【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 y/ z8 c! I" d! ]- F; D- sThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* N4 W3 m0 w( O' r6 A$ iFrom the first moment we met,
; V+ t. Z1 x( H$ bI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
1 {6 A! M. e+ U& V& ]) o* `& pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 U8 o( e( {: o5 \6 hBut I never did
) Y( g" [+ S& W/ p, v! N+ I& jOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 y0 H2 C! I) C2 o8 L) H# lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
" n! @5 \: {( Y8 \9 l6 tI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. ?( g( n, K, H0 j# E5 q/ {9 o" DBut I never did
! G9 K% ~3 i% `3 Z2 a6 K! q6 ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
3 B# }" ]( f# o: TI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
, X8 d( B" u8 [; JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
+ f. O- f. l) [" I, t/ CCan I entrust it to you?
. c5 S. \. r) e: Y! U- BEntrust my love within your heart
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* ?; A, e6 w$ C9 X7 Y8 G! ^. a[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( {/ E0 A6 B7 N7 A9 z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
2 W# U! z( W" w) b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- U4 X1 d' m! k: Z* ]<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" D, m$ x/ E9 }  x, _( p<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) ]1 P4 X' U5 a2 R3 d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
: O4 D2 D8 |/ M4 _/ h<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: ^. X- ]' W9 C$ t$ C% c1 m/ L! M% |<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ ]0 K$ G8 x6 e, S( c<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* `9 `, Y3 v; {9 X<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
5 w/ m7 D; {5 S<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 y' L( q* h; |2 M5 y( F1 ]9 D<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 {" z. k. t- r" g<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& L* S1 w' ]/ y0 m1 `" Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& \- D' f; d3 ]! }) k9 t, A<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* \" W! q) W; t9 L) Z4 G) j<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 E6 z0 _( J& C% Z0 J- ?- y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 Q; {/ ?: U8 i, M' u- |7 J<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- X! _) C4 _# s/ ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" b. B' B% E1 g) h) D) j<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( E/ ~6 n0 H6 X2 ~  w<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' E8 ~5 {( v3 U( l- \6 I% r1 b& A<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
$ c6 O" I7 H0 ~1 u( X- f. J<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ |9 g: q7 {) a& J6 y4 U5 L& k<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 ^) ~2 q% r) W$ f& e1 r<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 T- ^( g: I/ P7 W6 {<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( H" a. h! k( r) W& c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% W. d# o0 J8 g2 ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  h5 b+ ^& o- W, b  W2 L0 C. J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! d! e) \# p: a3 N5 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 s& S" g7 Q$ T, E) Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( S2 G! f$ M* [0 r2 g<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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% K" I0 [4 t* e0 w" p' D8 a这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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7 c- e/ ^9 b8 @: B+ w1 i5 x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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0 c9 N/ s) }$ S7 Y9 q6 N<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>