【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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1 H5 j, F' e+ q9 I" {我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 }* C1 b' d+ DThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
# _( T* Q% o- M& k$ g5 j- S  a$ |From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
& N6 A: G/ ?, sWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' @! @/ t" p' }, n" s0 rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: {0 {2 e2 n6 l+ eI would probably know how you feel
5 `4 P6 v1 ~) L' H3 X6 c% XLove… just the word love
6 v2 o& }/ y, F! P- xWhy is it so difficult to express?
) h4 O; N) L) @1 W6 b% AI want to confess that I love you,
9 J/ x3 V  T* v, `' k. G# [& u0 RBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 U  P. E- X- d8 R/ R( V) w% P/ zEntrust my love within your heart
8 p1 t/ a- D  }Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( J, V5 X" x7 I  y6 ^/ z( L- \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' y0 i3 p( T. i+ b5 S/ ^; ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, Z* @3 B, P6 ^6 A, YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- m; S# t" P* w5 r, E! i' R0 yCan I entrust it to you?
& B! C4 I1 \0 J( O3 C) YEntrust my love within your heart

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oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' f5 Q6 m2 H- Q" \; h<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
( Y" R0 k! d/ {: ~8 U9 }<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
4 _# t% h1 [5 G( t<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
$ P9 @# S, t7 A" s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
( T1 x# N" v; V, J- F% r<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 c' L! y- g! D+ ]7 P: {/ z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 ]# d9 c' X, A2 T, y" C& v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; B9 c5 v7 K7 Q- |9 k5 r6 ]: n<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; v+ b& _8 {# L/ ]' ^" S, C3 _<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
0 }4 Z  \5 h# N<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ u% ~6 n$ D. {2 M* b) U, f<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: D3 K6 X$ G0 y  h<P>我想说我爱你</P>
  {* J. O8 I7 N. ~5 S<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' R& c% e* l" Q; Q" q5 q( D<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 E( F5 C6 _% H0 o: M8 l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! f: U" B/ v3 m" L8 N  F0 t9 h<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ m/ i6 O0 ?9 c5 D  b0 s+ P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, i8 Y# j9 H$ M<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; `' g6 T# f0 N- _$ i- S  Q! F8 \+ w! u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" X' E; k( Y8 H* n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# G, V* Y4 w2 f- c<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* y( @. P9 c1 Y4 m) H<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! O0 K1 R2 z/ W1 k' F<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
% a+ h- s. d' }7 e2 S4 i<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' j9 d! b* y- Y" G! d9 H<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ F: [+ S3 U+ z" G4 W" n<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 R; E/ S( x- v; E+ j. }/ T; L<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) a0 a1 O. G* G: }* ]- f; u, A<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
' h& a% z0 n; {- U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, @! }0 g0 [+ E+ Y/ e, i! R- U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
: O9 g5 D0 a. Y. Q! B& e<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

: e/ G; d* V5 T& B) _. e0 ~ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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& f0 M5 F6 ?5 F( L这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 E9 f4 q, S2 u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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+ ?7 h( U% Q" I, D<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>