【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
, I$ e- Q$ u% f! o! V7 RWe meet and talk everyday,
9 N% a6 H2 e8 S$ \But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 ~" O. [" I; \% aI would probably know how you feel
2 E$ ^+ d) E  }6 X. |3 vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
  t( P/ S1 z" @4 w1 n+ lI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 i- B8 ?! M4 zEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 f/ m/ C5 ?6 c3 w0 nBut I never did
% O/ @  {3 ]. m& ]/ ]+ ^One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 |# [2 M) f; Q1 u# a# ^/ `* |9 OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; ?5 C' H5 ]1 uEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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) \1 D9 G( G/ e[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
1 J+ k9 I* B: P/ y: d  f; r<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ K0 x) C' y- B5 ^+ \; ]<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# [' Z% b9 Z* F/ K4 p2 |7 Y8 J: V! f<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 y1 ]" q& Z& l; l<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 K2 Z$ M% M! w1 l; {0 P7 w+ ?) Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* o3 S4 M1 P2 T  ?+ ~0 c5 r' b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- f% {) O) d6 f5 X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) l. z" j  d2 [; ~) [6 b1 q# V! T, s- I<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 y6 z* [( b" J, w<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' ~2 g2 S) I$ [8 J& w1 L8 ?<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 ?$ `0 U- D2 ]3 {8 s1 ^<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
0 r; [' d, K- \# A: I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 J9 f  v) ?8 q9 b" |6 W1 `- Q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- [! O9 q8 p, t9 m- h0 P<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
3 |. m# t& h! v: U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 Z/ b+ Q1 `; _1 c+ X  b<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
, s5 C) F: R1 _. l' D1 q* j<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: @* L' ~- \! z7 i<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
4 A! ~! E. m$ |5 C<P>But I never did </P>
) e5 Q6 l' ^2 |7 s' g. u" ?- f1 h8 H% Z5 w<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
3 P$ L$ x4 D' _( b* o0 h9 @<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% r& C) g* U3 h# R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
; W( p) B6 e1 c0 ~: H7 e<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, |3 i* n* O) M' b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 _8 t: V$ G/ d9 e* `0 q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) L5 \! K' O, Q8 o5 J- m. r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# X8 Y2 w. ]3 t1 F( K; Y! \$ E<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  I! V$ @; E! f# r7 l2 d 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>