【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
" M/ W. h% |8 k( j' JFrom the first moment we met,
5 `- l0 ?2 t/ _+ ?/ S* II already loved you with all my heart
& Y, W2 ]& U: x: k8 A( F; R9 X+ jWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
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One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 s9 M: O& s- p) [9 f* S- MI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ @$ Q# n2 ^4 I' Z1 TI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
9 }1 e- W; d; G: qCan I entrust it to you?
4 |+ h/ V" C7 o! {Entrust my love within your heart
' D) R4 b0 w; e8 r& h- jLove… just the word love
4 A0 d- x. w5 v5 @$ a9 qWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 l1 w# A9 |) Y% K/ u, N5 PI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
; ^& V3 H% n( @' u3 tIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
9 _+ l9 v, R6 ?: [: H8 w9 I& o8 v# ^Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 w4 Y1 |8 A7 U" w* Q% C- C<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
, U3 U# m/ V! X" W$ e2 O<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
; f8 o0 y  B+ N( `8 z3 T) {<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 j$ }6 s3 Y) k1 |4 Q/ C<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
: ~5 @* [6 t+ G, q$ G0 D. w<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
4 L( h5 e/ G& ~  @<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  y: N: ?, [$ s  W<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 D6 t# @  I! P$ x  v* Z<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 M  Z7 }8 M3 b7 R; {# ~5 l<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% ?4 Q4 o* J$ F; ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
1 {+ e" a2 x0 S# ^* T2 V+ L<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
" d4 F9 R' H2 A3 b8 G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
8 y1 S. g5 L) V+ ?( X' Y<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
) l& z- d! z4 R( U7 {3 P. U<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 n0 z5 |  \5 X. K4 U1 h! M<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 K" I" P- T+ d( c- v  U<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
% {9 M, Y$ j  ~* D<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. f. S! U+ k8 o0 E2 o$ T+ a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) b+ _% ~- [- G6 i8 d" |2 j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
5 E7 n  K0 F* s% B8 Q<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
2 E9 R% _) V0 H' J<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
! [7 E9 G1 `- @1 j9 @1 c/ c3 w<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) g" C! W, X: @0 m<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
+ A0 \+ C2 l5 D+ q9 h<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 u+ E) g- ?! K' ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- ~- L1 _, M. z9 [* d; a0 L% J<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
$ I5 P) t; j, b* M+ w5 B. s<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>