【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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3 g( O5 x0 J9 g. @" Y歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
0 R. [6 z# {- u0 v9 [; g2 Y2 gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
/ |" n! t6 x: E6 S+ z7 BWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
7 M. S3 E5 p2 TThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 `. O9 g3 I/ J% l0 o2 k' i: c" t- `It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
! D, z& Q$ ?$ P+ p+ d3 X7 JYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
8 _. L  V6 ^  t$ VI really want to know just how much you love me
+ R' v- o' I5 }, p- rI love you I love you with all my heart
. S( L& V2 b' v" R; JNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
3 N2 S8 }( E! r6 U; TThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) C4 z: @  I2 }( q/ s$ {I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
2 ~1 M: e! }% V- y, A0 c% cI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 |0 q! |! b) r# g7 N& xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
2 H5 Z; J. O& h: i1 nIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
6 k$ L) o6 o4 n; w5 c/ ^Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
7 z5 _) ^- \) i0 S' c<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  B9 M( [9 E& W3 z% n<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
& s: X; y$ E$ C2 \9 ]8 n7 V<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. t# [) V; L' X% l" b9 O<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
" O0 x; v% z8 Q- {5 f<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
# m. O, U3 N' f3 y<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 G( K, T8 o( `' o3 {<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
. l; ~5 g* S: T( i<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% Y1 N. f# x9 O1 Q) c<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
! x, ]1 t/ f- ]- W; A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
* G4 t) d, p; U4 H# P$ L4 L- X<P>你无需担心</P>
; {2 f0 m% v% S9 u) l<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
+ l% W$ b6 c" c<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
! l, E% Q4 L* {% Z$ l/ q$ a<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
; H/ f. L. S. K1 K' X8 p- d<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
8 p  c9 T/ J: G! e4 {' H$ C6 v( u<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ Q9 R. j4 o- f# v- h8 Z<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 E$ Q" y! X8 I0 z8 q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
4 k2 }0 X' v7 x4 q0 X' B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ `. h) n6 j+ a( d<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
, H# ^  N4 z! P3 f4 D0 b<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) P# x6 @3 K* B7 \$ @' _7 `, o<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
9 u6 v% q( N8 h+ b, n9 ?1 O' B<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ l. |0 ^% M8 ^& [<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 `6 L, {* f7 _1 {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
/ P1 m4 a9 v6 i  c4 j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
4 g9 ?! l9 B! y: h4 _<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
( R: O$ R$ s- E3 R3 N<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
8 Y  v& W  U7 O/ Z/ ^; ?% K7 P<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
, D+ @- c8 x8 o$ \<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& c' r1 R6 @2 d$ D% Y& K7 F: Q$ g<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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- f8 x( d  W) [' v我请你剖开它

  _0 i! v5 _8 S7 l# ] 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 b: E) S$ ]) ~( a# {3 X+ p& U<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>