【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
' J: y% m2 q8 u' xBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
- I' w8 ^* F! ?) LIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
$ [2 I0 B9 X, _I want to confess that I love you,
  X: p6 p: J2 j8 i- ~# GBut I never did
% F+ g* R6 U3 M7 ^/ XOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
/ ^, M. ], w! pI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
9 x; K2 @1 @  q/ |But I never did
0 p0 `  r% p' Z  j& BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ G  m* o( _0 ?( i8 h: [  j" L" rIf today isn’t too late,
5 b; c4 k4 I; YI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 E2 ?. x! d6 i4 z4 wI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" A$ m7 p1 C8 K9 IEntrust my love within your heart
, ~  d6 i# P5 ]2 B% oCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
) t. b2 r6 K8 j5 F3 x: [<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; H0 v( Q9 d0 t9 K, W% M<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 h1 L; k& J! b# F( g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 p  g7 {1 m$ J8 V<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
# F7 G' b) E0 M; z4 F<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, k; z% m8 ]' M, g. u6 w<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
& F' ?1 u/ a+ q/ p5 s2 G<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
/ w! [/ c3 \. b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: b* j6 t- _3 u: [$ B& i: M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
2 S/ M2 i# C  K2 X. a! \* P) w2 R<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
  V5 F9 G% U  W5 Y' v<P>但我不会</P>
! ]1 Q- G# c. x1 f5 ^$ m<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
: P, q1 R0 A: f* d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
3 W; [; k9 v  R+ G<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( w$ f& B" z( u3 V; z. O<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 g( \. M* D+ A) |5 y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. W# k2 U# s% ]0 h  p! r  p<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
' [+ s+ w3 y0 t* j<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
6 V6 ]. }# R& [$ b  `/ J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
3 J! Y2 S4 g0 l% F% i8 z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
$ I7 p6 Q! @6 S5 j% l<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# G% }; ~7 Y' m9 ?, U/ o; F+ o<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ c. C; C5 N0 L$ b  q9 m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
5 D: x4 A: V& H8 D5 M; o1 X/ P) k<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' `, V% i; G& o- A 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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, u6 t. w5 I7 m) R  X/ H7 L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>