【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
2 y% x; Y! ?3 i: A) I2 gThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* `! d% r% t3 S8 l6 hI would probably know how you feel
' c  u  G& J- ALove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
- W2 I, _" {) k) M* ]I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- J% b7 i; ]2 O1 @  o- _One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
! j' z' O2 `) u/ X+ ]/ L& PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! o6 u7 H! ?7 A# `& d# ~& q! NCan I entrust it to you?
9 J. e, o0 U  |9 @& U3 wEntrust my love within your heart
( c+ J5 i2 p4 F5 |' w7 GLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
7 U$ k1 Q7 Q- `, TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
  w0 Z" j2 |# s2 m* J3 W( UIf today isn’t too late,
1 n+ I; }& b6 K9 v* OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  A) n2 r7 ~4 qCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* R- W* W# l5 @- O<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
7 e8 V  |+ T( V6 }, \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ }2 ]1 F, I0 Y2 i% o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" Z5 ]- Y5 M' {3 _1 y" a% _<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! F! h$ Z9 }3 ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
+ m2 d2 [! N  U! k: s<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
" B: v) S# z! K" z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
& e" e0 Y! C, @' I. h5 ^! j8 p7 V<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
* d3 \& n3 h, s<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
3 C1 ^0 @/ [4 H0 S. H2 y' o5 M8 f, S<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
6 ]5 z- x" \  T" U* y8 `( A<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 t7 A- I7 [: ~" P0 m( H<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
( S& T! O9 N4 _/ Y! q1 G& |9 u; B/ R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
6 |9 B# I8 }+ j1 S% O9 U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 l* L8 d9 P9 Y0 F6 t* |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; ^5 R& |9 b" d8 i) q3 {9 ?+ M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 c0 f/ b3 x, o" J6 L* y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
* X1 G! {9 l1 p7 R: Y, H0 [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% M& W$ f. S! A" q' o  r3 {, Q<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 \  z+ @$ P( a- n% a! K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
1 w* t. o1 s- I/ ~& m5 Y<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ Z5 Q! P9 a6 [! k<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
: e( |" m8 j6 n3 T. i, S7 ~<P>但我不会 </P>
; _" k# G$ [5 B- T. d<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 b0 ]7 J# e. }1 S* K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 i2 f- f5 z/ L0 t$ e" r1 K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; S1 m( t4 u1 L- U5 |; @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; h5 i7 W. }" E- C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ p" @: |& G$ q4 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 t& E6 X  n# J1 d: T2 n<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 X! n9 Q( O" o8 w" `) T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>