【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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5 m" ^  ^* W/ j6 w& s
$ t4 ~0 D) [1 h2 f  z我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; z* G) o. M" ?. s- L5 UI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 B4 E; g! v' q# LWhy is it so difficult to express?
: o" J. u2 Y1 q; O- GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ k, e4 w8 X1 l& J3 Z& F5 kIf today isn’t too late,
6 f1 S9 l6 h+ ?7 p$ B6 t8 FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ b( g- i+ l. H; d0 kCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 p# s% \2 H0 O' b* d* @8 RLove… just the word love
0 I, x3 B# E8 m$ Z( ]; C8 f. l) ?Why is it so difficult to express?
1 h3 N% J3 @( Y$ u9 PI want to confess that I love you,
/ p4 l* o4 s1 E0 S1 XBut I never did
0 y- ^. h$ a) ~7 [One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  [9 L5 \/ c8 {4 G/ j, MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 S; d0 Q9 Y3 n6 ?! e( R5 }Can I entrust it to you?
4 N" q3 s! R) r- k- O' {2 n1 M- q9 i' PEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
6 Z: i( g$ g4 T) c" y' q7 pEntrust my love within your heart
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& k+ u$ d3 q# @  d5 C* u[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
2 e0 V$ ~; Z+ d+ p3 y0 \% A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
& Z) L" X0 l0 d0 J<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( Q7 C# a8 b3 M' v9 `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 G+ x# ?" I' c7 p<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
0 l( n; |6 f! V; ^: X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
' l5 Z5 D+ a! B9 {0 E7 v* t$ J* P<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
" `% v- l2 Z0 m: Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
# y% X1 T. l. Z# N<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, {; h4 u  [9 O<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' S, \9 J1 n$ s- O# E! J<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 m" D. X) y5 C( b( `<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
) `/ @; V, a9 f, Z2 B# G<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
. U* ~; j; V' V7 |2 M<P>但我不会</P>
3 F1 g1 W8 ~$ s% z* a. [<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 \7 L5 v- j  |, c" m5 _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
- C, n3 z) c5 f* y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% K9 Y' U3 [& U1 i/ G% K8 T<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
0 o; C! F8 e5 A' `; h  d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( ]# e* B. E: U8 y* D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ p! j' r- ]& D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# T: z9 m! d$ c9 L6 n+ {' a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- g. E. z: a8 Z$ F& K& Y9 p2 q/ X<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" A1 B# p3 ?+ W8 x6 Y) x* M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
! [3 A$ }2 L" k& r9 F' p<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" d! o' o6 Q" t: N0 w) b- N3 [5 \<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ s/ G/ A, r! i/ n7 B<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 o) V& |, S& G, N9 M! q4 b/ t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
! L$ I  t3 _, I# L' N<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- x2 {  b* z: B, p; \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
% S. w( S! G0 A2 O2 `+ V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, F9 S/ a! o$ \6 t" M) d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ t7 @8 _5 ]( Y: c. B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' O2 U$ G( s  m4 \" c5 I' T<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 f" ~) {, d* f<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 p/ p, T) l9 ^( @+ m/ H2 ^, h这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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! ~: N3 {  g$ M: j6 r5 @# u这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

2 u2 Q" Y) M" K4 ~6 W& x- {<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>