【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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0 N* r6 Q: W* N7 `4 h1 ?我另将歌词附在此。
  G6 r/ l& p6 H0 ]+ [8 H1 ?% o) EThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
( Z# ?! T& W$ c* v8 HThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
, B3 `+ m- v4 R( b- mFrom the first moment we met,
& N# C* C  }  U$ l2 YI already loved you with all my heart
3 L. A) H3 n% U) e$ ]0 q  r( P9 }7 iWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
6 t  {. S9 Y, h; FIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
5 g9 R; ?5 d' h, G, ~Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
6 r3 `: h8 T4 }  LI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ c% j! J2 \* j" LCan I entrust it to you?
/ m; p6 n$ ]; kEntrust my love within your heart
* G; d5 J! r( V& q9 L0 [Love… just the word love
# s8 l/ T. s( v$ m( V" yWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 Z: C* A% N7 U' m& ?I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
" ?1 E( @+ F# b+ ]( d2 qEntrust my love within your heart
& }) o9 D  }- E# ^1 dCan I entrust it to you?
$ c0 l% S' s6 o" r0 m4 R: TEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

$ k# Z& X+ c! W& u* J' {<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
, l$ v0 \6 V* t% ]) l7 `0 L<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
3 d9 @5 G5 D1 j3 W<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' z4 B1 L9 b: T: C# H<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
+ d. @- {5 A7 t: A. X; K9 a% ^7 h<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  [( H9 v+ ]/ ^/ l( p<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
; ^8 ^( x  X- T5 W7 e% ~* t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
7 d: @( L6 M+ E, c6 b: y# [<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
; i5 ^0 o' g! g- i4 N! S<P>但我不会</P>
5 j* `" o- R$ v& t8 C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 _) S- u9 F& U+ b$ w0 ?<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
6 m" f/ B4 |/ D<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* o; @9 a9 P: A/ Q* L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 W$ O7 p* A) X& c1 |9 @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
1 p3 n7 r3 U+ f4 l& P<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
. N. T2 P4 u7 m$ W0 i# ~) M<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
7 K( l) k7 l* ?5 Q3 s<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* U- C; n" O+ }( L- l<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 T" d' i+ q6 J# _6 n<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  L& H3 W% ]% A; }  j6 Q* C<P>但我不会 </P>
1 _6 |( n$ s( @9 e: |4 V$ y<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
7 v: V: a$ C5 W/ F7 x& f<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! S% H5 f# M" T4 {3 R<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 D4 Z( h$ i* l! w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 J2 P+ [4 E9 W<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 L2 k5 ~. [4 I/ G+ o* q0 _  l- U<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, f& l8 H# O& Y# Y( K<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. T% r3 y" P8 z9 a# q<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) ?8 ^) F! \1 J 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

# G& E) c- G# {9 ^2 J. A. ~" a这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

* A4 O7 B5 {+ o: ]) z这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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! Z1 b' c" |+ [# G" ?' M<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>