【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
1 E& s3 r# o5 [. o- y3 E" AThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
) H2 l$ |6 K9 m8 z% ?That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 q- y0 k  {9 D6 Y$ H% a* |From the first moment we met,
# L: h( i" L- a5 [) ?I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( u4 `' z& {1 n6 V! yIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
$ j9 d" H3 `, A+ ~# uI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 b/ ?- B6 @0 z6 bIf today isn’t too late,
. j: N4 T' A# P( KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
7 o: Z- ]5 \* u5 G  X+ FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
7 ?0 ^9 Y2 `1 f# M, lWhy is it so difficult to express?
) ], s" G4 w# y5 R* U, ~I want to confess that I love you,
4 L8 P& ?! `! H6 E5 c0 wBut I never did
5 F) X9 Y2 H" e8 c$ W, NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 ?& f: O* _9 V/ oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 E& |8 k4 M( f- ZEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

5 B3 I4 L9 ?9 I3 H! i6 _% \<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
( J0 z1 d  Y8 r. l" Q2 }<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
" C$ Z1 H2 `" q" a. }<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- J: R7 |3 f. b! j- I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. h- ~; o+ Q/ A+ S, q<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# \3 D7 B  b1 Q0 U  t<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
8 U1 @, _4 Z9 ~, W/ \; ]$ r" \5 u0 f<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- n/ D' n$ W0 ]- z8 _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
, e' i3 K! V) h( N<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 N# [! h! \9 \, u9 f<P>但我不会</P>
' v% m8 `& q; [. l<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ @# @* y9 k7 E$ W<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' o: k2 p! T0 Q$ E<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
  U: `: p" K7 J( @/ x" n; J<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 m) w! q) u; Y1 h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
# J6 G" _7 x/ B- ~. \5 ^" M<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
. C2 K! |' l% l* W<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
% X' u6 t; h+ D- l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
+ g0 S" H+ k5 U<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
  y, v0 s' ~% H; l' P, ?4 |<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
. V3 _3 h7 ]$ ?: r# Q7 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ ?  ]' I; C3 C/ Z' c4 z<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  S4 P2 _8 {& v- N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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. o5 m; N: u9 J, A$ F 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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# ~! I  o0 c+ `. [9 A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>