【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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6 o1 Z) k; g% T, j' k我另将歌词附在此。
! {8 D# y: F8 A/ yThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 A  m  b/ \! `" ^3 M+ j$ M1 @That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 D# N! |8 |8 L) Z; X7 f1 nFrom the first moment we met,
( y4 x4 J& b! C  H8 TI already loved you with all my heart
4 g3 u$ Q( y7 M8 w( D  RWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 B; l) }% ^& R( o0 q+ Z* KIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) P4 Q! ]' f8 q3 BWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
( q+ {( u; P; E5 I+ G/ f4 F* `If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 ?! a5 r4 S9 \  JCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
8 \6 @& f1 X3 s& A0 d) O+ f5 w4 wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
/ g0 ?+ Y& }1 SBut I never did
. h. D6 f6 F4 Q) G3 y" x" h8 S8 NOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- w% z8 \- z& @% Z/ `7 ]0 L: HEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
& D% f; L5 C, H: C$ yEntrust my love within your heart
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8 |  i: @1 @1 B[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
3 ^- i/ W6 S2 O# o<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 m# L; b* R+ h<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 D0 i0 G+ ?! D# B: \5 J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 l7 y# e" T1 z3 i<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" @0 l2 M6 I% U$ V2 `<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
6 L9 ^* {+ N+ Y& h9 ^7 u5 g2 V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
/ I" ~5 t/ g6 ]8 W& r4 P5 h<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ S) ]0 p* |( ?; J: \<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, v5 ?+ Q3 e$ h$ u) E<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* Z" h9 k0 T  j" J+ f: x<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  l; z1 n1 ]4 }<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 x  J5 B  [. R& X0 Z7 ~# z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; F5 ]2 O# P% |! C<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& o4 @% e+ h" K1 b2 S<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; e* ]) S$ O; d9 a$ a" ]<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
2 D9 p1 j+ E8 q3 \, D8 d<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, [( ?& ^3 D& r( I. {* L9 w: H; c" C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
( K8 v, z/ r5 a! v! o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
& A# a8 K$ h8 T9 |* ?/ j  E# Q/ S' k<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% S: I+ R- `6 c2 _5 ]* S<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- P* W. a# U' P( w4 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  W6 T9 S" r% f0 V& @& _5 Y4 ^- }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% U9 s* ]% f1 H: r- X5 _' D<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ u! E2 i1 p8 n% m; i6 Q9 L<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
( c$ b" l$ k$ g: m  q& f1 r6 ?4 m/ B* @<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; K/ k: E$ o- i) r<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 K, Q1 N4 W% n8 o2 y2 n4 M" _<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. d5 E9 K# q2 `; @5 X9 _7 }) ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' ~" v" p/ I# r) m7 f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) ]8 S8 G4 n, T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 G+ S0 ?! {' x9 H7 U$ Q3 g5 \+ V<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
  J9 d4 q1 Q$ O9 ~: [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ a! E' S9 t$ v) g9 `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 ^9 ]# p+ V. t; d<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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% S; i' Z- N  C) P+ }这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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5 ?; V. M: X; r! H1 S<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ G; r- p4 }. }! D6 z4 i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>