【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
% t! I- b5 M" D  dThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
# _$ N% p6 |5 z* y5 p7 rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
. D; E7 h6 [  P4 ~" W. K8 NI already loved you with all my heart
; R5 Y- F9 C. W1 X7 D8 SWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
1 c; h* D( z, M7 I. tLove… just the word love
  c6 o, _; J8 r$ ~$ |& f) HWhy is it so difficult to express?
* X% O# k; L5 u. p$ Z7 @) [1 r5 p- UI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 b/ P+ v$ u, ^* q* A8 s! WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
. M% R: g  S* x4 c0 c/ K2 RIf today isn’t too late,
2 E$ W# L9 k+ _( k' X4 U& PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
4 y3 g2 h/ [* C3 r8 }& Z% dI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 q+ w, u% j9 u% e4 ^) FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- ^! R  K; m& C' @  @Why is it so difficult to express?
: }6 V" _. F! Z! I7 GI want to confess that I love you,
2 ]5 @! V( I1 y( E8 BBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
1 W7 e. W* m' `4 K6 ]I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
. k! P# S% H  K8 i6 a1 KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ b" x4 q) t4 Z* B. R; BCan I entrust it to you?
/ C8 r$ p9 h  d' vEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

9 s3 ]! \/ i* i<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 I% Y5 D% H* y6 c6 i$ g<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, I$ I+ ]6 _7 K" x8 b5 k1 ^. }<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 f: Y! x/ R/ z+ o4 ?" @<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
/ S3 @  y: y3 n! a& c; r0 m9 {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: B4 ?' Z; T3 m. |/ S6 T<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ m) b1 P1 n; A& p<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
  S) r) z: E/ z0 U<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 W6 h6 I, L8 K1 A( k. \  z<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) l/ C$ d& F: z' T7 ^* d6 y<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
! I0 E# K! X' ^+ E( ~4 N: l. w& d% B<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 @0 e" z) H) J  M4 o<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 }- R6 i( ^4 A% S! k( Y5 e<P>我想说我爱你</P>
6 Y0 o$ y' ^% D# l+ Z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 Z! o2 _/ ~4 C1 S5 x<P>但我不会</P>
' m9 a& m4 U$ h, R! |$ }$ b<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" W; M  j% y. ~( q4 J& J9 ]4 Y<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
2 r6 v5 r1 S3 ?" L- ]4 b: g<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! J: J1 \% d# _1 x7 z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 Z# h  b. Y8 X8 I$ i, ?: m7 B+ {<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
0 c+ f- E' H( J" o, w5 y0 M<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. S4 d7 ?8 X4 S9 T; i9 x$ W$ a& Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
) u: l! @' k' A% [8 U<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
# S7 b8 g# J/ c5 k  e<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. h- O* j. G+ u$ N: S7 F<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& w% ~6 X1 U1 I& o% C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 m- C( C7 M! ~) |1 R4 @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' M$ x0 P( R1 n+ c2 p# W5 `<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 @& L7 K' k8 G' R% D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 z  t: M/ n* }; ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 u3 U- j4 w( I5 s/ K. {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" \1 X# O/ F% ~9 G5 D% B) U- Z<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>