【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* ~2 @' [% O7 f- b8 W- @The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
7 Z  J1 c7 k* s! t+ EThe sky is happy down to its soul
+ s( E- K/ `$ V% Q" j4 aWith the moon kissing it every night
: }6 k% O/ H2 l/ BSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
: ~$ Z& L3 `! [My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
5 n  x9 K- O* S- O* [; F4 \Every other word you utter is love
& [7 @  Y! r. m( QI really want to know just how much you love me
: \% [  i9 R. _, i( p: O+ J. wI love you I love you with all my heart
; r( K4 i! p# h& m& uNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
: Q: X7 W3 b' N& N) y. @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
( r7 d6 M, G( T8 f3 l4 vI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
; a: g. e; b9 V( CI’m still filled with fear
( Z- x" k) z  A3 J+ a8 WYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  H7 _1 n4 y' j: o6 Q( II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
& s# y0 @7 n% j0 \8 cYour speech can’t even keep up with it
5 s* `! j/ Q$ D0 [$ S8 R9 U4 XIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
: c4 g$ m# q* t) t<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 a7 n+ h3 w7 a' \9 G) T* Z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
' M$ W  c" _6 f9 p* G& r<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
7 _0 C! p0 J6 \1 v, v6 E* `, M<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ ~5 w1 j/ t6 U1 ~8 _<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
  \- O1 H: V2 l: {" X<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
5 m! H) T7 z' }# ~<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
; ]0 z% W, g3 Q! `% U0 V* h+ `5 W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 a6 L' e1 Z0 I+ s  j4 A3 T<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
5 n7 G/ q7 v3 y8 j! Y<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
$ Y! X! l7 S  f# d" u' x<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
) [# ]" L9 m/ b" A5 G<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: ?# R( Z6 Z& j8 C$ h0 _<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
6 r/ I" m- x+ h& j2 Q, d' m<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ w" K2 r: b2 z/ }; N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 i) V; w8 K" E) Z0 S<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ V& B+ K( K  K/ m0 Z1 D<P>I regret not dying</P>
7 y3 ?8 R6 x9 x& ~& s% {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 ^" a9 Y; x1 g) A- o  W5 T7 k<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
8 T6 Y' r. e% l- K1 r7 S  T% H' z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! B, {  `( ^5 C; u/ S+ `<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
( \: j$ W. ~- f9 Y! g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
/ C$ I8 n. J* f3 N<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

( W  o9 N6 t  j, |$ P/ N 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% B2 u! I( p6 H6 h<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>