【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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) z: ]$ |  b5 N$ ?  g5 s+ z% v+ O我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( T) H# g! c- c) u& @9 w8 ^That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 k4 c9 |: u, _6 F' JFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* }$ ?- S' J6 x4 W) wWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
6 k  N( l# h- t' s: sI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ K0 b" G& K( s/ j8 bIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  C5 S5 h1 d3 u8 h; MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 m6 S3 r. u& ^- d0 yCan I entrust it to you?
& z! b8 T* ~6 q( Y) T2 lEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
( M) X* o1 @: Y, ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
; g# I! X  v  B' n6 F4 D( Z" ?6 L: k6 OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 E" i3 [& w1 J7 w9 C! e' J& U9 c0 FIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 x; c6 x$ o4 C0 q" o0 DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) n6 E+ F4 @9 ^7 ~' ]9 h0 BCan I entrust it to you?
$ [0 _* |8 ~( d9 lEntrust my love within your heart
; H  X; F0 n. b
[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 R! ~- e8 R0 D6 p<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 ~. h. D: `8 c. t" b<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  r$ d$ K' y- A' q<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 A6 u- W4 G4 P/ O) d2 n<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 s- y5 i7 F: r2 r/ r<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
% H( d$ K; h, A6 [$ S6 |0 @7 \3 {<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  @4 X! @4 A, R/ C& g$ w. i0 q- H2 O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
8 p+ W% Y: `4 D/ G7 r<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
) m. d' q1 H8 ?  F, P1 }$ R<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" D1 P6 }$ Q% u( j<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
4 \6 G# x/ Q4 o1 E# l' A<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. p, m3 J5 e% x: [/ f# z% e$ i: _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ C* x, G, {, i/ a8 a" F0 K: s; J$ K<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 K1 n2 w! }* G5 U/ l2 V<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
& w( G6 L: {- R& c<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& f* w7 H" F4 u1 f- j# j<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 @+ h3 P8 v4 E$ |: d4 V9 h. A<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 e& v9 j9 ?# [% P& ?' p: Q8 }! K<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
+ @, A( T: X/ L5 I( d$ ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
( n' a4 ?! p/ D* Z7 ~3 p+ o  d<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ E5 K* b: {' ~, p" Q' ]<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 H7 X: `* S$ n5 Y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: E2 A9 u/ \  u7 b. z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 @- G6 m3 H8 c( M$ _( j<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( U3 p  t" `* l. F5 U' P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
! h/ m. ^( H8 L* B( m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' B* \# H; `6 R* B! J( O! i" L
我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
$ C, w7 S, m0 R1 @0 g! n3 I
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 F0 J5 x; `4 @) ]: l+ N
这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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3 ?6 s2 V) ?/ V+ u$ \<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>