【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
$ U, _+ h; i# H( [# VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 v8 E5 J. s1 k5 ^' n, yThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. k! D7 B5 K4 S; v* r2 N/ K& X3 dI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
) |" P" U3 h  h3 [$ R. pBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
5 D& q% {; Z* @I would probably know how you feel
, }1 H+ R" k0 P# r2 lLove… just the word love
0 n+ I% G' @/ T: R9 MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 M; R- p$ ~* b* YBut I never did
* @  v4 ]$ {  f0 lOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* w7 i& U) Z6 b+ h, x, r9 YIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" M7 u5 x2 @' l/ k' u( c# }0 MCan I entrust it to you?
, Z+ J. j- V  f# `# C9 iEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: |' E$ R7 c/ M% z7 L+ pBut I never did
4 A. J1 c8 Y) Y. bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ }+ o' y2 c& W. K7 ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! D) b. h7 F7 @) c1 I/ VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* X+ _2 y. ^! @5 JCan I entrust it to you?
% W1 B! e- r7 v$ y4 D9 tEntrust my love within your heart
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* I! B9 X) Z0 o0 }' p" M" R[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ C, Q0 }8 h; x& I2 B6 f* _<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; @3 b4 }: c/ B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ z# ]2 Y7 z' w  g/ }1 Y" ^- T( H) Z6 Q% T# v<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. U; n6 R2 q& Q  w# X  F<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( \3 C$ E- i0 e0 V" A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; ]) O+ p( g. d+ f: z2 o/ R& f<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 `5 s' Z7 J7 b* s7 J& |<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
6 j4 }6 z" U8 K- T<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 Q2 U% J3 f) ?8 L<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) v. U/ H3 t; E<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! D) d  i% M: T! }$ l<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  G; I3 V- G, {$ k  j<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
) [4 o% J5 w4 m  A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. L6 m: x- V% ~0 }3 [) v<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 P1 d/ \, S, @+ X! f" j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 b/ u& C4 X- @6 x8 m# ?- O<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( F4 C! i+ g* L  Q/ M0 V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& `- E+ p/ U( ^- R+ N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 E6 ~' _  V# ~+ v! G9 _- k: O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  [, n5 J+ {& ^8 M<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! s; g# F; }/ z7 r! W<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  V' s: |  G  }4 A: [' b) ~<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
2 A9 r' h1 k$ D1 I. S2 B" o<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% Z/ E7 X7 M$ D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 x1 s# s4 N) O: |' `4 I* e<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
+ J$ H* ]4 e9 Z- j& }) B2 d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 b$ T- L& W! D( M0 T) [% p# x" N: ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: c- V: i* D# ^; }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% c" k# q8 ?8 ^  b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 F! h' ~$ ?+ P( i<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 i/ y1 }  l2 U3 C1 K0 d2 e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! U3 N0 Z8 S1 X2 @<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  L7 ?, o# K) M+ f2 x<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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7 y! J5 H) b5 D  C- m% K<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>