【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
; Y: K( A6 {5 P7 Y, W4 cThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
3 }9 l+ U+ n- M% V. S! b7 gI already loved you with all my heart
+ C9 J' K0 R! t; n- ^! ~We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
( d' K8 q. u- g! {: NIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
' w% H& |/ Q- lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% N9 `. E: q9 _% Y/ X' K9 }6 vI want to confess that I love you,
: T7 I$ F( H7 }( O; g9 C2 oBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
. ^9 }" N, c4 |Entrust my love within your heart
. U' @: w7 _' \, h8 @: t# aLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
' ~4 V- w# `6 E- II want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ f0 s8 W6 }8 g# Z/ D' eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
5 ^; y- A1 g9 o+ ]: P% }8 DIf today isn’t too late,
9 ^+ w1 g6 I  k9 ^' EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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* C) W/ h, ?/ Z( Y) i! V, H+ D+ F2 c<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
6 m, Q* E0 o( Y* O<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
% R+ `3 L6 U4 `/ C2 O0 I. ]; b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
2 G) N4 h8 K) O! M! ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ q; ^6 W4 N  D8 `5 C; _$ W<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
) O, `4 _! t" s! l<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
1 G+ D. X6 c' M/ `, D% m<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
2 `* C( V. n6 f<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
3 x6 \0 P' Y: t$ {, Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
0 x  U/ `& j/ O/ z5 a# T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
2 |2 k1 x: A, y: I/ G8 L$ `<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 L. s6 ~( M* |$ t2 X- w<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
/ |8 n! E3 l1 ?$ [5 p! S<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 u+ X( q, ^8 k7 O; C( j<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& {. u+ I$ G+ X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; ?  `0 g0 s) C9 l6 _<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# K' D% [; u# x) g, l. E; c; v  Y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- A& J$ Y% W! D1 _7 N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
, g! ]: X( `. f1 P% q7 r/ k<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 }5 y5 A  X) D7 ]; F# Z; q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
( V5 U. O" u6 k<P>Love… just the word love </P>
; q7 z7 r7 h" o& N8 K<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: F/ P9 V8 |% B; r( C; u<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
+ }1 u9 q5 ~1 l. x/ K9 o/ ?8 n<P>But I never did </P>
, C  y: B1 q" Y. u& g<P>但我不会 </P>
4 j. c- m! R6 a. {3 V5 U$ X/ G<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% ?* U, Q- A4 _( ?' l( [# a0 q  |<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" N' B- l$ @8 ]* R8 w- g( t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 E' e3 b* V' d) ~& h<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( c: {) H9 D( v$ g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
7 L4 H5 M  r; Z* P<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, K% m% }( l/ Q 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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9 B; X" w6 m' p9 W: V0 T9 p这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: D% R; T5 @+ Y6 u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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; u- A+ h" S3 e# p# n/ x<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>