【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
+ ?' w" B6 D; P4 x) T& m  t: a+ ^8 JThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
  F2 [$ ^2 p+ k+ h7 y" Y0 N+ mThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
. e3 a, K3 e+ j7 g8 _/ }& qLove… just the word love
; y( O9 q* W; \2 y& ?; B$ @Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ D4 E0 c) C( \) |. t# S% v) QBut I never did
6 l3 `! `9 g& DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 S4 |* G5 L% ]3 ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 m) ?& @0 f& GEntrust my love within your heart
  k. h( ~$ p8 HLove… just the word love
7 X4 X/ R6 e5 t/ L& u5 ]Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 i  C* I6 C$ r' j9 |$ j9 aIf today isn’t too late,
, e) Z$ a$ \# \2 [# E  UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 j7 i8 D! Y) H: v+ m1 v1 {I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
8 r: `2 {. D& {. ?! MEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
1 g% n  |* y) e! J<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
. O8 ^& k3 G  H<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 W7 G6 i! r2 T2 }3 t  U, f<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  r" W: ?) w. n8 E% r$ C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# Q3 R& e% D" X& i& h<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
  C, @8 I' C3 O- n6 w% R1 v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* J4 q  |$ `# P# }<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 L6 ?! }/ v3 B" F<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
0 ^4 n2 {2 ?' K% B- t" o<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
+ ~  o+ L# B( l# L  J1 `7 @<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
. b# s2 t5 _6 M( Y/ K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 L$ a2 O  c" I<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, y+ E) y5 G/ z7 C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
8 u0 ?" x( y7 Y4 M* M' A1 p0 a  K# }<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 i& P. E# M# g* l+ R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
1 D& v) j, _+ e; T: b) o/ [, l/ j<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 P  \+ b. B! }8 Q0 i  l, v& L<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 b1 B+ O- M: m# ~& U- b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! b$ ~! Z2 @8 i- i; p* I6 T<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" `0 `% p. {2 \' M: d) S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& N7 |5 \! ]) s9 l0 O; W( I, H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. l; n+ {- V; K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 U/ x1 W: u" A: v<P>But I never did </P>
5 f& D) S# r9 n* }+ {7 v<P>但我不会 </P>
2 c. h/ S, ?+ P5 q: `<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 M  n5 R4 W( G  q+ T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 k6 Q& u/ j0 S! d% g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, I8 E) O, D/ w: A/ |9 U<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 j5 c( k1 O; e" u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" H. [6 t0 A. n) ~' ~- R; c/ v" G<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& O$ K7 X+ a# T3 v) S<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
1 z! Y$ U1 q5 C( {; A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 T/ R2 ^% j/ c/ P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
  \" o4 V0 p$ u6 N5 e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# p7 y$ w- L7 ~# I7 G 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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7 J2 x( N! _) H) b2 j这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  [0 c! \0 D2 a4 O<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>