【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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, h& u2 E! D( h% `3 c& x/ k& I我另将歌词附在此。
. y9 H' |$ c  e) l" ]# fThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
0 o$ `' y( t  M! N0 V9 SFrom the first moment we met,
* |# M6 q* R( [8 r$ `+ ZI already loved you with all my heart
( i4 d0 r! D1 |0 {% k6 T: IWe meet and talk everyday,
4 P; s* R& M( `, K( [' M/ ~6 mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 w: Q5 b  P, rIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 R- w. {4 t: {/ u$ OWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 h% M+ n$ |2 N9 s7 mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
8 k! y! `' b+ ?* s. ?/ eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- K! T# G, X! o2 MIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 S# S4 b4 G5 c# ^Can I entrust it to you?
8 ^& q+ S6 U' ^+ g8 xEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
& O% P' Q$ a0 E+ d; hIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
- ~: C- k: `4 M6 j. C" zEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
4 B3 P- ~3 V4 ]% U6 rEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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9 z6 {% }; M# `$ e! l, W2 s<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
4 f& W# ]/ z3 w5 u9 Z/ e<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
, u) i/ D6 @( S& z5 ^) q# T7 b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
3 \* ^! F8 r- Q. i<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
9 T# a" i7 q8 s: ^<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
  ~7 k' _7 D" B+ D: a+ ]" S$ O" D$ E<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
: }' @% x- n  C2 T<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
; P# j, F3 d; Y% G<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
! ]3 A+ p  ~6 i! v6 B5 F<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 S7 A5 U' G+ c0 V! Z& d<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
3 E$ `; C* O1 A( z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
, ^& P: c  K- S& H; L; m/ b  u8 v<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! t' N4 p+ p+ k<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
+ E* }  E% L" |9 g% i7 K<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
4 A( H8 x& k+ m1 A  s7 |<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# C- u7 m8 d% Q4 O<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- X. g, F" D) S( k6 G<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  L& {1 Y" u) |7 J7 a<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
2 O& ]6 h" b! V, U2 Y- h<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
0 r! I) N1 x; m: \; B$ i7 Y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
" P/ R% ~2 u& f# S<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, P: S; [$ N* O1 C. P2 Z, t* l8 a<P>But I never did </P>
( o" E1 B3 g' Q$ P4 O8 O1 x<P>但我不会 </P>
+ ^8 {+ {  c2 x  K" a0 s/ x+ a3 |$ E, x8 t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& K6 N* |! t% w+ x4 w! k<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% y3 [" F8 i5 O. p& E; d<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! N! I- H- P% J<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 @& @3 ~' `" _<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
! g* K) [; ^3 Y; o: c9 o! H# |- `<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) y' u0 b  a8 [2 n- H0 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
& P  W5 b: `9 l) T( P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 [0 u% G7 A2 J5 C0 g. _4 ^<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
2 q' m& s0 X5 J4 f, r" i<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

3 O# `$ \5 _: P# }9 f( J2 @4 G  u 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* X8 s" N( J1 C: m这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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/ t  {5 r2 F, Y1 j; l: w# X$ J<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>