【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
7 g2 h9 D6 f9 C' n. cThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
% @  O4 i9 B9 C+ `* [From the first moment we met,
5 Q3 C3 Y2 l( G7 \6 S  J# u/ O# }I already loved you with all my heart
+ _' Q( R' |7 ~We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 g5 M/ \( W& y) x, W% u( rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( ~  g; E4 a5 i: a' ~  gI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
+ Q+ l& m3 |# {) t# p" P, v- pWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 c5 {0 p( ]1 G. ?4 b" q( E! qI want to confess that I love you,
9 ?4 Q3 j. n. s6 l5 pBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 ^  d2 Q% p# ~- f. Y* vI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" V  F9 t- N2 R0 ECan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
4 ]' R' `. d' hWhy is it so difficult to express?
7 D) s5 t4 i% B" ~5 f$ L8 p6 II want to confess that I love you,
/ e0 V* n; g& \# g0 U3 x. ]But I never did
( d/ [) n' }9 W* d& g7 y) X. bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
( y/ L- g8 D5 c" {Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
' Y! D" w* _4 x7 j- }Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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. @% [4 Q- i& g' b! z<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- Q: Y( f! `7 [9 y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 ^& ~- ?# G* _" u& U7 G- J5 |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
; F+ P* n: W3 B8 k<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ S. n' a9 d6 d3 U& t( r<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, ~. v2 O6 {, h+ ]( h6 a) N' o, y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
6 C  }0 a6 p' b, G' [<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ V/ B4 J$ f; \; R; u. l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
! \& K1 g2 H; I2 ?+ W) D<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
* t: v" ^7 d1 p9 {, p<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ z4 C- l+ Q( G0 t$ a5 k<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ q; Q7 f- ~" s( d<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
: I5 {: C; B3 m% Z0 Q; Z& _& Z" }<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  S& M$ i: _% q0 B<P>但我不会</P>
/ r6 m% G5 t' X; r<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
0 [1 j$ Y/ C* g, A  h& M4 O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
9 d1 z  F4 M5 z# _: O<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ E5 t2 V$ s  r7 A1 d: V3 ^; H<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 @" z2 X) r# G9 x3 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
# N; S+ g* A0 z6 h6 R7 \<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
# K5 P* f3 W7 e) [' O<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 i' p8 B3 D; J<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* ]. E$ O7 t5 |8 S0 C! `. j  i9 P8 b<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
- F+ e  o8 j/ d9 ]6 L<P>But I never did </P>
- v1 F4 ]2 Y2 S" B$ s! g! w5 w<P>但我不会 </P>
2 j3 C  R1 U4 A, ]$ x# S4 M: ^<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; `3 O& F, c2 C<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' h6 }# X* z3 |  D/ P  d+ G* ^<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
* w/ U* H& R. _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
0 P2 [5 Y) ^4 i5 O. a7 o$ F<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
" m% C2 P. L; E+ o& f<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 Y4 ]" ~2 w# R! P/ y1 A<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 W& w- S5 F' T* C' q9 q这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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7 G) ^9 Z. Y/ k+ S/ i<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* Q' P1 D# o( p/ q+ L* R<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>