【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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% k) j# u! B8 \8 Y' F/ W4 a我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
9 A# F' f( X6 V( ?. x& Z4 LWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 s6 K# H: }8 |  e3 J9 oLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& A' ^( ?. F/ y& V; ?* u$ _I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 c4 s) n" c' V7 ?+ V& e$ E8 l- {If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 f" Z8 m0 F# L9 l9 s$ @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% }* x% D- ~$ v* V$ S* W$ {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; o& C7 r4 H! HCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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0 O9 r  O2 E) {( J[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 l" V7 T9 I1 G  M( i) ~: D<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" u4 z' c( K1 s- `' B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
4 e/ M1 A) ]* Y  ]  ^, l<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# |! {, M. j4 W  N4 k7 m$ _1 Y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
  @  u& R3 R$ @& C6 @<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 e. j2 o, l3 |6 ~) w5 Y/ C<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
4 v) o: _7 T, p' F: U3 L<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
# J* I# E5 @0 O, w, ]8 Y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, w& S% R8 c7 V+ e, O<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 M# Z( l9 v2 f8 P<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ h5 m1 Z0 ^7 K0 O<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
7 a1 ?8 |  W0 i& m& i3 |<P>我想说我爱你</P>
/ u; G5 n/ n2 i4 f! E! \5 u/ n" H<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
. d6 o0 K- |/ E! j<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 M) k2 I% t6 M7 s' m6 e<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ w% w3 L8 W5 N7 o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; S: g2 y3 V4 I9 B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 D8 `, `: ]9 H; x<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# W- U5 e+ ]8 \5 M% \) }<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
3 l* w; q) G7 f. p4 |<P>But I never did </P>
9 |0 _+ R0 y# L' q- n<P>但我不会 </P>
' R9 m9 \7 ^  ?: @) Q5 u<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. Y# ^" q. R, U3 j8 b4 }! k+ w4 m9 D<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* G4 C, q0 h) i. }% [0 F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' @4 G4 v' S  M2 d3 W  z7 l$ T- j<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" f1 p0 v" I, Q: Y; w/ S<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
8 J$ [1 T" a2 U9 `* k. S<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" z, {: K- {' Z& b<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! y1 h! y! k8 s' E% B6 x& U' m! c# Q4 @<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& D2 e! U  R- R. f; ^5 z0 A<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 o* T5 K$ U/ I8 Q7 n0 |<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

9 j' _: n$ A$ D6 P5 R% h 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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8 F( @5 ]  X# D9 |+ b这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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* @* o1 o) A) m5 N; H! M! e<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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