【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
0 P- G6 v0 V/ a8 CThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 ]3 X. B* t# @3 c5 zFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' I+ X: z: {" J, y8 D& g! @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
- z  `$ P# f7 U9 w. d$ `5 b8 M9 gI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
3 Q% ~9 c# @' \. n8 e. ?+ Z. T, ~Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
* \$ r  e' n, U& T' D. bBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 ~2 ^" C7 Y- O. y: v( y- KIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
$ k, y, D0 _7 n- PWhy is it so difficult to express?
3 t% H% u# T; ]) W* vI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
: M( x0 g( k, G  WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 _( A) u: L2 V+ h& ^( tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
' K+ c; j8 |% ]% `6 ]. QCan I entrust it to you?
: i' e7 s( c2 w6 MEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" u5 N8 `0 w$ H% ?
[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

3 n# L) l+ n; T( F" q<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" X4 z  k- C9 T4 W<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
+ k- j+ v3 l- [, @" z0 N<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
. F! M' D: E; P, d<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! x1 M& H0 r) a4 [- e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; p& ]0 L) {# ]! y' p. \  p<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  u; G; p: A1 c3 T$ [<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ Y0 Z0 c2 N1 c% t5 W% D1 f, D' f<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 n+ O! z3 {& m6 Y1 K6 Y<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
2 y  ]$ q3 M* Y8 J" w% A: w; I" o<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
) a  ]: B; B- ~9 j! H  \<P>但我不会</P>
6 U2 S4 w. d, Q2 h  T! L& w( d/ O( {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
% g# R$ g$ t2 T/ M( ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, O% R, _( z& N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 S7 F# H* B$ A% _<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
$ I% i9 r. K9 q! b, `) V<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
% e: f0 y2 @8 |: C% E! m" ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# V+ \/ e! ]7 {6 h5 B8 Y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
' x. Q$ }/ O: t% v0 B# p<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 g8 [8 p$ h4 w0 t$ h6 |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: n$ J8 a* k% _) F7 ?& [% f. s<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
, z( c' G$ |# o5 {<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
, }# l2 O# O! m+ p<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( V" `9 S" r( Y+ L& s' n<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% U5 o$ m7 h' q2 r: c<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% {0 O7 o: G# z  j8 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ y. }: s; o; k' ?  }' l<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, u* `* P0 U+ v<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) v) T" F" {- i: ]<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  H: I) q. t: g8 O) w. o. g<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

  D5 I8 G" ]! q# S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
: l) N2 B5 H& R: N7 c! D7 V
" u6 W$ h2 }9 y这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

5 d1 a, Q# t4 }; F  o/ ?( t& L9 J<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! }! o  O8 y: r: Z. W<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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' |$ N: L5 S8 R; U! U<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>