【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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0 O8 P- d7 c6 @. z8 C我另将歌词附在此。
$ }3 X9 y5 e; O! I) F  b3 _The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
8 H9 w5 p- T, _% k$ o& }4 M/ {That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
6 p' u6 K$ E7 W; H) PFrom the first moment we met,
1 H4 w. Q( R3 rI already loved you with all my heart
0 q  u/ N, q4 c2 ZWe meet and talk everyday,
+ C5 p$ |; B$ ?5 H* `/ j8 K( eBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
3 B5 f; z3 c* Z/ U* B. a. HI would probably know how you feel
9 @+ ^. `$ V* v  V2 o& g9 s. wLove… just the word love
$ @3 _6 {/ @' [8 ]1 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
' h5 z4 V9 q& d& k* Q) IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 Q& f$ Y+ r9 j0 hI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# ~1 r- z  j0 L- g2 `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
' y0 C2 s, d4 `; N$ @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
: _) {4 b; \$ bI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ m3 ^8 V/ C( O( b  j( DOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& ^% Z3 x: F8 Q, t( GIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ l# ^) G( d- G& t+ N( x$ k; RCan I entrust it to you?
" z2 Q' @9 l+ i' I5 g3 G+ XEntrust my love within your heart
* {6 y+ W$ g- \  c! E* KCan I entrust it to you?
' B+ R* r. L4 lEntrust my love within your heart

4 t: L; L8 }4 ?[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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4 q/ M1 S1 J" `8 \7 A4 ]9 V<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, l9 {* I" [) T' h6 @/ [<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 U1 P7 B, ~( ~/ w) M<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
- n2 O9 [9 h0 U1 D" N. }<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
, s( Z% t1 D8 P  K/ y5 X* O' n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& B& D. c. V; z; p% d3 h<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
+ `. K# ?" G9 @. C6 b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, B8 b" G9 m5 {, w8 X/ ?<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
3 a/ E, l( ]0 o' x6 k$ J- P' [! b/ t<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 r! f3 R2 k# |$ z<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
9 G9 C. h7 |) B- m<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 m! w6 @* g: w3 \3 A9 k<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
! j% g3 \4 _  Q, o6 h! U<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; S5 O$ k: [* @8 ]/ c$ [1 D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ ?5 o3 C6 q' |7 s# Q7 }1 f5 J9 V<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ p" H0 }5 p4 }9 w<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
( O2 j/ L+ ?7 e6 N% Y<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
0 }+ s5 {2 j$ c1 E6 O* g, b4 _<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
  |8 @" Y+ j* v! o6 s<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
* V) C$ L/ e5 C8 }<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
( ^5 c1 a( l0 b+ S. {9 M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
" h/ D' o7 j# Q0 d) h<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 F/ d( o; G: |" ]1 U& v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 ^9 }' ?! ]" |# T! V: l+ _9 |<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 `' m; t) Q' B& K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 ^4 f: q1 @3 b3 |. ]3 b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( N: P9 y. E" b$ u<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

* k' W7 S; O% b8 b  Z% ?, [+ n这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

4 z5 O. g1 l/ o- {7 h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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3 N4 t% {. }# }/ l) I<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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6 c' ]: J' f' f+ k3 o<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>