【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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  n+ |- z1 `4 \  f我另将歌词附在此。
5 ]2 z: D. N7 T& m, W+ M! I0 s. YThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 B  i4 J; b, s# eThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
1 l, t& t; v9 Q2 e4 z9 h1 rI already loved you with all my heart
3 G* U3 F7 ]0 d  ?# jWe meet and talk everyday,
( c9 }4 Z% I9 B! y, L# c; r/ ?But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( z7 A% g, ?' @0 G7 eIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
1 W. a: F8 E$ Q8 a' B1 A) m: bWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
7 ?$ |; P; ^( [+ w4 \5 Y8 ~But I never did
0 z2 Q7 v9 A; o* D( zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
8 J6 f% X& j2 }; c/ o; P" b" oI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
% S1 N( ]) i, h+ @. PI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' x+ X( e4 k$ I+ h' ~. x; g3 {5 jI want to confess that I love you,
- r9 b% \+ d7 ?& |6 V4 v) sBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; n( U) O8 }* FCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
0 e8 I& x3 m$ sCan I entrust it to you?
2 P& r6 j; t& u2 e/ _  f8 g) t; kEntrust my love within your heart
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( n9 _& r' O+ B' @8 t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

" }! l/ D- }. D6 C7 L<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
& |( R6 m: P. @" `. I6 G3 J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, _" X# p# ~2 d0 \* K<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
# J9 }2 i2 q% x. d* y. t<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* O- [( M0 P( A6 {! g9 ^<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
0 M$ N+ N7 j' h- \: p- s$ U<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 h/ l8 F( @$ V; b- N( O3 A<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. {0 C$ O  s2 N" n) I<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
: P& X7 _5 }! l  X* \% e: Q3 R<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
! A; }* w& v0 b* L" f<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ {, ]* l& x9 |4 E" E# l" e<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
2 k! m7 E1 h) z9 V- Q! s<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  R: p( t9 Y1 E( I! Z9 _<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
  a2 ~; B, @% A" _% _<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
( B' v5 f& Y, c# e5 ~<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) V$ a$ W+ X  M. c<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! K$ c, N% V' f<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
( f0 R- F- Q) g' D% x+ x<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
2 X+ p# M) v1 o+ g- b<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, w2 l: I( j( X7 H/ g<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
5 N# g0 J+ S% S1 G6 f( G<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" a$ |3 g! C/ m! `<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
9 \: D% v+ t  c4 O4 [<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 e  @, k  v8 ^9 J+ ~3 Y. Q<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
5 ?$ L% N9 U/ Q( g- e+ ~: S<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
5 V2 i1 t$ a! `+ x9 ^8 R* v' J2 n: g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
, v. W( @1 x  \, ]<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" B/ o) @' R' [6 Q" P<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 q% |$ L! L1 `! E" w<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, h' T7 `4 m" B/ \% W, p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
) Z/ H( z2 A! J<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>