【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
! E5 l9 K: C! ]7 J- _8 C" P$ eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
$ A; S; L. Z5 s1 ?: o' \$ i( ~From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- u& ~8 V) R1 t; lI want to confess that I love you,
4 ^/ H" }* [6 Y* ~$ s+ a" |  _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  B8 J) ?4 W& w& OIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 [# o* {. R: s6 k2 O  r0 ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  A2 b& V6 }4 T( h2 Y! I, B1 G" ZEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
  \; O9 u4 M: q0 T! c2 [; q0 O  aWhy is it so difficult to express?
% P3 I. K7 V1 G4 D' N* S( nI want to confess that I love you,
% N0 y* A/ H- CBut I never did
) M7 T5 S3 r7 w3 ?  wOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 L* h/ ?1 i# p+ o/ ^- l0 rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 q& V' E9 I( cCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ |) h% E+ p, S0 P/ ]<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- F. I' t7 h- n4 t3 V$ f<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! g; I" O$ C  V- K<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
7 n! ]+ d! w! h$ S7 X2 P/ N<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
! V: Z7 V- |" n8 Z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
2 b1 v  y9 a0 \$ J1 A0 g: x<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: A- J8 d) U4 \+ i5 g( q% `<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
( u1 h6 n' A# j0 r  @+ t<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
9 r0 \! ]2 E( p- U1 X  Y  P7 I6 W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. d4 ^) j) u  d+ ?& d& @<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! E6 q& R) H) [6 X# T<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
( ]) b1 R' G0 K<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 }* v2 u2 U) w1 A5 Z) h# }) Q& g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- i! v# g. O. M1 f: {3 s4 j" T" T<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: `0 g' x) D$ M0 G<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) B0 e5 o9 K3 u6 M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( O, X3 B4 G& |5 X<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: m8 r& X8 R0 I2 |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 \4 k' P$ B( Q1 D6 Z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* B5 H( v. [9 H7 m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 Q# E- R' j8 j/ w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 f; {# r) `& D; H- F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. M2 g5 L& o) a3 {4 i<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ U6 O2 _$ R' ~9 L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
. v$ v, g8 @. l. y, C9 P<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 E/ b0 \- Q4 N' q2 F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
. X! M1 e* W5 U<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) J! A! M+ T7 s$ m. w% S  T% ]<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 f$ }) ?' [4 k  ~# Z0 T# i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: E, u: C" M- m% V3 r$ [+ N<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% J- q: M# G  k- S# L  R<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) u8 k- y* e/ \% a4 V<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) x: v  X; q2 K3 d7 e/ E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ @& m& _- V* o8 h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 ~$ V4 q, D% W& N5 S% _<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! f  w* @* I3 \" I, _. l<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 s& R$ O8 k/ U3 i9 x- v3 z' \; {' K 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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, J- Y- X) @$ O- g( g! V+ V这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 w1 O# f& s, T$ [<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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% g, u5 e, L2 a<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>