【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
  u/ Z/ W$ O* J+ C) j; m" P% yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
2 j( W) X8 n- D9 P& P* s/ hMaking the sky glitter like gold,
" b% O$ L6 q4 e% \) Q+ G4 XWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
8 T2 Y. i" {, ?* V1 S: XWith the moon kissing it every night
2 P6 Q3 b8 b3 R, r& l, X6 p$ TSeeing the sky content with its love
9 m! X3 I8 O7 F! HIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
  }' C% ~( S  Q; Q" lEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# T$ {( e0 G) K+ P6 D( J  e3 G0 dCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
$ U6 I+ x# v& b6 rThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
& y5 ^* i% ]. n7 s# H8 E8 I4 iI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
& J" v' ]# A  N0 vWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
3 B* W( p% e# c3 \<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
* n) l9 b3 O5 w<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
+ a+ f; F% y1 b<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
8 x1 r$ u; K9 [1 {+ m<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
. P9 B& w0 x1 y<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
4 ]) }" q- s) p$ ^# f% I<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 J' R2 p* ]6 a/ l' V* c<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
* z. n2 X4 X% a9 L" k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 Z0 ^  n+ L  f0 S<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
1 S4 w: Q+ M% b: `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
8 X- e8 a3 T, ]' g<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 S) j% ^0 r# X* [& x0 i<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: D7 V8 c9 H& T) j6 X<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
, e& Z) M  Y% x+ Q  j7 B<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 H& @) R$ ]$ c6 O$ ~+ M$ v# H, f<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
: a1 f  q1 m. Y5 N1 }  c<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
" a2 h; @$ q% J; T7 A<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
8 o: O6 }2 S( y# M/ F" G: W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
% ~  ^: w/ A% r+ y$ }! O<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
/ O" h1 f- u* o/ b$ s" c<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. N( x; q4 E0 q; x# C: y<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. _4 m9 m6 i/ z* P! q. D<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  b0 e% _5 z" O7 h. y<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
+ L( x1 K+ v8 E<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ A: Q/ _. F1 p# \% B0 @<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
; y% f: H2 L5 v+ {<P>I only have one tongue </P>
4 `: f6 C+ `' U' [<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
& n4 @; |0 ^3 m<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
' I! D+ p) K- S0 U; n<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
) B8 p- T' B" Q' ~7 m<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( H  Y4 B0 N# ^" P) C2 _, q! d<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
1 X6 d  L6 a, F<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 `# {" V2 R6 |* q: N<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>