【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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3 ~$ ^5 y/ ^3 S5 D/ O我另将歌词附在此。
0 v% N3 q' {  d" I: z2 {+ DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ l* o8 A( E( PI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
9 V9 `" U8 s9 }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
: k8 B6 g- `/ y  d) l) L' EWhy is it so difficult to express?
& r6 C7 U( Q8 y& d0 A) {8 o! |$ GI want to confess that I love you,
+ S$ m' B% L. [8 _8 b/ ~6 m2 k% W) eBut I never did
. G" t) U( h: [9 K+ F9 WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) R% @  A" L+ l; e+ z9 x/ VI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 T; y7 |. ?/ i, g& O. j- D+ nCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
* ^2 ^! ~9 F* ILove… just the word love
+ W3 d; P9 i3 K3 cWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
, D  V. s3 Q! p1 yBut I never did
2 ?+ ?6 _& `3 f2 c3 x+ hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- ^1 R; {  a/ `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
' Q, _2 P3 T7 f9 R0 h, XEntrust my love within your heart
9 h* [$ @: r7 J+ d0 \4 k! R8 {( _Can I entrust it to you?
: z# L! B6 m& F1 b( m5 P% l* uEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" _! f1 a/ p7 @6 I<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
9 ?: L/ o: t) c5 V- U& C9 _! ~<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
2 h8 u+ C3 K6 ^! I; {4 j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
+ \( ?1 N5 ]5 {. n7 p& c# l<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
9 y3 B1 o. ^4 }3 r8 g/ }+ D5 f! t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
3 V' p8 K% V5 b<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 M9 H9 D4 h! Q5 P  ?<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
, @# O+ \0 W/ z1 e0 C+ O( G1 K<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
. ?8 z. ]3 Y; K( N' a5 X<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) c2 G& n( P1 Y3 r& P9 \6 x- [9 f<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
* e# h$ M$ ^2 G( q2 i<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% F* \+ Y6 G2 p' l% n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 E9 A! ~3 _8 W9 K; @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
' Q3 s' m9 C) |" `2 R' F<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
4 L* L( m5 e# \4 q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
$ O& W4 n  L9 `+ k/ m& K4 C/ U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
' u  m1 [3 h8 B1 e; T<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( ^# \" w$ k: `% Y<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
6 r, _' `) ?5 K! w( j" @' T<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
9 @6 y" S/ @7 p7 @1 ^<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ m) s9 z6 R% b<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% R& N+ I, y3 J<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' h/ q: k  E6 A" z<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* F3 K: J( [. Z- [0 t<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% b& f  x0 {$ f& Y( T3 f<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
1 ?' C) ?# a7 U: v4 \) L<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
' |" T2 p8 k/ |+ [" I* B4 o* p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 r9 A# {& i% ]1 F  j3 h( q<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
' i& t6 }" F( u<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  `1 W& }) O# w<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
- J, i- n& X6 {, S1 r' [- d<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
* {$ W$ w( o: f1 M- p0 f<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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9 H* \8 f  O, @2 |) z" a<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" o# j& n  {% G# X9 r/ F3 p<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>