【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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' d5 q( q3 W! }7 U我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 s$ a* o3 |" Y% x1 XFrom the first moment we met,
5 V% P8 ~* H$ T& e6 K2 Z) {" e* FI already loved you with all my heart
( k; [  s; X4 F: ]0 g5 s+ fWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
/ d# o' h2 m7 e* _6 C- uWhy is it so difficult to express?
+ L/ [# y  b3 cI want to confess that I love you,
. v* D- }0 w7 W* ^5 ABut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 ^! i. q! {" D$ tIf today isn’t too late,
. U0 j; C1 p8 D% FI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: R. o& v% U( P  d3 SI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ n8 |! D, B. i7 t/ oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: t+ T: o# s, @& O% MLove… just the word love
' q8 r' M( J, OWhy is it so difficult to express?
% d3 q% L1 C* tI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 F5 }6 c! b* k  x) o7 rIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# D  Y- w# V" t$ ^7 M, \/ W0 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# a- I4 I% r% `& K4 `$ Q6 \/ M8 g# HCan I entrust it to you?
; Y' @7 `8 g! n! x5 ]" H3 Q7 j) H4 fEntrust my love within your heart
/ g- K  b: k) U4 M, CCan I entrust it to you?
) r8 m& Z* t3 B) T) P1 e' T( uEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
- Q" B6 x$ r; \  z7 C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
  f4 P- J. I- F4 t" ?<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
( Q, r/ e( N, i. H. g7 A9 y# k2 c<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% B* A1 ?7 H6 a. g7 u<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
5 s. X7 X; \1 }<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 a- @8 ~3 t$ C<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ v) V8 G, P! a& `9 r7 W" H8 m<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
% G# s4 ^3 Q* s& [) g% I! I4 x/ r<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: h7 G. j0 y' _5 b<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
/ E/ u9 ~+ w% H* N5 a6 ]" t<P>但我不会</P>
, y/ G7 B7 x; `1 y6 K% i0 c8 H<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" S, D9 j, k9 g  H<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; j  j3 X, M9 Y, \- O' ^<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' A/ x$ @5 K! Y, z2 ~<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
8 @3 g8 t6 p( I2 i* w+ b- y+ u<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 }# z5 I& T) k8 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- ?- }3 F: |1 j- J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
* ~9 K" ^* E0 {0 P; N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  e% g; B4 E. H" e% T# O8 T' A+ b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 k; d9 k; E$ G3 Q% K<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( y0 \; W& J6 T* B: M<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ W) I1 s/ Z5 C3 e<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 U/ ^0 \! e! E6 J* k7 M<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
) m: Q6 l7 K* A2 m9 D8 J9 q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, P5 F4 s% S2 Q: y4 t* [% t8 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* h* h9 K( P) N& A5 p  P+ ~<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 Q4 D+ o* M3 _& u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; C7 I1 ?2 m% T$ K. Z6 J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* b  u6 ?4 O- ?& [: w5 \' w% g: _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ r8 @6 Y% A3 S1 A( O; e0 E! H& u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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( C# p) W# ?! x# M( p* h: g9 M<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 R% N9 F8 V( a# d  V9 T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>