【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 z( I+ H9 C( u2 NWe meet and talk everyday,
1 r4 |+ |; k$ ]+ iBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
/ f( u: X  V1 l7 i- {, sI would probably know how you feel
: F& ~/ U4 j; ^! b$ OLove… just the word love
1 u9 M6 z& i# k6 u) o* S3 sWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 g: Y3 ^, _9 n4 r1 C& Q% ^( TI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
( B% j/ a, C( b! o! v9 p% YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
* O8 B0 V8 |: A( ?. Z6 y: U/ XCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
1 N- T: ], C8 `( q* k- {+ f  @5 P/ DWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 d# I7 ], [  ?& U& g5 y( K& FIf today isn’t too late,
& g( K. W" o0 \; vI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# X4 ^/ x8 |5 [5 o$ G  J/ WCan I entrust it to you?
+ X1 u: b+ L2 p+ |% g9 bEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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7 R) ?  }0 V  ~, o; R8 z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ m& H# ^3 }) t7 W6 w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* [2 E# H) S. t2 D) a<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
" D  N: F/ B" Q, ~7 e<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
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, v* J7 F/ G& `, w0 T<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
. X# ]4 O4 D$ ~, v# P! F# x3 ?3 A<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, k+ ~, V% \5 G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
) I+ G; [5 o3 l" J: n; k<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
7 f2 n& P4 U. V5 f0 t# [<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, c7 j! u$ s7 R& G<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
7 j; I0 ^* R; \5 G5 Y; ]2 b<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, ~) G( F0 q; y+ n% m. O1 a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) s& \2 F! _. U" m* E1 g<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
) L8 ]7 w+ s8 V* w9 x1 ^) v<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
; j# G) _" A1 A; \<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ E4 T# H( _+ t( K8 d<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
' x, f' d, J/ v8 @<P>但我不会 </P>
# T" ~' R; P  l' w: v3 O9 g<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
8 E: @  M- s! L<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 I  d& U% Y" `& t- v# x3 q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 d& }5 @' E- C5 z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
7 o4 \) r, f9 B0 e/ o' w9 n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 X) J- v$ Y. ^7 C* M# l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 R1 K$ G9 }0 A) F- `<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) A" J3 W6 {7 Y! ]( W2 b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>