【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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, a) ^, k* |; R: A我另将歌词附在此。
9 f# q: i) M* A; k) R, OThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) u+ ^8 c; n5 k0 I! p+ M- QFrom the first moment we met,
/ B" u* Q1 e& F+ w) u( y6 C2 hI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: j* }% x# |6 y& EIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: o9 C0 L4 g( r6 l: {9 o9 UI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ y1 w* S/ H) _+ N/ ^' tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 f: F# ?. N% ]$ ~& Y/ PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 e' |5 B# K4 u  G; i* NWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 g. |7 J, P5 II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
, @# Q" F& x2 U4 d; {& v1 {One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
, s; R/ q7 Q5 a% q7 V* ^4 H/ qI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 {/ D, v  j! |Entrust my love within your heart
/ z. [1 e! J- Q) w/ V+ x! xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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3 X" q* e# l' G- Z& A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 |* j) v/ Q8 y  f1 |$ G<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) T9 p( R* f5 w# V<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
' r0 R  E% ~$ A. E# w3 M4 p<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
( Y- y% j8 a: q9 z# g5 A" q<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 t4 t' V) ~, d<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ Z/ v, g, m7 z% j9 h. h1 I$ t8 U<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
+ z0 r2 m$ [* P4 {( ~<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: f/ `/ X/ {  |( x) s1 u0 j<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 }8 s/ D- I% k<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 |: j. q! q8 u$ e" ~$ o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 Z, j4 k: U  K2 W) t9 l<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
7 M) D% t, b  t% }( M2 x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
! C. g4 `$ D( k8 K! Z9 X<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' t1 R( q7 N0 q7 p: m5 L<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
; V0 W6 T8 x! x$ h6 d  Z' Z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ w4 }  Q! L8 w4 b& S+ O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ \3 K0 @8 S' r; n  t8 K/ J" Q9 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 |. T+ u) j+ ]0 s8 {. C, g$ e<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) D0 j0 c0 E1 ~( v) _<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ ?, q( o% h. S1 f' v<P>但我不会 </P>
0 }/ }' ]- `/ c7 ], f1 x<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 L& B! H1 n( M; M/ `9 q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 N7 z9 W+ B! V$ z# b0 `' }" E9 ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- ~- P' T7 W$ i: D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: Z% T6 S, o2 K# g$ ^+ a% {' G# i8 `<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; N" i( c1 `* ?; W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 `7 h+ q% X4 S2 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 `/ P+ o. c* r+ B" n9 P' g( k0 p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 u. i6 b2 }" F8 v: e<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>