【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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8 C5 L) u8 W. {- t4 |, u9 f我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
3 [: y+ w1 f) m$ z( j" |7 kWe meet and talk everyday,
( E0 y5 Y6 k8 O3 XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# x" O. C+ z; f! L) s, L9 U1 PIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( ^: G& Q: M: o7 I5 z4 u1 H9 ~% vLove… just the word love
( S1 @4 g: b2 q) u: O) V+ SWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 v- E; a; {5 o; r8 x9 r5 \5 aBut I never did
9 W6 O4 B4 Y: Q# ]! E% |* LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: e- ]. s- S" B  R9 E! l/ P9 FIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  s  m# b0 f3 s+ }8 \! mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
1 z6 e" l2 j. H5 [' {" uEntrust my love within your heart
+ p% B* k" j( O+ `2 t1 P3 G4 hLove… just the word love
/ y& }) [* d  I+ w( AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
% j# n3 t( R" t" P& C; O! RBut I never did
6 P0 M: L$ B, ]% r0 V; X, dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
, p7 z# B) V8 R; ZCan I entrust it to you?
1 u$ S$ a* h, J' z$ H- X( BEntrust my love within your heart
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" q1 [# {' {& l$ q2 @[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

. @$ f0 m/ T* _' l, f6 C& [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
4 T; e& ]5 z- V, A# v, k<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
% [* c. ^+ \, U8 m4 p<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. J2 q( x  D' Y" f, F/ F<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; s5 y7 r2 G2 k0 B# V# M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' ?! B: m4 t# r% h5 J# J<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ O9 L. k: w) l<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
/ A7 a, P  X; v5 ~0 x  H- g7 a# R<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- u8 p; k6 g/ N( v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% C+ j- b" k+ M/ \* t/ y. _( b; j<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
- R4 ^5 Z. Q$ Q# d<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 Y0 u. ^. W4 K) [* l% `+ Y! c( I/ ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
& x$ F' n  `2 A  P  Q+ P( p<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 h, H: C6 N7 E1 x* {/ s8 S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( y) A9 r  I, U<P>但我不会</P>
6 Q$ l$ r+ O+ e7 u# U<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 c5 h( z2 K/ s7 q: ?8 V7 M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ k( U  D& V5 o" y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- |7 W3 o+ z" U% U* Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
0 X' k( F+ B0 D* K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) d, E0 r- x1 T' y7 Q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
3 ]. f/ f, {, e: C" e7 f$ |<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% [% Y& E! H; z5 X<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 s: D4 O4 G1 t0 ]/ x; o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 {8 F2 F1 b( |. P% x3 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( j/ C% ?, j3 u1 y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# G) R2 d* O  l3 m0 C3 |) R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ \( w: j& ]9 ~4 V' `' X- N<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
" F' L/ b: f6 n- L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 B3 P  A; u! w3 L8 t4 k' a这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>