【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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' p. u- ?: [) i6 F* b: Q( X我另将歌词附在此。
7 ?5 `! Y' k  u5 [( {, hThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
' X* i/ Y  C0 P1 b0 eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 t/ {# B" r- a  O8 y- e0 s- ZI already loved you with all my heart
4 T4 E/ L0 N1 z/ v7 OWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 x: X: f$ E2 K. d! c$ V4 W" g$ [) sIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
% e/ s3 B9 b- t# Q) FI would probably know how you feel
/ F' b5 G7 X( l" w9 N, [Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% I% a8 |. E! S7 VI want to confess that I love you,
$ I6 Y! ^$ h6 `But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
* m: l7 j! s( x7 Y2 b6 c! JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 z9 H3 Q0 O' w* oEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# ^5 Q8 x! d" G/ A) `5 t1 |0 sWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 A( o! Z& x' a4 t  eI want to confess that I love you,
9 S1 v# m  q$ z1 J) l! O; k* e5 C- kBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; i4 y) c) p2 S% p* E6 yIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
8 g3 X" [# i2 u% l9 N8 jI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 q& Z  H' Q. v7 y4 X0 aCan I entrust it to you?
7 a5 L! ~) u: X4 O9 F6 B7 wEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

/ q8 o  U; i, @8 D# @) ?8 x. m. g% J<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
. U& P! N1 O, g6 H: x5 W  T% p<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 w1 i4 H4 z& G! u# D6 ^6 n<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
* F# y6 A0 l  {5 n% j; y<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
* D' K% h% C' g* D<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ `' x& J7 j* ^# Q4 b8 s<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" g: H* h7 v7 Q. a<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% r7 `8 _6 F; J# Y/ W+ y+ ]<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 I! X8 j+ G; H; K  t<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 U# u4 s: }% f* M" `# X6 F<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 B% E5 F! H' ~; o" ~3 v  _<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 _  K; T( D$ X4 N1 Z' r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
/ A* P( B3 N$ |1 D: S<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 E# c% v6 e) Z+ ?/ N7 q4 ~<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
, _6 T8 G& r9 F, H' i3 \<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 I1 j0 P$ r" }5 z  a5 T" t$ x# J<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
: g' l- p: G; T% U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 z0 |) i+ _! P3 j: M5 f5 Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) ]; K. T& H( b) Q4 B<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
/ p. U9 }% h- z' M, g4 c7 G<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
6 p, W6 L2 c2 f2 p# a8 Z4 L7 t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
# p) q4 w5 e0 M7 f' L9 L<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 {/ z4 p5 ^! _4 {0 T  ^, J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% p( q1 @/ ^( y; U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 `3 @: S# N0 c: z5 Q: x- {<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ ~$ {' W: J' |+ }2 f. N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; O" q! I* U0 A% n: |# a9 j2 Q# F/ ?<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& E9 u' e, G4 T" g, `, h- I! m1 c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 A; u8 e" q/ P. \<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>