【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( h3 y/ W. q+ YThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" h+ k( ^9 V5 g7 T$ t! v( kFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 _* b+ f/ I( R3 m4 N  b7 PI would probably know how you feel
' [" T" D9 H+ y1 T4 d+ K) w" wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
+ m  e+ A& O. TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 a6 I8 K9 P4 n0 Z! HIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: h/ [! Y+ ?( \# GI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- x' H# Z2 }4 W1 Y# q8 Z4 |  lEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
5 k$ l/ B  _) W5 [& ~) zI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 G2 A; K/ |# }2 VI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% Y  v2 ]4 G7 O- K2 R3 X" |% i) p& F9 \I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; \, j+ I& n1 y0 g& U! C5 ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" h/ e0 J0 l- c7 G1 }Can I entrust it to you?
* S% M; U+ \9 o# iEntrust my love within your heart
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7 @1 P3 O, R$ q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

4 }9 x) }- E# Z; d; q: r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* u$ {( m/ H4 r- N# l/ z  y7 m7 N; \<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
+ W/ s! z8 X& }! h6 Y<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
' ]# s$ R6 M' p3 \! I1 N3 ~<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 [) V8 F$ X6 D0 o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ f: F0 Y" [: G( [2 s& W. ]<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
' X2 }: q1 b& `$ b' _<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ D) r8 C0 h; A4 \; J0 N1 ~3 B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
( U; T2 J' [8 G1 K  O% y( R/ _<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
% q4 L! Q) o  z  t- Z$ T<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
4 N/ {# {# Q8 S, [" [<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: M' Z- f4 e2 t! k, x% Z2 ~  g  a<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 y& P0 P- N6 d, `% t1 ?9 y0 U<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; e  r9 S+ s% x% j! k<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
5 {1 E: S! N9 A0 U, X  Y5 K' p# j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, D/ J. v+ J# {) i# g6 q: m# B<P>Love… just the word love </P>
+ Q# k; X# `2 ?& `1 d0 T2 ~/ h7 F<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
; R! P/ k3 b# b% L! Z5 M1 `( f2 f7 |<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
+ i" M" L1 ~% k5 Y<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ o# ]/ |4 E2 |9 z<P>But I never did </P>
) V0 z; X& H7 W- J1 p, p* b. A<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# e6 f1 o. j' T7 U" l- }* c<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( `! ^1 P7 M9 \- e1 W2 S<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
- \% y( F. O+ ^" F: Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 T, C- x! q# Y9 Z- [' Q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
" M3 ]/ C# L) W$ k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! i2 F8 Q- O- Y6 T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( B& a* Z* _: L1 b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- m+ I: s. Q) j$ p# |# B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 `9 A# t/ _  B, {* ^% L( T<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- {+ T( l! R( i" a4 ^5 @ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
+ `8 t6 J5 {8 y' Y  K3 y! L
9 F4 I2 ?4 l9 g这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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: P8 Q+ ^- A! y2 k, G2 m3 X4 m<P>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>