【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
% v8 b) e8 D( b9 [+ E6 R* _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
3 ~- T% @0 T6 hThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ {" a* @, \4 PFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
0 F, d, K3 a: TWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
; f  {6 V  \$ X. Z2 M# GIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) N3 ]' C9 Y3 o  SI would probably know how you feel
( ^3 x% G) a* U( gLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) E0 U: a" A4 ABut I never did
" L4 M2 W. |, @, F/ L+ f) OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* e! [: ]' p0 z8 ]9 K' VIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 b2 |7 f3 r. e/ C7 I' uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
! k! x5 A$ q9 [2 Q  ?( PWhy is it so difficult to express?
. l' H- ?) ?" s! hI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 V$ S6 ~. D: f5 pOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, E, v: r+ @: R) P% qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# n4 {( R' W7 `, y: qCan I entrust it to you?
+ I5 P) v4 K+ F/ l" {6 u- nEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

# a4 O  E0 X7 x; o, o$ a[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ c/ W! k6 J! {! k<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& K3 i" @  @; g' f: f$ W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 K/ k. Z( w9 H! @0 s3 i<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
/ T/ @( S% _3 d1 `1 I! c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; V# c; F, i: X" X- e, ]<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; O* J2 z; ^4 }1 k- Y8 T* l<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
' p; K% [- L. @7 M4 O<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  j% G+ h  T% S- s$ @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
' Y! [. v) C0 k$ _. i<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
( Q  F4 u7 a( B! K<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
6 a4 A, }" Y1 p) W3 x) ]9 ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  i4 h# q( h5 C7 s<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% j% e4 i" {3 E% d- i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" i! V% W( _" W<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
3 x2 M+ y+ _+ M! b: X1 E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 u! t; u' M- S<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: x& t8 T/ x# W( @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 N, Q; t# {# C6 ]<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 Y7 k9 e6 l2 E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 A, g; ~+ A1 W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, r! Z! D" x0 O8 N: K( e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 y( p9 W- c' A* p' X/ G1 [/ @<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 u  u2 c/ ^) D  Q* U<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, U' x2 q; y* V  m<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
- b. ?* |$ L/ R; N$ m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
/ z3 Z" b- D& f" g. {" Y7 ^7 K" b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
8 f1 v; X" t6 h- ~<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 I2 [$ h* F7 G  T' F. |# N<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& H$ K$ q( H, N; \; x<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 C: I# J9 s/ Y5 {' X/ a7 C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& H2 t6 \* G+ _) Z7 d( c6 m7 K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 [4 C) s# y* I& ^$ N6 \$ R<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; R1 O6 V* c1 G+ _<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: e: I: q9 |6 c* B  E' l% N<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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& Q9 Y2 s5 ]! y5 k3 _# X9 h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 f2 e2 k8 o2 }, `0 Z1 `<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>