【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
" N! c6 H' J4 ~" _" Q0 rI already loved you with all my heart
" d( S2 T6 A! V: h: U7 kWe meet and talk everyday,
% O+ S/ [9 T: S! M9 v  `4 FBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: W  b; Y. ?, X0 LI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
" |) B: n# ~' c7 kWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 T5 J# a8 J# B1 Y8 N  UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( A+ Q% z. p1 J8 {% V; ~If today isn’t too late,
0 X0 |  I3 F& x. B; i8 r9 uI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
  L) \+ A/ H0 H# t- Q3 g) pCan I entrust it to you?
& D# L9 i3 \3 }& aEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( e) p$ j' k2 e/ e' E) yI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# A0 c$ l+ ]7 Q! f6 g1 z: dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 L% R4 h! {+ |6 \, ?Can I entrust it to you?
& N0 |8 e. k& h5 zEntrust my love within your heart
/ c4 |8 r3 }* @- r" rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
! g1 e6 i4 n/ `<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 |0 o" C3 v" z$ j, {/ w. v( J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. g6 [0 @/ k5 i1 k! M/ d% t9 |1 F. X<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' h! Z3 Z$ U3 ]8 s" z, f; Y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
5 H1 d& z  o1 V: n4 f, k<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  E4 W& ?! g* l6 ?<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ u* C9 ~9 M6 f9 _; A$ e<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 ^* `! x/ B7 n: {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! f; s2 Z. ?8 Q7 k: l" ^" v<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
' A* a# c+ V' [* h<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 U+ g2 b' |6 l& `<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 T( f% {/ Y* y) \/ n<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ j  T$ Y# A; _7 K$ C$ a) R4 |1 o<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* ^2 s. U! [2 G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 {+ A! B: U1 ]' _5 h2 Q; \# N<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
; D; _% d. v/ o9 L" s# b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 I" h/ O, o- u2 F" k) w$ g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, ?! O* S/ A) v+ P$ [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, e0 M  N7 P6 C0 m8 Y# u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ w* g# D! S6 Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
) u( h% z7 K- m, `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
" c  }% U! ?" ?8 A* h* k" F' O$ l, S<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( i+ q/ i4 k; z: h, i+ Z8 ~- F6 }<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 H/ M' g3 C( a2 Q3 a! N7 p4 Z- w! y<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
6 ?& O- |' U. P5 f+ {<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 X4 q* k1 R% B# g+ R0 q; {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 o0 h% l7 m, }) F$ e+ e' r# W( Z1 f<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  H6 `8 ^7 X0 f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 i. b% n& T+ d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 `$ J' x+ a: ^" J8 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 g- s& `* T/ Z; ?<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# v+ X& K2 M' S; Q# _ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' U# k" I% U5 T2 L' I<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>