【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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9 u5 g+ K5 H% {3 l) G' |我另将歌词附在此。
/ v* ?4 k3 R& |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 B4 j  s  h: F0 b- ?, pIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
/ s) n: v: M. d# bLove… just the word love
% i, M; \1 y# |8 m& MWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ ~4 W. ~" F- d7 DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 A& h; O2 X5 v8 jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 K. P4 X# q, p# e3 E0 `Can I entrust it to you?
) Z/ a% i7 j; M& G0 mEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
3 d7 n& c. l$ U- y* @" y; C1 r7 j' l. fI want to confess that I love you,
( F: t# S' D; f3 qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ q& s. B, {1 Z8 G/ e3 U7 VCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* E4 O- [0 y& MCan I entrust it to you?
5 w0 i  Q1 C, `" Y5 qEntrust my love within your heart

$ s2 D! E9 u; D' Y/ v5 z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

" Q7 S! R& g# X! U  [; }<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
: |  q4 |8 a" m* r6 x' b/ S<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
, O/ l6 k; o# y0 F/ o4 J  z<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ `# S- v3 W# G5 k3 J<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
! d  f  r6 |# S5 G# C2 ^& o<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ R# a: \* e. J) }<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
4 a8 t6 f8 N' K  a3 R+ ^<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 R+ ^/ a9 ]9 _4 f% O8 a- }<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
5 f' k, g# A( s3 v<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
$ k( z2 J! N. j* W<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; a- g, y1 z& s" u3 E/ s8 G<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
$ z# S; g$ w0 Y0 g$ \; i<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 s3 q0 S9 W5 p# ]* S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
- s% d0 z1 c9 h3 r  N+ W) v$ E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ A. t  [; b* G  c<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. o# o4 V5 t2 E! z" H: Y) Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 z. o% x8 E+ d' h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 U; ~$ G. k% p, [, ?" J9 N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
% n( t* F$ R0 h! Q8 H0 d- e<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 u% I8 h+ M/ U8 R& |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) u. n& y" v8 J* P* C<P>但我不会 </P>
6 b& E8 n9 l9 a! B<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ Z# h& m3 m1 D" U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: D$ U5 Z1 K% P5 ?# D, T<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ I: R9 Y3 ~9 H. ^. t3 ]3 r8 h9 n<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ V& N9 _3 v6 M/ i$ H3 w7 F<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 I) ~0 Q6 x1 }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 h& U1 a9 o0 Y" ?<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( t! h" r2 P. E" h 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 F6 h5 q- F9 H$ s这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 m* a4 N. q, x1 c<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ r3 p. S) i" L<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>