【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
  L/ I- u: b# x) iThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 E0 {: [) z2 n( VThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- s7 I" C4 u8 W, n, B0 U5 @But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
# c+ y9 S/ w* UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
7 `7 L' C  @) B; `, ^1 p% iWhy is it so difficult to express?
. R" I( m+ e; q9 z! EI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 x/ T+ {+ T" u/ CIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! _% H; b6 n5 P0 K8 U  |) M  j: yCan I entrust it to you?
8 Q" e/ G2 M4 J' a! @, CEntrust my love within your heart
, f# L1 P& o1 xLove… just the word love
" Y0 Z7 H) R6 F$ d: I5 _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: A  `  d$ V  n1 @/ mIf today isn’t too late,
5 }6 K$ O$ {  q2 t, KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' @' B9 p( Y' ~; f8 n  Q# oI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
; K$ e4 C$ n& M$ ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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! C3 O; @7 L+ |) j4 k- A[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
* m" |8 l4 _/ }& r, X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
* W- I" M  M6 B/ F) J( T<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
" q9 e3 F" b9 T$ q5 \<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
2 T" V5 t1 o1 m# [2 T<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 V; E3 |$ ^! ^4 q<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
/ P( {2 f3 |% s3 J<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
; R) D( c. M, p  g! c- \<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
% t8 I- s% ^9 G& g<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  i% V& ^( {$ H3 A( ?6 M<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ z% D. w2 V) O8 z; ?& J<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
9 p$ `/ q8 h  Z4 m<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
5 A. T# H3 f. ?$ l* }<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
  E/ t5 U) e3 V. q% Z6 |<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
6 Y& F6 e0 h0 Y; J& E4 a<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* I5 c; q7 }, B- u* E( @5 |; i<P>我想说我爱你</P>
! B! K( ^' B- i<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
- Y. _  g3 k6 V* J' @( ^8 n. c. E4 [# i<P>但我不会</P>
) O3 l8 l1 _* X, W, }6 W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* d# }3 ^. E3 o/ p1 |<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
( x7 m: a: z7 F$ ^+ E9 m/ m; f<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. J9 h; [2 J  V- c7 I! [8 \- b/ E<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 d2 h/ n& n0 l, K. b<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
: s& A+ W* ?# O7 c+ R3 b<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* `" F7 _! `( Q1 c) Q% }8 ?! ^* d3 d<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ Q. `8 {* d3 K" k# t' h4 \3 f, D<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
4 f  ]/ x5 Z& x- J! [8 r<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 M# Q& w  d& ]" \9 @<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. R9 q% c" G3 L$ N4 n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
- f% ~; E( ]  C( n<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
4 W3 b; c. S. a" p9 Z3 V0 P) T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  P( w0 z# I" ~' v2 }2 }8 `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
$ [1 o( g+ G+ @/ }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
6 ]+ c# P1 t+ [& ^, H5 K  `<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
' I( j5 ^9 ^$ Y2 Z0 N8 {2 {, \7 |<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

  W3 u7 A8 J' b 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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7 u( l! w' C" W. |0 N5 m这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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. h5 u$ G/ ^1 Z, c' Y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>