【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
9 W: W7 x- S5 \2 {. ?The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( p* b( a/ q9 O& d; G" H3 X# n( z" R. lThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
, s8 c4 L8 i3 c+ o9 zBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
. X3 W2 M" n9 e* [$ l" WWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
6 C  z! F# `3 m4 b8 a0 T- }! TBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 k6 |; P2 S4 o2 L/ n5 N8 xIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
2 x7 L% t5 m8 j' _- n7 K$ rI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
0 K: y' [" y, z  J4 `0 qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 p6 f" \( G( {1 J. `9 PLove… just the word love
) U& {8 I9 p  a2 \6 nWhy is it so difficult to express?
% ?/ z7 q7 o6 Y# m; YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
7 d- ]8 B0 O% I+ e' y9 N) X, gOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( R/ V) o0 J( q) S5 R  t7 jIf today isn’t too late,
3 |/ f5 w" K. F( M" tI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) n( \+ N/ O( l4 RI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 C4 H% S$ r8 L) q( VEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* V/ M4 ?& H' f. b" a3 o7 L<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
; Z! k0 k3 ?- k* t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 T: ^0 v. K7 r8 h4 P) ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  B- Y6 u: V# Z2 b<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# {% l( d$ }4 N4 H  `5 v<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 W1 q+ `7 v5 B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 q; B, a: K% u<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 H6 S$ F& m# u! {$ `. ~<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
: P' ^" a) K1 Y, D4 j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 E: N  ]+ h. d" v4 w- O<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( k& C: i3 U- `) o) _  m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  O& c4 r4 N. Y+ Z% s& s% {<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
2 y# T; b, g0 _+ _<P>但我不会</P>
& G! W- V6 Z- s# h7 U$ Z<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# V/ R2 [) d. s$ J. }<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 @# q* b0 c- [( I<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( e. T, D$ v2 g, h+ Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 a. g) P3 d, \5 n<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) F1 r3 C8 Y7 o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, p3 Q% G3 J. h! g" S. F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* ~0 X+ u5 e1 K, W. c<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
2 D8 W+ S0 ?1 f3 g<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. s1 C2 I( F7 B4 _$ V' \+ \$ S6 b<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# O! k7 |" W& {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! {8 e# D# [8 D) Q" |<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 ?0 ~* U- I: j  M9 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& ]; Y$ ~/ i/ O/ \& w<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 Q/ ^* k  T; k1 m: _' Y3 j<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& o4 F; c) m' q, S<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ Q8 _) q/ B& B" ]/ A7 {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
9 W0 m% Y# i6 m- f0 L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

$ n. a% W& ^1 R' O 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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5 E4 t$ B; m* |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>