【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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) |' C) V! B- w9 w$ u+ w我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
0 S' V4 r1 h6 II already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ `* O# w, w1 v' J; a& f8 h) mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
/ T# u* W! H+ F0 N4 @' r- @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, N& q+ Q" V, E  J, v7 b$ w4 }% ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 E0 k* T0 H/ c$ Q! v8 b8 ?I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% f4 Y- a* C: P# a& |1 r1 ECan I entrust it to you?
( O+ M+ [/ C. G# ZEntrust my love within your heart
& n- o& z' I# mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 K" |) z, v0 r: |0 DBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
' ^) H! O/ R# ~If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* ^" O1 V* p6 g8 J' ?/ EI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 P9 Q' s+ B( ?+ s" E<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* M3 o) t$ O5 ?5 F% P" E' }<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
6 u1 O% G1 n* n: ?+ q& D' f: c  V! r4 H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
8 Z3 u# @& F; Y5 P9 \) i9 B<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
, g; J) X# A; z* H- r1 r. e3 S7 ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
3 C5 y; Y, q- e. U8 {) P. b+ b<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
  G, a/ ^) i1 Q2 Q0 m<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, l& `$ y5 T2 k, P3 g<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 U# k, z" x- k3 x! f<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; h' r$ E# ]. {' d. s<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) O+ |/ J6 z: O5 R, _4 A<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; |6 T' t, y' D% Z7 r8 r<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
3 d1 V3 {& K2 C* |* B  I) {) e5 P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! w5 t8 _  q4 ~) z9 z<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  f0 T0 ^+ Z, h3 l( W<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
4 y8 b* }" ?7 t4 H8 t3 `4 H<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 i' N0 s* b/ p* v! ~<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
9 J) w) g4 _4 I$ x7 F- r<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 s" g  s' D+ A, _1 r, A- p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
; G' _9 x" U$ M4 A+ \. X<P>但我不会 </P>
( \- S1 b8 `' h  b# u9 u# q( n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
8 v9 M  C* U: {3 p<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
( H# @& n7 l. B4 `<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 n$ u* Y# [, ?  _<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( d# e' D1 F7 j  d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& U! @4 j( e9 S# z7 N. W3 X$ g+ x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% x5 G5 t! m  V, r  \! H: p$ G6 ]; r<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( ^9 _& M8 |  B0 Z# N! X* Z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

0 g8 U! ~9 X8 {& F" T9 Y 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

! m! f7 f0 V% g* m0 N- P3 ^. {4 {这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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# r8 c; ~6 \8 M& g( f( L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>