【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
+ U: D; A  t/ M! o* T3 zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
2 s2 Q. `3 U. O. O( fBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 y5 B" S  y! o% gI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
( m5 e4 u9 n' m8 w( X6 bBut I never did
0 e- K/ {. \$ oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& o6 Q; i# K. G; b$ IIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
/ F' H, `  |) K4 S: m5 r; c/ c4 tI want to confess that I love you,
% @% E& g  z) E% d$ tBut I never did
- h4 |8 f) b1 LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 H( G+ `' ~7 S4 G5 H6 LI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 B2 v, }- F3 v, c3 cI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 Z% J  c, k( g/ \( RCan I entrust it to you?
0 a/ R! F& n6 \3 @Entrust my love within your heart
% A$ u& u0 v1 H0 a/ i" I1 p2 tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 p- X5 q" K* z. n7 m<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ c4 Z, A! }: ]6 ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
; J2 \; y7 }7 y$ M( M2 W/ w<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
6 g3 d2 w2 N, H) ]4 O# ]; N<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
1 q/ Z+ ^( C$ o8 E8 H$ R  a$ _- U, g, q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
, Z/ m$ C% M+ C) {- k2 r& a; e5 U. H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- }) m- z+ u' ]$ F4 \# v4 {3 c* K<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* f7 Y- B! }3 _" Z# ^- l  ]. F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) F, I+ M; u6 }3 s8 J0 G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: R6 K/ f0 P3 X# t$ L; O9 C" E$ ]0 q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
( @4 ^5 A- A% m  N7 ~+ z' L) X7 D+ E2 W<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 L+ ~; P' z- ~$ }: a& q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, P- j9 O' j4 \. q4 b' y<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ P2 t6 w" A% w7 \7 q<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ \$ X1 S3 Q* g/ t<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ Z, C  I7 o: E+ K" B4 W<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( J0 |8 n) W2 B+ S. i  o5 {<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
. m8 r! T( @5 l% |) k  g  G0 I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' A5 g- v$ @. w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 e& B: r4 a- i8 q3 u<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' b; |1 C0 U1 {$ f0 L5 S<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 Y( S8 s  P8 j& X4 q<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& d5 B  X5 {$ }2 o; U<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( b5 @: ~5 g; ]) o" h<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
* q! k% S& p9 d: ^1 a<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
' Y- A$ a/ P& ?9 k8 a; E<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 R6 L& M5 i6 q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
/ u% f1 i& X+ ]9 H# b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  P# f6 H( f$ T* U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. v1 p# m- c. P  Y; }; p* C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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4 m( q' m: |2 R# b: Q  |# G 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

% q' d8 J" A, W/ B. D9 ?5 m这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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# K* p4 N+ C4 o3 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>