【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 Z6 N5 _6 L; U我另将歌词附在此。
+ c1 ]  ~% ^3 S& i# W: PThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
* P0 Z' X4 Z6 I2 mFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 K3 ^! A+ n! C6 k6 w. jWe meet and talk everyday,
- m" v4 }7 P  m9 v5 }But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, i* K4 A* h  ?* g6 q. ^If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. y4 H( K, t8 O5 ]7 M% k2 p3 R" E; X) TI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- c' Y7 X7 ~" X+ D! O# g6 T2 \+ w# gWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 S! B4 ~% b" A; T1 f3 OI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
/ g8 @. U5 }* T6 FOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  {+ d8 a: q7 a! V* i% A. jIf today isn’t too late,
2 f1 Z. X& t" [* rI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
" i& R* H1 C, ?: G0 m6 j9 ]7 \Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
" U4 u1 X4 ~. \$ LBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 C1 c; l; z( kIf today isn’t too late,
8 B; \6 X7 A6 u9 w/ dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) n( z% |& `5 ?5 S  _- lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
% A. [/ y& H, |) z* u% B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ F1 o1 _; w  U& m+ {: G% B2 j1 D<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
9 L$ X9 T& K8 J) M<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 t& L0 f6 q# e( G<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ j- t! S7 }/ C" q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
2 e2 D5 b- P( x( @8 Y+ V<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
$ `& o, A, @# [, z& [3 a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
* ?- a* f  {  R. I1 c  q: D$ B! G<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
6 g! w- n6 l. d8 n, j<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
! z& q  o/ Z, i<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
/ M. [  L, r- H3 `' X7 M, o* m& Q<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 s* V0 u% e9 x: A% u- ?4 e6 I* _<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" L4 p/ X$ u# E% C9 C/ z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' l" C) a) z' N, t. q% W, V" P9 e<P>但我不会</P>
; {' Q# l5 D+ F: J<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
  J- |% A+ u2 ]' R6 [- m1 l& P<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 V9 ]. V7 m: M. b) y+ z4 D$ ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" Z) {* e6 S( x+ }) j- I<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% e5 n; }7 `, @" |$ i<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& ]7 Z7 D6 r" m+ K2 W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 ^# I7 U; _! ~! k/ r! x<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 _- G4 L' ?; b$ a7 Q<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 y* a% |3 w2 @4 a0 T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! i$ p/ w6 x- w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' v) A0 `+ n: q1 D4 t7 }. E, a2 d<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ [; @: B6 p0 J. e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
4 A% C9 u: S3 t  m<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 K( b5 R" f2 e' o# v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 Z7 K! x. W  X: u8 Z9 ^6 j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; g: G6 l! Y- u6 s6 M+ L0 Q7 H, L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( w+ N3 o# P( q& m* ?<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! N; q7 Z) B5 k- ^: T<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
6 x/ |0 ^: ^: R7 v" j$ c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 o; u% K4 Z4 x  k, }, R<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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5 {, D) A2 O2 T' P这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' {% |- u" H; N+ N/ b: c( F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>