. LI want to confess that I love you,
3 J) R& R6 ?& q6 @5 w1 DBut I never did
$ f: L* a4 p1 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ j; V  U% z6 }& g4 qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 p' M9 T8 k0 |$ M9 {& f+ h4 @) ]Entrust my love within your heart
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5 i& J3 ?6 }6 E$ k3 A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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7 ^" v4 {- [" k. s0 A<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: a- D  @) r( M' y  u0 W4 Q/ m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 x6 r" ~# L7 |<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ z7 H1 i  K3 T% `<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) ], c" N; Q9 J1 D<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" {* L1 b0 f( x- s2 W<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
. U- A* d- S$ W  S8 e1 b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% t2 A  W8 j+ M& o  C$ k7 O, f: X: `2 d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 n$ J. b; u% [0 N* F9 v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; K6 Q! a3 E% |% E5 t' \# d<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) D) ~' m1 z# `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
, B5 S" f3 v3 Q<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ E5 r% k) l& n1 ^<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! D% l( c7 R  H1 P" Z2 R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
5 J0 @3 m) e9 R* O; G<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% a% `3 S2 _% y* d2 c& \<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# ?+ d0 R8 _. Q1 C- P; M/ a<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 o, s+ v- S! ]% M$ J; H<P>但我不会 </P>
4 g* |: }5 j4 }<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
/ C* ?0 l, n9 V( j<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( G1 d3 a7 n) i3 u8 N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% j& `! L0 U3 o- f" ]1 B/ m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- Q" E  H3 C$ Y: V- n! o' B2 T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 }0 ^1 B0 G; S& n% z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 Y/ f4 z1 z8 p# E$ p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, D, Q- H1 n8 }& l+ t<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 t4 P1 S5 M/ z; P! M/ m$ O' i. A: o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& a; Q4 L, c- G$ ~* A% q  _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ ?8 A. l) z+ X; x3 J* |2 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
4 N& l7 N0 O: W: c! s4 `8 [7 ?- v<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  a, r5 X7 F5 X# v0 [. ~$ H: {<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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0 u& S* o, f' X这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 a8 B+ \+ o5 y5 Z<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>