【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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4 \+ C4 M9 [$ F# vThe moonlight is shining brightly,
* D+ D' w6 q& u+ @Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
9 a$ S6 g9 A3 b7 A3 RThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
" y. A: k; M, ^+ `1 NWith the moon kissing it every night
. t4 R" c2 A) _5 @; c' JSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
8 a; M0 s+ z# Y3 \) k( `1 V( @Every other word you utter is love
, Y! O! p4 c8 X+ V* u0 G# f/ F* XI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
% D& Q% X% X" I2 C& i3 O: m) CNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
! G% O* l6 F! b8 _- r3 ]' k! hThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: T9 f8 U2 n1 AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
  v. N4 O% [& V: e9 fI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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) @' T( ]% ~3 f/ i3 i: l<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
9 y) c' ]1 y5 H<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
) q- j" h8 E; d, _. Y3 A, K5 k<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
- t4 q9 o$ R; B' L" v( [, i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
3 w5 J; r+ w+ `, |$ v<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
( i1 g+ s9 C; q6 n! \<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
. J/ X+ i# z2 Y<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
4 J$ V  X  k- X& M6 ~2 x3 e. {<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
: p1 ^! ]( [& g) {( }% E<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
; ]# ?. k1 ]# M* g5 m<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) X7 n+ }- k1 H/ d8 k/ [<P>你无需担心</P>
2 G; ]  r3 ^+ Y9 K% b<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
, Q# l  F" s% K- V0 O. t<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
: i) |% s3 c+ m" M. A, ]9 Z<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
" n( ^& u3 L' i$ d2 [) b<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
7 U/ ?* U7 t5 U<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 ^# q9 k7 o& ~% T<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
, |( m0 J. ]9 z; K( W7 Y+ w<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
/ o' m: Q8 E4 a/ e<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
0 x+ p2 z' q% \$ N<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& x* R! v( `, }0 e& k<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. F+ |" H0 [9 Q& B) k8 o- [3 [5 a! ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  ?4 k: J* y* ]4 R* I$ j1 ^<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
" }% f+ o$ d- d7 K0 }<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# K5 w4 t5 J; l( H: g; ~$ ^2 _5 i<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
. f( ]% R+ I# U$ X: J$ W. }<P>I only have one tongue </P>
  G; X  i5 F0 v& X3 n<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
* g/ U# x" c+ u# h5 \, X) Q<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
, A, z5 |( M6 X<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
4 c5 g) i) e4 ~; N7 L0 F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
0 R) d# B7 S8 X& a! }% |/ O<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
9 y/ Z6 s: |8 N! T( n8 ?<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>