【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
- f' o" s, `, [/ MThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% S; }( R' t* R& _  a; {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
$ v3 H5 x7 j  c. A% z" L3 C0 HI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
9 z: @0 ~8 H9 j# a& LBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ }: _# R# r: e. B1 o# @( sI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 X& n7 j; K' E+ i; |+ G4 r6 [Why is it so difficult to express?
( h& j: @; N! X6 E! \+ fI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
4 F3 E4 u, ?0 _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  ?6 ?, w6 I+ N* u' zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ g3 i4 H3 y3 S4 C) X3 b+ C# RCan I entrust it to you?
) U8 k0 E+ r: d3 E0 j) h; ~# B; HEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ k) s2 X; ]: G9 ?, dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
: \9 i. m) q0 B; h% fBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! F+ A8 F8 c3 H; gI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& \' g  g2 l- ^( _4 X6 UI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 N4 `  ]) z2 X; h* r( y, }3 [Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 o4 c- I5 {! }! h<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
6 T, x8 H$ ^& g<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
6 g( ~0 q0 ?8 c+ i- t<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
0 |! s) f( Z7 O2 R<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" x- H/ h- e8 W1 B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
; y' P' p$ z( P8 P" y- O5 v<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
" I: G4 s) ]7 [1 N1 h<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 U8 Q0 @+ b  `0 j, @; A! i" s$ \<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, e; v! c/ @) a/ e' p' Z. \3 K  |<P>但我不会</P>
8 R% U3 `- w3 r2 u<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' h, x& c! B/ Z. u* `<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
  y# p2 z7 Y* e# o" l9 J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  A) H, |' m# {; j" {( b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 E- b8 Y/ F5 z) ~! z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) p7 G7 z4 s! ?3 Q! q9 _<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
! E4 M  B0 M" {( L& t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& x) L* t' R" ~0 r0 G7 j* S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 n+ I6 \7 h" D! g% d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
$ @6 @3 j" Q* Q; V( C* J: q1 X$ g<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 m1 Y$ v$ `, Q$ g3 n8 w<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 q# S/ _6 _8 Q<P>But I never did </P>
" o- }- }/ H" a; A$ Q% @/ m<P>但我不会 </P>
/ b' Z! y9 P5 ?, {. m<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- I, M+ V( G3 X) q, z2 H<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 d) l* ]$ ~! ]; {$ z<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
. z* m4 T" ?, L0 W% ^& j<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 D* i# a9 q( C# m, {& i& J, j; a8 o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- A- D( j  |1 Y' Z3 S+ q, I: c/ U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
/ Y5 q  z6 `1 ?5 B2 S<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; q# B) u4 |5 B$ S( J<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

& y# H6 R, m  C" s& m  A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- }5 Z3 t$ `/ f$ c# y4 \+ y) O" T! p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>