【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 z, ?& N; Z/ N4 e) n& I我另将歌词附在此。
( A( N! F4 `' D) ZThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
, A1 Z# t3 @5 X% t! R" ?% v, sThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
: Q5 C! a: I; U6 O! DFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
8 W5 ]0 T: o" p. m$ SWe meet and talk everyday,
3 \1 }# R. v8 I2 z: [- E* bBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
+ |% O, j: \+ Q7 ?, C5 U% j" s/ OIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ [7 c  P" b$ bI would probably know how you feel
# B% ]3 o1 o( b% m1 D; q: m' Z! VLove… just the word love
, {/ G3 F! g0 Q; q' R: ~Why is it so difficult to express?
( P3 y8 ^  ~0 b- O4 O$ `4 X# LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 I  j( k, A* \/ t4 o; wIf today isn’t too late,
8 B* t  }1 p" T0 F4 dI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 ?0 k3 a: M8 _" lI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 P) S) H* @! l. z3 S6 \Love… just the word love
& W# W3 G! h+ |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- l5 _3 z4 w) V. r+ nBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
/ ^1 U2 R1 d& p3 b$ L) EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
- t9 f2 ~0 {2 M4 lCan I entrust it to you?
, s# t5 j, i2 qEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ j, U! ?. G' x# p8 _$ l5 c/ v$ DEntrust my love within your heart
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& K- {/ s. m+ r# s/ T  ]; h[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 P" Y# {( U# T% s) g* b<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 G0 f* C" c9 l( f: D3 h<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 Y5 F# h7 }3 L1 s3 k<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- _7 Q$ Y0 A6 T! \5 j* }. x0 H4 {<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% h/ V$ J2 c+ s6 v; d<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  e3 v; c# Q: o- v<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, i! `0 W! p9 D( @  d6 g/ u' c<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
2 Y7 R6 F. J/ z1 K. M. v1 Q: h- g4 w<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
/ N5 l- \  Z9 n6 A8 P<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
4 b) b: R1 \1 \<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
+ ]  @3 x  B7 O3 ]$ n4 l<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
6 t7 T" F0 d- x) O9 v( d<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% r$ z7 ?! ]1 F) a& K/ W1 u+ D' r! X<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
* F' D4 a! C7 Q) }9 u8 q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 Z7 U' @( O  h9 M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 j7 p1 t: N3 s5 G<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
9 ^* R8 s) x" a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 h7 N4 m' f/ y4 Q+ Q<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 C# G% Z3 Z+ ^3 s. N" k# P<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. A3 V5 D4 C3 S2 ^<P>Love… just the word love </P>
, }1 r' S: e! K- x2 n  K2 H/ v<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 |' R# ]8 I' ?& ~<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 I* D% U- u: w<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: L# X0 r9 l1 F9 X. O! ~5 \! u<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
; i' G8 c( E4 e2 m1 |  T<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
/ w& K  W3 F1 l* l5 D<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
! U: L; I; s; f: j' r  w<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; i9 Q$ ?- X( z9 {7 m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
1 C7 k1 K" D7 E9 B6 t' Y+ ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 E: h, a; y0 i& t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
: D( v# f; X" z6 ^, x4 x# O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
+ N# U- {1 ^0 o<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

6 |# s  P" ~4 ^' B; o( n这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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' O6 [& I& X' w! T% Z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) \. R: ^( z% B. U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>