【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
) {3 m2 E6 d: y5 DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
- Z! i& O5 D0 }( Z  [. i' yFrom the first moment we met,
0 f& n. ~, [  |8 H* ]I already loved you with all my heart
0 H7 E2 \% g9 Y2 c- AWe meet and talk everyday,
4 {  @, g; T# s0 [% g! s" b: ]But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" B, e" v# |- n  C3 g; kIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' |1 {' o4 `5 b) y- `, ^I want to confess that I love you,
. Y2 \  ^) A+ _% d6 l# s- t& hBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 }- Z& _3 K* k1 dIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
5 c) C6 T. `. N7 g3 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: ?1 |& X5 {  v- u. bIf today isn’t too late,
( ]' e9 U$ B- _, @I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ z- J. S- V8 l$ o6 YCan I entrust it to you?
- R# v, |+ ^" @- MEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

! \! G, g2 ?" n# }- O7 g[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

0 S$ \4 n; D& n<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 k4 ?7 e% |0 n% e+ T<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
6 i# Z, L" ?) j  D<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
" V1 h" x! L3 b. ~' {<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
& t4 C9 X9 P$ L5 \: X<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, o0 h5 @+ _" @# ]2 w<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
" m* @3 @9 p# ]2 \<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
% g5 }: a4 C9 k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
, z$ q: U3 o6 ]' R9 ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
& F9 ]! u$ R( H* ^, B3 x<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 d; P% h" U# ?. D4 z/ p  f# r$ m<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
9 J0 S$ e+ l% f9 V* w<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
7 [' g0 b% Z  d" V+ m<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
4 N& `2 w' x/ m; D" @4 o3 l<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 L: I, k; J' D) T7 x. R/ ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) h; C" q7 M0 G# z<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
  V8 t8 j9 L, ~' J. O  a# q7 W; C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
9 t3 V( J: Z/ O" ]4 L! e8 \: k<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 M9 I" D3 W3 y, n8 {8 b" {! d<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! E0 V) s: y) A<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
7 g8 I) R9 m; u* ~8 P' T<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
' `: r1 ]$ Z$ w1 l6 i<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 X+ Q/ U- t! C7 Z- e<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
. q' p- r  y/ c8 c3 t2 a; G  r5 G& m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: v% D6 t& O  Q- }+ L+ ]4 m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 ~' S" X& E7 B8 H+ s<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
' Z: m3 Y2 r" `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 q7 ?' c1 X5 O5 B, T. `/ r<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 C# W; A1 V  d$ M2 G$ \<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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* j* x3 T& [! T" ?6 F 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

5 e9 w/ Q% ^1 ], S9 l  e这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

/ N7 k& ?, J- o( A0 R5 O' }7 o7 i这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>