【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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- S/ Q9 n: }; z5 p1 F我另将歌词附在此。
) x( _; G/ e5 s0 w" t' i) vThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 k/ Y; X: b# ^5 M# L0 f* zWe meet and talk everyday,
: r# `' v- S. x3 ]2 W* @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ T5 \7 h0 l  wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
" I, I+ b4 B8 K. P6 oLove… just the word love
5 t9 i* c3 D' A3 f- G; i: Y8 BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 ~4 ]3 B) K5 k: o8 I: l# |: KBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 z7 l2 N3 T$ i: }' RIf today isn’t too late,
$ i2 m0 |8 H/ D& H- ?  e& lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% m" e$ o9 |& f2 m: mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* C; [. J- Z- n: B0 QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
% T- @' g6 L7 _4 n# f! ]! sWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 g# D# @$ \- F/ U7 I& e3 _% ^9 uI want to confess that I love you,
8 g  R  m( _$ ^8 U5 LBut I never did
  F) z4 b. S" U( eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 E9 b# g4 {7 c! ?5 o: _If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 G7 W# T$ U! m  M/ MCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 k5 K  i) r# o/ F' \Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
0 l% ]% l$ M: J2 Z- i" n<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
5 F1 I- S  z/ N8 S  x/ p  \5 S<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 _7 n% z* C- t0 T4 l$ b9 V4 L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' b" B/ N% V5 X  D<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 G+ O. q1 t0 n( Z* u<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
) h3 a5 N* U4 b! ~8 H<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
! y6 a, `1 ^: X$ y5 K<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
$ ?5 {# w0 A8 @! Y<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; y9 ]' @, l) q3 s8 H<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 M* z8 m5 @3 a, Q; v# J<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
( V4 y5 U1 s0 y' O$ `6 x<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  O$ u: f0 U! @$ v<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 ?# |! |: ^2 {<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, v! J1 w7 i4 Q1 Z$ }) n2 K8 U<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 @( x* u* k+ H4 O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) l$ ^) {) L/ v" w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 k( b7 E* ]1 I! l- O# c7 c9 t% c<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ ?( B, n' k3 [8 k<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* ^2 w* L! g* X2 l2 t: P/ n" ]<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ m; @: q) Y* {) ]  ?6 A6 Z! S' A0 [<P>但我不会 </P>
& [3 {4 E9 b2 s% G! p, i8 b<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, G+ ~. d3 u' k2 R# h<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
3 p/ m0 ]$ Z# [) a% e1 W<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# S2 t* }. Q" X* H5 C<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, P! Z6 a: e3 i+ Z<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  ~3 H$ O' v) _5 r! W, {% b<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! S$ B  D: f/ ^. N9 m" r<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' {! p  t1 k% `: @6 i) l<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>