【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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/ }1 Z% Y- e, u* t我另将歌词附在此。
' I( [. q2 Q2 |, w7 |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ U, u9 Z  E# m  u. Z9 Z6 j, CThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 U/ F1 e7 `+ s& F/ m8 mFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
1 \( y6 U, F7 v5 l: p& ]) p6 h1 SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
& U3 B. k8 Q* sLove… just the word love
0 c* J! E1 b6 ^& ~6 w6 W) o6 L" y6 PWhy is it so difficult to express?
* A) W- P( x: i7 \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) X7 k# z% |! }' \. e3 ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 p6 X" A4 S& I/ l9 {1 _! \Can I entrust it to you?
, d( o. s2 F" h( p! l1 g  Y  bEntrust my love within your heart
; I. ?; ^$ [( ~& K4 TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 i0 H3 h# ]/ I8 v# jI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
) D7 d6 j" i; i6 w0 O% QI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) V( j% Q; ]; d$ J  ]4 b8 eI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
# V7 U8 q$ [- F2 I2 T( OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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0 E+ {* p5 A% C<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ I. h! [- u3 C<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 [- ~7 L; p7 S* {9 d<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- e+ O/ I$ i1 `. t7 B<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
/ |) f" P! q) D<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
) `6 u6 V. b+ ]. `<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
7 J/ A2 p. |: p* k<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
, F8 x8 f: \& x<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
1 |) Q' T, v; b% R1 ^<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
# b: ^/ Y+ s* Q/ {# Z& M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
' i+ ?+ Y* j/ W+ B<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' g3 K5 W; N, I<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% ]  F% ~$ M& M8 z! J( P  _* D<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
5 `  W1 n1 c1 k  O: w7 s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 t6 Q6 l7 e7 h# E% a5 v4 P) m# Z+ }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 K0 y& v6 Z3 U- m' V, _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
- n8 r7 _; u. \7 P  Q<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
8 {0 N  |  J- Y3 O7 D, F0 {. T<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% z. U4 i. y! q8 A* t; _<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 }4 f! }( X6 s% X6 f2 Z' V3 b<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 B, i6 Y$ D8 G5 `* h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" u8 a$ D6 A8 o- r; p& \/ i4 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" A: k1 M# ?; I7 [; t2 \  j1 K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
/ E! C. V; {0 k- E) F( W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
3 T$ n& N7 f# k$ [$ ~, T* S5 H<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

8 L9 z; X3 e+ x7 q. N: c) q% | 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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; B) m8 a/ B0 q/ o5 G这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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! u9 H" F! U' {8 R% c0 N<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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  o; S2 p) h5 V: G+ X0 l. }<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>