【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
) F( g: a; a% j" M$ GFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
4 T* F$ S9 K1 sIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
! U1 S( K6 \  y5 xI would probably know how you feel
0 e/ ^  c% u( SLove… just the word love
: }$ V1 W7 v! W8 z& u2 G0 JWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 m# h  e% o3 V" r# x* v  o+ [I want to confess that I love you,
! u3 }4 E. Z2 P( M5 [* C: G; s7 _But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' \7 K) p; r  E% d' eI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- v3 \6 a) A7 ~0 |I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
  C  m$ b/ Y1 d- L1 HEntrust my love within your heart
& D( E& Q& f5 xLove… just the word love
! P* Z6 o" O2 D8 QWhy is it so difficult to express?
' v; k& a- x3 ]0 d7 o% r, JI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
8 W: ]4 J. N; e( fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
& {- V$ E+ J+ mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
7 }/ k0 R' A# I$ s) X1 OEntrust my love within your heart

& U! q/ V! _8 D( C/ Z- P" p[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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+ m  l& d4 R- n& c6 S! y<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ O; w0 m: _: B) j<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
# Y0 l: D% _6 p4 H/ _' u. B<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 i3 b) I% }0 ?# ^<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 d& y7 [- c; P9 S$ v9 @<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
1 F: Y; f: h; `! Z<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
; o+ R5 _& O) L& M7 Q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- W8 P& J9 `& a<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
2 ^- v; h5 }% F9 x& g# n<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
6 D$ \6 x- ]1 C$ U<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 w/ f5 b- j( @: D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
7 ]9 m) Z% g9 C8 q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
. S7 X1 u% z$ H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 x- b. ^# C' a: h; c' J<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 z. F* T: ~2 e* Q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ J3 D1 L2 C1 m- s4 Z* D4 h<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 L/ [$ p0 f6 X- R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
1 @0 b" @; q& W/ |7 _( |<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
) Q5 H) p( H. q. K+ A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
+ J1 Y- e7 `$ I& _, ^5 d8 ~6 n<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 X: a; V1 J2 n- ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  O$ w. j; Y2 i/ R' ?& ?# K5 }" s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
1 G( M4 V; e0 r' B( s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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1 D7 N+ m" p- s( K  I. n% b' v6 C- F这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) p( ~! T2 d0 M9 H1 m8 `这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 ?- \6 y" x: C7 |<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>