【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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5 k& ~8 Z, R. F& z5 Y我另将歌词附在此。
- S8 D9 t5 m% b. V! W$ F- \The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 t% M- o( q+ X" x! ]I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 T- n1 v# w* P! n& T! jBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
. m, X1 {2 N- f& a5 A% yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
# E9 N1 @4 `& G2 L1 A: w# R' X' fI would probably know how you feel
4 i* `$ A" j- ?6 e8 b. ]9 }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' g5 {3 Y7 U9 YI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ ?& r) F' b9 ~9 lIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
1 C8 n' ?1 v8 O( sI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: P+ P- |9 |9 ]) \- v# |. bLove… just the word love
1 K2 @+ h# l; J. c1 J# Z8 n$ TWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 d; k& B, Z8 u) s. D0 GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
9 F' K# \$ s2 _1 o- k4 H0 }  N+ S% VOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
: q. o2 `+ ^* }0 o( }& HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" X9 ^+ j$ c  ?- [4 ]: R<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 v  p1 n( N  f# b5 c- n<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
! j  V2 r( @4 y/ w( _" m3 c# M<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 |# j+ C9 u) \1 H<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
3 e8 E* w0 e5 M2 [- \<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 {$ a+ p. A. F# W) [* K  {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  @- v$ r6 |4 r# S. `$ s<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
5 c8 [2 ~, u/ L<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. ^. ^" z' q" [! m$ a. F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
1 p: M( L+ N# p0 l<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
0 l$ G' t5 [# K( C<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  C. y( V2 t1 H9 e6 W2 |, O8 E; d<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: A( }9 q  U* l<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ ^) X7 ^! E; h9 r' a, L* |<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
$ f' V' v0 L$ U6 @/ m& h, C* B9 t' y<P>但我不会</P>
5 s2 X# d3 C" e: p. F( V+ e! V<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! q" R! ~; H' Y+ W3 G  j' D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 }6 e& ^* y0 A/ Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ D0 A* n7 @5 F3 n& U6 E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( G) W* K' v+ [% ]: U9 m/ F4 b. _. s# a<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- _, }- `; [6 H<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 ]% _9 k" E$ r' w<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' v# ^6 U6 ?( q: N<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
3 ]& Y/ T* [# P+ E! P, H4 b# M<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
* W* |0 p# G7 M3 D0 y! Z+ w<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
& n6 c" K2 P. P5 X* m# x0 x<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ B" R+ H  b. i/ I( s% y# Y1 E<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& r: p" F& o* x/ |' W<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) z4 w4 m  z( H# K% J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' j1 `3 d2 o' l- L2 C/ @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>