【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
) }% \% b& [- r* d" b% @# M/ o% FThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
  K; q0 R4 \- ?4 Z4 E0 z- iFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 L' w8 o' R) q/ a  _$ L) W3 AI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
* c2 `3 K4 t$ x% g& MI want to confess that I love you,
4 ~$ H9 R. T, K4 x& k, [But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
% W4 H1 c3 ~; V& tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* N# k) x: [* Z8 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; C5 d  t* e$ D4 v- {Can I entrust it to you?
5 ^! j7 `5 F# S2 j9 nEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& \' j& d# b9 i, U- ~: X* y6 zI want to confess that I love you,
: v* U- g6 d: Z* E3 JBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
. h0 m& K  \! W. |  U( X' n* cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
) ^' i$ m, _. j6 P: TCan I entrust it to you?
0 p8 `, ^6 X2 T" h$ F" hEntrust my love within your heart
3 Y; X6 o. T( c9 tCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

( z8 R; G0 L7 E<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
0 F0 S/ C( q# }! z1 I<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 V/ K, g  X7 T! D; t7 p. G<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: k; h+ C; Q# q8 x<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
7 @$ y4 O4 @2 F3 d: k& Y9 `<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
) m& f1 z! Q4 D. s+ I2 Q; P<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; ?; x4 i6 h3 r! W8 p0 T7 M$ e, o5 l<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; O6 U: c8 I1 ?2 C0 M4 o<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
: i( p! w  l+ N2 [2 l4 Y<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ H- y, C, n) d<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& B  Y5 d* O9 n) k; h  R<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
8 _* G* Z+ P/ s! K2 O$ v<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 L4 g1 i7 g& [( J<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 J& A* }1 [. M<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 Y/ l( E/ K& H% ?; P  b<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
8 I- D9 ^* o. |5 i<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 v# W$ w( h9 U: u6 G0 f4 s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) d! S& E1 v, E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" A4 K- ?. J$ D  v3 H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ u% V' g, v+ O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 o0 _2 `1 P2 F9 z/ K9 H, T3 C: [+ P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 G8 U6 F: f  _# w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ t7 B5 f# _7 Q$ e+ M<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: B" r( P. i) I, ?- f<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& z' v/ c' [, a6 E2 @9 A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; S$ P3 G& |- m8 v- b( `' B<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 E8 k6 }' S5 K  V$ L1 Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
' S0 I8 y! E" {( d4 m6 U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
6 G+ ]0 R3 R8 k; g7 F/ X( Y9 m<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; ~9 T' y& d1 z1 Y5 Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 v; r9 f  N! x) n9 F+ ~<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 }  i* t  B# B8 y( j1 F/ D<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ S: R8 @' N/ s% I8 R8 h<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 a* N# v, B1 I# t; l0 k7 y7 n 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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9 n# p. E( f% Z- A+ A% x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. s& Q( u. h5 A2 Q2 y  i<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 s; B, Q$ V* F<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>