【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
- M8 T% d3 |* c* |/ o1 ?; jThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 L* R- I6 ~: H3 v- |I already loved you with all my heart
: s5 `8 \3 `) \* w3 }$ b) OWe meet and talk everyday,
4 \3 i% u8 v/ [2 B7 d7 z) `6 b" q0 mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" I' N. m) f& ^3 l$ |/ T* |( W9 qIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
: i, J7 }8 A7 H" lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" S2 r/ e" Q- P3 K8 v% {( SI want to confess that I love you,
" o5 C' }% \: I  r: iBut I never did
+ l: ]3 T/ x/ \6 p2 E4 v3 {; p  LOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
$ K: K% N. t9 p/ B: _  ~: XI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% v7 u/ z: k- H( c3 k! p1 {; ^6 KI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 N, K7 g6 g/ x# W: R2 ~Why is it so difficult to express?
0 z* s) s+ _( e$ [% W: I( XI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
  w& a  N' i7 D" I( rOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 ^7 {% ~5 R; Y" d* K3 I" `" ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
4 G% f9 O- n" C4 C2 `; ?- ?( BCan I entrust it to you?
/ Y" n) j+ P4 b" n$ KEntrust my love within your heart
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! t! U5 N  J! R! F* t( v1 r[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! `  y: o# Y3 ^# S: `2 n( Q8 S9 d<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 d; d( m1 [( L3 \% M$ v<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ h% \, k5 ~; }; D4 w<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
( T" ~4 v& \( ]+ I( h( R, a. U4 |<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
5 Z- I" R- f6 r  o<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
* ^! z& K6 \2 n<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
0 O9 `6 B% p9 h! P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
+ r3 c" @  D# {( l<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 j1 ?7 e8 j: |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! _0 _& C) a& }$ ~6 j/ j; ]2 z<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# [  g7 D: d( B% t& \& H. G<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 K+ h! b0 i4 A; n4 \3 B1 r- z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" O' G- `$ E4 U! G<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 D  R: y9 `4 ?: _$ _  P! Y/ W( k: W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
4 o/ I1 ~* }( l) g+ K+ W; U<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! n' M* [( V. E" ~- h9 Q9 l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 W, Y- }3 P. U<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) c- z' v8 `& Q# u6 W+ ]<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
: q/ ~" P; f* a" _<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
5 [0 @) n; ~" B- O: v<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 t2 {  K6 J! v* n- _- Q/ E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) g- [1 W2 `; M<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& K3 ?" X6 c9 A: W" P" }4 \<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ q2 S/ S/ Q4 m3 Z: n8 j$ y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 x; u6 l7 j% u+ H0 O* @<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
9 t5 w& }$ ~" \' y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& y" j( O8 h# _* Y) d2 @8 W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" Q( `2 Y. S3 _0 e6 S<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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% j% ^- i: }- o# c- N这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

( P* M! O% _: R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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6 q6 H6 ^. f7 `<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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; ^( ]' t1 f' I% d& }: o<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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+ `' T, v- R# @* n; x; \+ R: i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>