【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
' o% O; v9 W: v* c0 a, ^The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
6 V! U3 N. T* E7 l+ x5 Y+ X2 z7 ZWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
, z! w+ l5 j: n! R1 FIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
) A, t, s; m8 dOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
3 S" Y2 B: a/ G/ iEntrust my love within your heart
( _" z; n. [$ R% F! L1 K% z% RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' |7 A" s8 L- N" \$ |I want to confess that I love you,
( [6 W' ~- \  X& }But I never did
5 c! {: `/ ~! C* H$ rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 q- P2 M! y/ W" \9 j4 XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& V9 Z! Y9 V* s. H" h' |) kI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 R) J+ [- w( U3 e  a6 Y' wCan I entrust it to you?
# M# t- b% q5 p( g& K/ ], s5 zEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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2 s7 \* T, w- j[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
% d( s- N6 a4 h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 N' R7 W* k& p$ [( i) h- Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
6 S0 N( _2 X: ~<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 d$ p# n# |$ b) M<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: i+ B% h* Z% _7 ~9 s1 ~5 \<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
3 f2 R* y2 g" R' u1 s<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) E5 z+ z7 a/ b# Y9 Y( @<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
* e% U( y5 I9 v7 x  R$ m<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
. x$ v) r2 `/ _7 H& }<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
7 V( ?" y; a5 _( f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 h0 Y5 Q$ A' k8 |0 h<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) D; }% ]8 M5 {" Z" S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ v" K' B9 G. \" N<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( j: _! J: X, L3 h; Z; D<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( V' w4 O* K( w$ f9 |" V4 j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 ?0 a6 |9 f+ [- U0 W0 k<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 ]1 _% {8 j4 L<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) [( x1 O# u2 ^& o$ X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 j" _% {. W" @2 @0 @7 T/ @9 N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ e$ d1 J& N9 V) S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, ^5 a. S7 Q) e8 K' }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: f. p8 g3 Q0 B9 D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
3 d8 y. b6 n* H3 C) l& T! W<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ R4 p8 G" o+ [4 z- O" x  w<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) N: |9 E4 @; w, V, ^" e. O7 K<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
8 v2 V$ d8 Z; q6 C<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& X* X7 M1 J; f8 C: [; q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
$ d+ n8 t& A( I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ u; N( z8 M4 c( F<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- t, h3 G& W( d# S+ D+ A<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ j( \+ C! _7 a$ X& ~" j" x<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" ?! J1 k9 d. q<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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1 i- Z/ l5 I# N" U这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; Z6 x$ }* u% ~1 i% W<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>