【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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- U) w, A5 F2 S% A  Z& b我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
* v4 ?" Y2 E* [$ q5 iWe meet and talk everyday,
. p8 t, T8 ^9 R- qBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ p" i% n% F% u; c, `2 kLove… just the word love
4 D/ w% s, U3 Q- {) K! S+ }4 FWhy is it so difficult to express?
0 ?9 m, H" }/ _2 {5 mI want to confess that I love you,
' c$ ]& J/ x. }' O* vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; }& u2 |) _* p2 U6 V3 C1 M% gEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
' @" f5 D* l# l0 S. Q% ]- T/ {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 H- j3 |7 r  H0 S$ mIf today isn’t too late,
; ?5 |. t  v4 \  M+ U7 u& `+ _I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
4 x6 Q3 n% J2 C! YEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 _6 t6 W+ ^5 b+ |<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
! H5 T8 V4 O: Z2 t<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
0 n( q, K  r: u+ ^# x<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
5 c, S) D0 g0 ~+ r7 s<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
- E6 H# M  T6 `& o* m0 t3 h<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
9 a1 \# O) y) T8 B, w<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
- t1 u( e7 `( V: P* \4 P1 W<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 [7 i5 n9 G( I* N<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 s2 g1 z; v' z$ \1 j  X( m<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
* u7 m( i* c9 r1 K4 m<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, o# ^7 b9 F+ t' F8 ^5 c<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
8 u0 }- _! W" \( Y<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
8 N% W1 m, S8 j6 N  F/ E<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: t7 b, j6 j8 S" ?# v3 [: w<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' n6 Y% X$ t/ @<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 D+ D. C* M5 k3 r' O7 _<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 c1 m& Q* B; ]7 V( F<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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<P>Love… just the word love </P>
! n+ I) h; t. }9 X9 z  x<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
7 R& K8 L4 H! D- Q9 E3 p<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
8 d5 ]8 R9 x1 s  L, G+ L- O<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  S/ Z/ r6 {8 i: P0 ?9 D<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
$ Q" z' a& |6 E) _- a& g; k6 [; ?" ?+ D3 V/ E<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 y" v3 n: r. Y& S/ `* ~- B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ O3 X# l7 `6 ~( [1 P<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
& B- Y% b  n; `8 l$ _<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 D1 h8 z. M+ M" Y2 ~  K<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 j  _/ A* l/ n' W8 M<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% ~3 K3 I- p+ O- e' E8 N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: s/ M! V& J* F1 ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 x7 Y1 I" K) E4 b( c<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: c/ Z' l# h7 {# O; C8 H- w, B4 |, j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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/ [1 V& a$ y( a/ T<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>