【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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# e" I$ r+ |" e- P9 I我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
2 e# N& Z# _6 |; X$ R5 Y8 t0 NThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
$ N- [0 Z& o$ GI already loved you with all my heart
9 U  R, F% r* s: {7 j# Y0 P- eWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
& V0 j4 w/ T' |$ L9 f& h  SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
( j1 r6 P/ _8 iLove… just the word love
% I! P* l8 b5 tWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
$ Z+ C) U' S# _2 k$ E  `7 e. vBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
' X- U. g8 z0 ~I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
& a# h( k; J* }) y$ sEntrust my love within your heart
% W- r: s! s/ c' b1 s9 j! sLove… just the word love
1 a( @  ?2 Y9 d% T  \* [! v" AWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
% h8 C( ?- {* p1 }* S2 qOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) W: [7 q8 n  J1 v+ F* AIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
5 Q& O: d/ O/ h/ _9 Y5 NI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
/ Z3 F3 A! _$ h4 cCan I entrust it to you?
! M" h6 B0 ]& K3 _8 A6 `Entrust my love within your heart
7 ?3 M3 [1 k  J; Z) xCan I entrust it to you?
3 u. `6 D6 x4 X& fEntrust my love within your heart
# S% D7 D5 b" b0 g# ^/ q% y
8 C  f+ \' h8 S' p  R8 S" D3 `$ t[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
' C; @# L& i5 r6 U<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
- E. K2 V5 O0 r: q. V0 ]<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# D  q. [$ R% h2 W<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
+ R; ^$ {: U7 j  p4 E<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
) g7 C0 k9 }! Q<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ b, P. B; j9 O' e<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
% C. c% |+ X4 s+ S  }$ l* s<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
9 T6 ~( m' s# s$ G6 ?/ E2 A) b6 b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
6 a. k. a$ t) Y: D' J$ @0 O  W<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
0 B" w. A/ _9 O2 [% j<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
; ]9 S( i3 Q% `0 `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 _- ]) \" z' g) F' W' b7 m- C1 h<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* S3 g) o: J/ o0 O" j8 ^<P>但我不会</P>
- X" P: J, x) }: `" B$ W<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
* U/ |. x8 E6 S4 U6 v4 J# ~<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
5 B3 j7 t- J: o; C+ ~" N<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) r4 K: j: n2 B<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# r6 Q6 r: \6 S0 d<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: }" ]* t9 b8 r( k( Z: e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
7 f/ D: i' ~' [: y<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
+ I9 E/ T# W- Q9 [' @; \& M) U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 j1 h" r4 r( ^4 o8 g2 y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
. v6 B/ {% O2 w1 e6 N! C' ^<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
0 a/ h, F. D( m2 R3 ~<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 R( r* k7 V/ m7 U<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
9 k$ f- z: ?" c2 R5 M<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ k8 e$ a: ]0 b3 ~<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
4 q1 G5 q5 l  J, u6 ]<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
/ |' {9 m  _: {% B$ e<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) I7 \, ~1 M5 e3 a3 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
9 c/ F% m$ W0 d. D- b6 q* L<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
6 q  D& [$ G8 V$ W<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 L; p( v0 L) I# ^/ F
0 k$ v% {1 p- \( n9 {& n 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

9 i3 Y. W% ?( Q6 Z9 [# h9 ~: K) Y这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

- A# e& I$ \( T$ F0 {4 J<P>

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 @9 W7 K5 ~$ A! E3 Z$ `" K<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* `# u7 l5 {8 W* q$ i<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>